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Nano-Machine (DC X INVINCIBLE)
4.6 (12 peringkat)
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Watch the journey, as a boy wakes up in another universe, with Nano-Machines...
{Be warned, this is mostly a action yet slow-paced fic. Mc is not ruthless either, so don't expect him to be. He will kill if needed and will not be afraid to.}
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Picture is not owned by me. Series mentioned are not owned by me other than my own creative characters...
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Good story so far, I like how he has adapted to Gotham, hopefully you donโt have him become one of Bruceโs minions ๐๐พ๐๐พ
Very slow but very progressive keep it up donโt spoil the flow in later chapters keep it up and also donโt increase the pace it is good ๐ ๐๐๐
I would personally change the name he chose for the fight just because it is kinda overused(thanks to oversaturation of edgelord MCs) maybe something more unique to him and his situation would be good. Other than that the explanation the pacing and everything points toward a great novel in the works..... Will update this chapter after more chapter( though i don't think it will deviate much from my current one).
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Pacing is pretty stable and the mc actually feels like a real person which is for once. Though I'm wondering how the smooth the crossover is going to be cause I know those types of fics are pretty hard so good luck and I hope I see more chaps.
Nano machine is it for the novel if so then i hope you don't disappear and don't mess up the fic like nano machine has so much potential i don't know why other author's don't use it.
Really well written story and an interesting premise, I would have love to continue reading, but *SPOILER* Iโm not that into power hoarding fics, although itโs a cool concept the idea of him running around stealing peopleโs powers doesnโt interest me much. Itโs still a really good story and Iโd recommend it to anyone.
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I think its really good until now the grammar is good and the system is cool as well i reallllly like it................................................
good enough so far good grammar, interesting development and long enough word count per chapter, need more simplified stat don't know how to do it tho๐ but good enough with the comparison. hope it's a 100+ chapter and keep up the interesting development even if it's a slow pace one.
Beutiful fic ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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