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This story is simply wonderful! Every time new chapters are posted I get more excited! β‘ I'm really looking forward to reading moreβ‘β‘β‘ β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘
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After reading the other reviews, I came to the understanding that grammer was an issue, which was only further cemented when I read your first chapter. I recommend you using grammerly to fix the grammatical errors, and you can inturn learn from the mistakes the tool points out to you. Best of fortunes to you!
I like the energy that you are giving off, Iβm here for the long haul and am putting my faith that this is the beginning of great things to come for you.
As the author I give myself 5 star This is my first fan-fic i have always wanted to write a fan-fic about GOT i will continue this and when it reaches 100ch i will also write another fan-fic on HOTD
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This story is simply wonderful! Every time new chapters are posted I get more excited! β‘ I'm really looking forward to reading moreβ‘β‘β‘ β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘
ΠΡΠΈΠ³ΠΈΠ½Π°Π»ΡΠ½Π°Ρ Π·Π°Π²ΡΠ·ΠΊΠ° ΠΈ Π½Π΅ΡΡΠ°Π½Π΄Π°ΡΡΠ½ΠΎΠ΅ ΡΠ°Π·Π²ΠΈΡΠΈΠ΅ ΡΡΠΆΠ΅ΡΠ° Π²Π΅ΡΡΠΌΠ° ΠΏΠΎΡΠ°Π΄ΠΎΠ²Π°Π»ΠΈ. ΠΡΠΎΠ΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅ Π² ΡΠΎΠΌ ΠΆΠ΅ Π΄ΡΡ Π΅ ΠΈ ΡΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π·Π° ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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After reading the other reviews, I came to the understanding that grammer was an issue, which was only further cemented when I read your first chapter. I recommend you using grammerly to fix the grammatical errors, and you can inturn learn from the mistakes the tool points out to you. Best of fortunes to you!
I like the energy that you are giving off, Iβm here for the long haul and am putting my faith that this is the beginning of great things to come for you.
As the author I give myself 5 star This is my first fan-fic i have always wanted to write a fan-fic about GOT i will continue this and when it reaches 100ch i will also write another fan-fic on HOTD