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A great work by an author that seems to know how to write a great story since the beginning. The good points: Firstly the pacing of the story is fast and not boring I love how it is written without too much useless words Great worldbuiling and powerscaling Fast update for chapters The bad points: Hypocrite and xenophobic mc I know that he seems to have an personality change since the day he obtains his overpowered legacy that it is too repeatable and boring Secondary CD and the FL don't have a proper développement and long développement for exemple in Hunter Academy:Revenge of the weakest the main cast (even secondary characters) evolves and change as the story progresses realistically And finally the romance is just meh without substance Overall it's a very good novel but can be so much improved to be an masterpiece
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the story is great, and everything is fine, but until chapter 44, there are no 18+ as mentioned, and some words are spelt wrong. There is nothing else I noticed until here i will keep you updated when I reach 100 or so[img=recommend]
I love your book and how it has developed so far. You have also given hints for a general direction ( otherworlds and godhood) and hope you go through with it. Its been a nice ride and hope i see it to the end. My best wishes to you author hope your healthy and wish you the best.
My biggest issue with this Novel is the protagonist has no colour. This is his second life but I couldn't tell you or rather the author has not really portrayed who he is. He is a psychopath in certain chapters, He is an angel in other chapters. Second issue with the novel is I do not see where the novel is going. Will the novel be based on Ophelias world or what? Third, the power scaling is going to be an issue later on I can tell. The protagonist is already too OP that I can't see him losing no matter what. They already introduced a hero candidate who is weak so they can't later introduce hero candidates who are insanely Op because it wouldn't make sense.
the book is great and all but come on,why is the mc such a pushover with women,like he loses all his braincells.to the point it doesn't even make sense and just makes him look pathetic getting pushed around.at this point the harem just seems unnecessary.
after some reviews i was doubtful if it would actually be that good,but glad i gave it a chance.though the cringe dialogues do irritate sometimes.i mean i get that it's the legacy effects but come on,no need to make him that cringe.still a good story though
I remember reading back this, it was a good read. Very nice, I am planning to re read it back. This story kept me up through college, it really is a good read.
great book I just massed buy all the chapters after reading the free ones great job glad to see another good novel to keep reading
What can I say? of course, it's a wonderful book. The author didn't fail to deliver. Three chapters in and I can already see a lot of potential. Lol, honestly. I don't even know what I'm saying. The novel is epic, a must read! Cool MC wonderful plot Do not, yes. Don't leave without checking this out
Author kun has done an amazing job so far I like how straightforward the MC is and how he's slowly becoming overpowered, I usually don't read novels that much but Depressed Mage did an amazing work here, keep up the good work man, though increase the upload speed if you can, I'm curious how all this play out to the end.
ich liebe diese Art Bücher Übersetzungen die Stimmen das passt alles ich liebe diese Bücher zu lesen
So far great story. MC is OP but his existence doesn’t break the story. Great world building and relationship building.
I liked this book.. mc is straightforward. story line is good as well. hopefully more good chapters will come
It's a nice story and I'm really looking forward to it...in all honesty I would love it in all possibility if the ml is given more power and advantage
So far great story. MC is OP but his existence doesn’t break the story. Great world building and relationship building. There are evil plots of course but you don’t have to wait 100 chapters for a minor antagonist to be beaten. Author is active and responds and engages with readers. Overall a great read.
This story, at first to me, seemed like a few others I have read. I am glad I was wrong and right. This story has fun, relatable characters with the perfect fantasy backdrop and plenty of fun fights. The stories twists and turns make it a great read. I picked this one up and look forward to every chapter that comes out. If you like a story that has a fun, powerful MC, this is your story, and even if it's not, this is still a great story. I can't wait for more.
Upon reading, I thoroughly enjoyed it. The only criticism I can give is that the main character tends not to have to work that hard in order to get what he wants. It just falls into his lap. That wasn't the case when it started. For me, this has started to breed a little boredom, which is alleviated temporarily by the moments of revenge.
It basically goes down the list of my personally hated tropes: seeing into the future, clones that are not of one mind, power scaling too inconsistent, minds that are treated as separate. It's an okay story as long you do not mind the risk of being cheated on by yourself.
