Onion_lover

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Onion_lover
Onion_lover
9 days ago
Commented

How is it still diluted after 100,000,000 times enhancement, when the mc reached primordial human from normal human after just 15,000 times

Onion_lover
Onion_lover
13 days ago
Posted

Aside from the fact that this reads like a mtl, the mc is a bastard. In chapter 40 his true power was witnessed by a woman that fled from a strong opponent. Her intention at first was to buy time for him to flee, but after she realized it was meaningless she gave up. Later the mc shows how overpowered he is and kills the guy who chased her. Since she has seen some of his true power now, he wants to kill her though. This wouldn’t be a problem in itself, if he didn’t change his mind and felt like it would be a good idea to completely control her mind and then r*pe her. Long story short: Mc is a r*pist, don’t read if you are a decent human being.

Onion_lover
Onion_lover
Onion_lover
14 days ago
Posted

Couldn’t even get past the first chapter with such an unlikable mc. He talks about how life might be better if society collapsed and everyone lived more primal… „I would be an Apex Predator in such a world.“ So the mc just seems to be a delusional edgelord. Aside from that weird train of thought, he also stalks his ex gf and wants to send death threats to her new boyfriend, which the author somehow tries to display as a good character trait? also his ex reacted so unrealistically, almost like they just had a casual conversation after he stalked her at work and told her he wanted to drink her personal milk. just seems really weird to make your main character such a weirdo and douchebag

Onion_lover
Onion_lover
1 months ago
Commented

I just noticed that this might come over a bit wrong. I would like to apologize for that. I meant it more in a way where everybody needs those skills. Not just Marie because of her gender.

The two shared their tasks somewhat equally. Whilst Ezequiel did indeed go to work, he didn't want to do everything for Marie. For this reason they decided that she would cook and clean after school. This way she would already learn the necessary skills for her later life.

God’s Conquest: The Lord of Angels

God’s Conquest: The Lord of Angels

Fantasy · Onion_lover

Onion_lover
Onion_lover
1 months ago
Commented

do you mean zephyr?

Zefa, similar to Garp, tempers his arms with Haki, earning the title Black Arm Admiral.

One Piece:Becoming the King of the World from the Rocks Era

One Piece:Becoming the King of the World from the Rocks Era

Anime & Comics · LegendaryTL

Onion_lover
Onion_lover
1 months ago
Commented

so, shouldn’t he slowly run out of copy cards? and why is the ice fruit golden when lightning was only purple

"Successfully copied the golden talent, Devil's Host: Ice Ice Fruit. Replace?"

One Piece: Talent Copy System

One Piece: Talent Copy System

Anime & Comics · DragonnX

Onion_lover
Onion_lover
1 months ago
Commented

thought this was a mistake the first time, but why do you use pele instead of berries/bellies

Onion_lover
Onion_lover
1 months ago
Replied to DEAGON321

im very sorry, but I just started med school and i’ve got a lot to do, since I still haven’t found a place to live in the city i study in, which means I have to travel about 3 hours every day. I will move in to my new apartment in november and try to get out a few chapters then

Onion_lover
Onion_lover
1 months ago
Commented

why would it consume chakra per minute? it’s not like the earth would otherwise vanish

  • God’s Conquest: The Lord of Angels original

    God’s Conquest: The Lord of Angels

    Fantasy ACTION SYSTEM OVERPOWERED CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION KINGDOMBUILDING CONQUER

    Baru Diperbarui

    Gods exist. Every single one of the known gods of earth and trillions of other gods. They all reside in the divine realm from where they control their followers and gather faith to increase their strength. Though they do exist, they do not care about the joy or suffering of the people on Earth. They only care about their personal power. On one particular day, where all the citizens of earth suddenly vanished into thin air, another 8 Billion gods suddenly appeared inside of the divine realm. Through a whim of Fate, all the humans of earth have joined the ranks of the other gods as well as their fight for dominion and strength. Armed with just their starting species that defines their future as well as a handicap that comes in the form of their lacking knowledge. They need to do their best to get stronger or else they might die in the battle for dominion. Among those humans are Ezequiel and his sister Marie. Two orphans who experienced a shitty life on Earth now have the chance for a completely new start. Will they finally reach the top and turn their life around? Ezequiel will do everything to never be at the bottom again. Even if it means fighting against the entire universe, no matter if his opponent is a god or mortal. Things you can expect: - Unique Power System and World Background - Relatively fast pacing - Overpowered but still cautious Mc - A lot of fighting * * * * * I will try to update thrice a week.

    76 Chs 811 Koleksi

  • God of (Mis)Fortune: Void Magus original

    God of (Mis)Fortune: Void Magus

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION GENIUS

    After Sylas tragically died in a plane crash, he suddenly woke up in a foreign bed. The weird thing? His parents stood next to him and he’s still on the same planet as before. Nothing and Everything is different at the same time, as a weird voice suddenly informs every single human on Earth that their planet will undergo an awakening. The same voice that Sylas heard right before he died in a plane crash. Is this all just a result of a memory loss, or is there another reason? Sylas doesn’t have the time to delve into it as he needs to get stronger before his newly promoted planet gets claimed by outside forces. To make matters even worse, his mother fell into a weird coma that can only be explained with the help of magic. With time not being on his side, Sylas has to rely on his new ability that can grant him an immense amount of fortune for a short time, but the price he has to pay for that is no small one as he will find out in the future. Having to maneuver through yet another new world, Sylas is left completely on his own, with the threat of death constantly looming over his head. The only thing he can say for sure is that he will either rise to be the strongest man in the universe or die off on the journey.

    9 Chs 8 Koleksi

  • Lord of Everything and Nothing (DROPPED) original

    Lord of Everything and Nothing (DROPPED)

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG CULTIVATION GENIUS NO-HAREM

    So I decided to drop this book because I felt like it wasn’t special or original enough compared to other books. I might pick it up again later but for now I won’t. Just as Kael once again complained about his boring life, a truck crashed through his roof and killed him. But instead of entering the reincarnation cycle like his soul was supposed to, it left his universe. On the search for more action it traveled through the void until it finally found a new universe. One filled with spiritual energy, magical beast and most importantly, a lot of cultivators. Watch as Kael fights his way to the top with the help of his supreme talent and an annoying little companion. In a world that is at war with several others, Kael will finally find the action he always wished for in his past life. Maybe it’s even a bit too much for his weak nerves. *** The cover is AI-created

    28 Chs 12 Koleksi