Amal_Alappat

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2019-10-20 Bergabung Global
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Amal_Alappat
Amal_Alappat
1 months ago
Posted

Personally I really love the rewrite. I just hope the author continues it and does not drop it. It fixes most of the issues.

Amal_Alappat
Amal_Alappat
1 years ago
Posted

I liked the story till the last few chapters. The way he gave superpowers to his enemies was dumb in my opinion. Also he created AI and left it to others. Kryptonite may exist here and we have seen many people best Superman.Good work till now. Hope you don't drop it.

Amal_Alappat
Amal_Alappat
1 years ago
Posted

Although initially I didn't expect much from this fic. It developed nicely. I hope this doesn't get dropped. Continue the good work 👍

Amal_Alappat
Amal_Alappat
2 years ago
Posted

It is my personal opinion that the training and getting stronger part is the most interesting part of a fic. The power ups keep audience hooked. This fic mostly concentrate on romance so much that the training part is minimal at best.

Amal_Alappat
Amal_Alappat
Amal_Alappat
2 years ago
Posted

The story has potential.I personally think that becoming vassal of the starks would kill the mood.Although odin telling him to take the crown when ready gives me hope. Also when odin tells that there are vikings in GOT I thought it would be ironborn or wildling. I would have liked to see mc start as a wildling and make his way up.