3Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Tulis ulasan
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I'm shameless at this level, so what? But seriously, I think this work is really good and as I'm focusing on it, things will be more stable here. I plan to focus on this book for now and will rewrite my other stories when this one is complete. Please read it and let me know what you think...
although the story is good, the character design of the main character is bad. He should just work towards his goals, and trying to pity and helping the original characters.
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I'm shameless at this level, so what? But seriously, I think this work is really good and as I'm focusing on it, things will be more stable here. I plan to focus on this book for now and will rewrite my other stories when this one is complete. Please read it and let me know what you think...
although the story is good, the character design of the main character is bad. He should just work towards his goals, and trying to pity and helping the original characters.