Harry Potter: Instant Kill

It’s nice, it’s got a few iffy sections where alterations to canon are fairly slipshod, though there’s still some bearing to them, my biggest complaint would be the happy little conveniences that happen to allow MC to have future wives I would assume, as it’s learned that there’s some law that MC must have a wife for each house he is heir or lord to... so this is essentially a future harem fic… But either way… it’s otherwise pleasant, there’s nothing overtly off putting enough about any of the mistakes that would make someone stop reading outright, at least to me… and to be fair I do turn my brain off when I read…

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