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For starters, I am thoroughly enjoying the story, thank you! next on the stars" your writing could be better, though that may be because of a language barrier, it can be breaking to the suspension of disbelief, the stability of updates I gave 5 stars because I just got caught up to the end of where you are currently. Story development is good, not great but we are on webnovel, not trying to publish to an editor for print, hell I don't even give jks manga or solo leveling 5 and they are both at anime stage with their stories, it's not you but the level of professionalism will never be there, the story is made to be ongoing for too long, which is a great thing. I like your characters, some don't feel as fleshed out as they could be, but we just met a lot of them and others only get so much print space, I would also get a notebook and keep the character files in that or quick reference, you mess them up alot in the last few chapters moreso specifically sage and jade. the world isn't super well built but we are still in a forty mile radius so a lot of room for improvement. Thank you again for a good story.
a very intriguing plot, it's light hearted yet can be dark when needed. that's what I feel though
This Book is Amazing! Here's why:😅☝️ The Good Stuff:🥞 -Overpowered MC?: Check!✔ -Loser Mc?: Nope, the MC in this story is really cool and I think you'd love❌ him. -Really good cast?:Also check!✔ -Plot that would make you scream for the next chapter? AKA addictive storyline?: Check, check, And check!✔✔✔ -Potential Harem?: Maybe. We'll just have to wait and find out.⁉️ The Bad/ Annoying Stuff: ❌ -Hate for no reason: In this novel the MC is hated for alot of stuff and often finds himself in really bad situations. Some of it can be a bit repetitive and annoying, but if you can live with that you're going to enjoy this I promise you.❌ Overall it's an awesome book, and if you like any of these criteria I'm sure you would enjoy it too.
A man with no interest in the opposite sex gets a harem. As far as I've read (chapter 278) has yet to express a genuine interest in them, kissed even one of them (he kissed a hero that wasn't part of his harem), or even thought about actual love. 7 women and they may as well not exist. Dragon Pride won't allow teenage hormones? At least at the start of the story he seemed to genuinely care about others and get flushed when a woman hugged him but when he is considered an adult he is a eunuch. You give a man a harem at least imply that they are interested in the opposite sex and act of feelings and hormones. The most unbelievable part isn't the powers of a God. It's that you wrote a teenager that wasn't horny. I don't need sex, i need relationship progression. if you aren't gonna have actual relationships in the story don't start a harem. sorry I get worked up when relationships go nowhere.
A great work by an author that seems to know how to write a great story since the beginning. The good points: Firstly the pacing of the story is fast and not boring I love how it is written without too much useless words Great worldbuiling and powerscaling Fast update for chapters The bad points: Hypocrite and xenophobic mc I know that he seems to have an personality change since the day he obtains his overpowered legacy that it is too repeatable and boring Secondary CD and the FL don't have a proper développement and long développement for exemple in Hunter Academy:Revenge of the weakest the main cast (even secondary characters) evolves and change as the story progresses realistically And finally the romance is just meh without substance Overall it's a very good novel but can be so much improved to be an masterpiece
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the story is great, and everything is fine, but until chapter 44, there are no 18+ as mentioned, and some words are spelt wrong. There is nothing else I noticed until here i will keep you updated when I reach 100 or so[img=recommend]
I love your book and how it has developed so far. You have also given hints for a general direction ( otherworlds and godhood) and hope you go through with it. Its been a nice ride and hope i see it to the end. My best wishes to you author hope your healthy and wish you the best.
My biggest issue with this Novel is the protagonist has no colour. This is his second life but I couldn't tell you or rather the author has not really portrayed who he is. He is a psychopath in certain chapters, He is an angel in other chapters. Second issue with the novel is I do not see where the novel is going. Will the novel be based on Ophelias world or what? Third, the power scaling is going to be an issue later on I can tell. The protagonist is already too OP that I can't see him losing no matter what. They already introduced a hero candidate who is weak so they can't later introduce hero candidates who are insanely Op because it wouldn't make sense.
the book is great and all but come on,why is the mc such a pushover with women,like he loses all his braincells.to the point it doesn't even make sense and just makes him look pathetic getting pushed around.at this point the harem just seems unnecessary.
after some reviews i was doubtful if it would actually be that good,but glad i gave it a chance.though the cringe dialogues do irritate sometimes.i mean i get that it's the legacy effects but come on,no need to make him that cringe.still a good story though
I remember reading back this, it was a good read. Very nice, I am planning to re read it back. This story kept me up through college, it really is a good read.
