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A God at the Shinobi World
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Young criminal dies murdered and ends up being sent to the Shinobi world with divine-level cheating. Let it be clear that this author who speaks to you does not have any of the characters from the anime/manga Naruto and only my OCs can be attributed to me. Please excuse me for not being able to create an original universe for the time being, but I hope you enjoy, read, comment and enjoy the top class fap material (in my opinion) that I wrote here.
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although the story is good, the character design of the main character is bad. He should just work towards his goals, and trying to pity and helping the original characters.
I'm shameless at this level, so what? But seriously, I think this work is really good and as I'm focusing on it, things will be more stable here. I plan to focus on this book for now and will rewrite my other stories when this one is complete. Please read it and let me know what you think...