X-Force: Beyond Omega

LV 12

NunuXD

The story is good and has potential, but from the 15 chapters that the novel have, 7 chapters are just him dating Jean or doing thing with her. I know the synopsis said that the novel will have harem, but with only Jean we already have just half of the plot, what will happen when he really have a harem? We will have 1 plot chapter and 10 chapters of him dating and interacting with the girls? Not even mentioning that this Jean is just an OC character with her powers and appearance, as her personality has nothing related to the real Jean Gray...

LV 2

Damian_Gold

is he a hero, villain or anti hero..........................................................................................................................

LV 14

MellowFellow

I know your greatness, good grammar, nice plot, im happy for this new story. So don't drop it please. Like pretty please!

LV 1

DaoistFnrIrp

Muy buena historia Bro 👍 No puedo esperar para leer el próximo capítulo ...................................................................

LV 4

TheSlumberingWolf

Solid fanfic, nuff said.

LV 1

Oleg_Nikitin

Очень интересно и захватывающе, жду продолжение. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

Madhurya_Porush

awesome novel and I really like the characters they have depth and the interaction is wonderful I really liked your writing style

LV 4

toshisero

until latest ch 21 good fic with good action, romance and smut

LV 13

I_was_bored

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LV 3

Yash_Kumar_Jha

nice man i say it is one of the best novel involving x men as other novels don't dk just to x men and only show important one not everyone

LV 15

Teial

So far a 4 star since the 7 chapters that were out isn't much to go on, but it's good, so far. Liked another work of this author and so far i'm liking this one.

LV 2

Agent_BJ

early review so you don't drop it 😎😎 .hehe

LV 4

Flakito_Mio

this is a great book , You're doing a fantastic job .

LV 4

i_like_catwoman

interesting concept and i hope you will focus on character development and world development and not make it rushed

LV 12

Vitor_Lindo

Tanto potencial indo para o lixo ele tem o poder do All For One mas não usa que lixo pode pegar os poder de todos os mutantes mas não faz e que nem uma cópia ---- kkkkkk cada capítulo e uma agonia de ler vendo o protagonista tão lixo e pq ele tem meta-conhecimento das HQs dos mangas e dos filmes mas mesmo assim AFF decepções

LV 2

DARKSAINT_2023

only thing missing is chapters [img=update]

LV 4

Timepass_

😤😤😤😤 Don't you dare to drop, would like if the uploading speed would be fast and does Mc can give other people powers permanently or temporarily I can't understand.

LV 1

Darkiling

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