great book I just massed buy all the chapters after reading the free ones great job glad to see another good novel to keep reading
What can I say? of course, it's a wonderful book. The author didn't fail to deliver. Three chapters in and I can already see a lot of potential. Lol, honestly. I don't even know what I'm saying. The novel is epic, a must read! Cool MC wonderful plot Do not, yes. Don't leave without checking this out
Author kun has done an amazing job so far I like how straightforward the MC is and how he's slowly becoming overpowered, I usually don't read novels that much but Depressed Mage did an amazing work here, keep up the good work man, though increase the upload speed if you can, I'm curious how all this play out to the end.
ich liebe diese Art Bücher Übersetzungen die Stimmen das passt alles ich liebe diese Bücher zu lesen
So far great story. MC is OP but his existence doesn’t break the story. Great world building and relationship building.
I liked this book.. mc is straightforward. story line is good as well. hopefully more good chapters will come
It's a nice story and I'm really looking forward to it...in all honesty I would love it in all possibility if the ml is given more power and advantage
So far great story. MC is OP but his existence doesn’t break the story. Great world building and relationship building. There are evil plots of course but you don’t have to wait 100 chapters for a minor antagonist to be beaten. Author is active and responds and engages with readers. Overall a great read.
This story, at first to me, seemed like a few others I have read. I am glad I was wrong and right. This story has fun, relatable characters with the perfect fantasy backdrop and plenty of fun fights. The stories twists and turns make it a great read. I picked this one up and look forward to every chapter that comes out. If you like a story that has a fun, powerful MC, this is your story, and even if it's not, this is still a great story. I can't wait for more.
Upon reading, I thoroughly enjoyed it. The only criticism I can give is that the main character tends not to have to work that hard in order to get what he wants. It just falls into his lap. That wasn't the case when it started. For me, this has started to breed a little boredom, which is alleviated temporarily by the moments of revenge.
It basically goes down the list of my personally hated tropes: seeing into the future, clones that are not of one mind, power scaling too inconsistent, minds that are treated as separate. It's an okay story as long you do not mind the risk of being cheated on by yourself.
Membuka SPOILER For starters, I am thoroughly enjoying the story, thank you! next on the stars" your writing could be better, though that may be because of a language barrier, it can be breaking to the suspension of disbelief, the stability of updates I gave 5 stars because I just got caught up to the end of where you are currently. Story development is good, not great but we are on webnovel, not trying to publish to an editor for print, hell I don't even give jks manga or solo leveling 5 and they are both at anime stage with their stories, it's not you but the level of professionalism will never be there, the story is made to be ongoing for too long, which is a great thing. I like your characters, some don't feel as fleshed out as they could be, but we just met a lot of them and others only get so much print space, I would also get a notebook and keep the character files in that or quick reference, you mess them up alot in the last few chapters moreso specifically sage and jade. the world isn't super well built but we are still in a forty mile radius so a lot of room for improvement. Thank you again for a good story.
a very intriguing plot, it's light hearted yet can be dark when needed. that's what I feel though
This Book is Amazing! Here's why:😅☝️ The Good Stuff:🥞 -Overpowered MC?: Check!✔ -Loser Mc?: Nope, the MC in this story is really cool and I think you'd love❌ him. -Really good cast?:Also check!✔ -Plot that would make you scream for the next chapter? AKA addictive storyline?: Check, check, And check!✔✔✔ -Potential Harem?: Maybe. We'll just have to wait and find out.⁉️ The Bad/ Annoying Stuff: ❌ -Hate for no reason: In this novel the MC is hated for alot of stuff and often finds himself in really bad situations. Some of it can be a bit repetitive and annoying, but if you can live with that you're going to enjoy this I promise you.❌ Overall it's an awesome book, and if you like any of these criteria I'm sure you would enjoy it too.
A man with no interest in the opposite sex gets a harem. As far as I've read (chapter 278) has yet to express a genuine interest in them, kissed even one of them (he kissed a hero that wasn't part of his harem), or even thought about actual love. 7 women and they may as well not exist. Dragon Pride won't allow teenage hormones? At least at the start of the story he seemed to genuinely care about others and get flushed when a woman hugged him but when he is considered an adult he is a eunuch. You give a man a harem at least imply that they are interested in the opposite sex and act of feelings and hormones. The most unbelievable part isn't the powers of a God. It's that you wrote a teenager that wasn't horny. I don't need sex, i need relationship progression. if you aren't gonna have actual relationships in the story don't start a harem. sorry I get worked up when relationships go nowhere.