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Penulis: LORD_LUMI

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One day a young boy by the name of Ray Arakawa was coming home from school when he sees the weirdest thing...a giant golden streak of light in the distance...as he watches this, he failed to notice a certain mysterious truck was coming his way...within seconds he was on thrown metres away losing consciousness.

As he wakes up he sees myriads of colours and a man in the purest white clothing with an inconceivably big beard...he realised that he was no longer in the land of the living.

This is my first work, hope you enjoy.

The cover isn't owned by me.

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Stone -- Power stone

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dragonmage124

A mix of soul land manhua (since big sasuage uncle becomes a smelly tofu maker not a sasuage food system master), system, and self insert mc with plot armor that reduces intelligence of smart old people ....grandmaster became dumber tossing op mc into the team when he can beat them all solo....arena became dumb he jumps 2 realms with ease solo and they do not think he his hiding his rank nor have they banned him since whenever he fights he wins thus they can not do any gambles to make money from his defeat and only make money from normal ticket sales meaning they get nothing but time wasting to have him fight since any gambler will bet on his win due to his undefeated record thus a source of funds went away for each fight he takes part in...not to mention he is somehow getting 2 realm higher fighters then his shown rank the arena sets fights by your realm so a rank 30 could fight a rank 39 but will not fight a rank 40....all high ranking spirit masters have poor senses since rank 26 tang san can notice something off about him with less mental power then a rank 40 but the rank 70+ around him seem to not notice anything ...even more so with spirit hall trying to control the land plot armor made mc some great business owner that controls a good chunk of trade and they have not tried to kill the powerful kid not with them...ya not happening for a rank 60 to seal so much business from old businesses and many clans without any backer or many 10s of years solo even more so when it was only said that he helped hunt beast and did a little blacksmithing so his wealth should not be that great to be able to toss it like nothing ... Started well then drained fast due to plot armor cultivation and lack of simple backstroy information seaches about the source novel..

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Pripriri

It's good start but Mc purpose of reincarnating In this world is just to help the main cast and the upgrade of the system is just so stupid there's no benefits at all and he is not using his aging skill when his rings got 10k age.he wasted 7 years for nothing and I think this friendship thing novels is just not for me coz I don't really like fc mc that goes to other novels just for the sake of making main cast life easier. Som3 people may like this kind of novels but for me I already read alot of fanfics like this that make me always drop the novel.. And it feels like the Mc likes solving original Mc problems haixt what a letdown

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Majeh7

keep up the hard work and don't listing to haters ..............................................................................................

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Titus17
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RAghavX

Its a good fan fic which will not dissapont you se it *ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaqaqnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnffffffffffffffffiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiioccccccccxxxxxx

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Alisha10onten

Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? 😀 love it 😍

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pan39
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YourGrandFather

I don't now a thing about 'Elder Scroll'..... 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂

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19Pirateking95

Great. For. Xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxx0pxpxpxpcpzhklnnjaksklxp. Xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxx0pxpxpxpcpzhklnnjaksklxp

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Zoraida7

Awesome MC, I want to know what other worlds he would be traveling. Will there be any romance with anyone or will he stay single? 😊😊😊 Please I am dieing of curiosity.

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EijiSeishuu

in sypnosis "No One 17 and Under Admitted" why mc doesn't have a Girlfriend...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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richonisy

This is one of the best fanfics I've seen on webnovel. There are also no time skips that are 3-5 years and instead there are a lot of small timeskips that keep the flow of the story natural and the MC's increase of strength more realistic.

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EmbarrassedEdge

It's good, you should read it. NO, seriously stop reading this review, just go read the chapters. Why are you still here? Go read the novel. Are you still here? Then don't forget to use power stone ..

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StressedByHW

The story is alright, I gave it a try because I love the original novel and because of its high rating but there’s a lot of things that I’m and some other are not a fan of and that is the mc getting overpowered but nerfed, the original mc and the side character are getting more love from the author than the mc here himself, I don’t really recommend this if you like author that doesn’t nurf mc and make him literally help everyone, I also recommend if your ok with mc helping other people while they kinda don’t do anything for the mc and overpowered mc that gets a nurf. Thats all I have to say

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MrFlyingBoat

Woaaa... More more !!!! Finally i fund some fanfic doluo dalu, omg broo !!! Thx for update !!! I still waiting next chapter, and please dont dropped this novel 😍😍😍😍

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NAMI_SWAAAAAN

My fav DD fanfic.I recommend you guys to read it, its amazing .👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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