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adventure time.. the player's story
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in the mushroom war. a not very handsome grown man was among the rubble. looking at the giant green mushroom in the distance.
[player system activated]
Will it move into an apocalyptic world?
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No está mal la historia pero parece que le falta mucho espíritu para que la obra tenga más unión con el público y no es por ser grosero pero parece que se apresuró demasiado a mejorar y checar al personaje pero es bueno no increíble pero bueno
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I liked the story, despite some inconsistencies, really interesting, I wish you had informed that it is a multiversal journey, I'm not a big fan of this type of travel story but I can swallow it, I hope it doesn't take too long to get back to adventure time.