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I stopped by for the Eastern Fantasy, and I stayed for the system, because damn, that is a very unique take. My systems are far too cliche in comparison; I truly have many areas to improve. Anywho, I have only read a few chapters, but I can tell that this book has unlimited potential. It is written extremely well, has an interesting premise, and delivers well on that premise. I can't say much for characters just yet, but I bet they will be constructed just as well. Give this book a try, good friends!
It’s good but too slow based it’s nearly 40 chapters and the mc is just taking a test to be a disciple 😪
I like the story, especially the part of him being a vampire in a cultivation world, I think i haven’t seen that before. Pls don’t drop it
A plot driven eastern fantasy cultivation story that follows Li Yun as the protagonist. No face slapping, no young master. Only story, plot and cultivation that will keep you guessing what happens next. Somethings I want to clarify :- Mc is going to be strong. You might as well call him overpowered mc but it won't happen in a span of 10-20 chaps. It's a plot driven story so everything will take time to happen. The first 50 chapters are kind of slow but it introduced a lot of things and sets the base for the story that follows so PLEASE READ IT TILL CHAPTER 60 before you decide to quit. Lastly thank you for giving my novel a try. I truly appreciate it.
I stopped by for the Eastern Fantasy, and I stayed for the system, because damn, that is a very unique take. My systems are far too cliche in comparison; I truly have many areas to improve. Anywho, I have only read a few chapters, but I can tell that this book has unlimited potential. It is written extremely well, has an interesting premise, and delivers well on that premise. I can't say much for characters just yet, but I bet they will be constructed just as well. Give this book a try, good friends!
It’s good but too slow based it’s nearly 40 chapters and the mc is just taking a test to be a disciple 😪
I like the story, especially the part of him being a vampire in a cultivation world, I think i haven’t seen that before. Pls don’t drop it
A plot driven eastern fantasy cultivation story that follows Li Yun as the protagonist. No face slapping, no young master. Only story, plot and cultivation that will keep you guessing what happens next. Somethings I want to clarify :- Mc is going to be strong. You might as well call him overpowered mc but it won't happen in a span of 10-20 chaps. It's a plot driven story so everything will take time to happen. The first 50 chapters are kind of slow but it introduced a lot of things and sets the base for the story that follows so PLEASE READ IT TILL CHAPTER 60 before you decide to quit. Lastly thank you for giving my novel a try. I truly appreciate it.