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Hi, can we have some news about you ? Is everything fine ? :)

Thanks for the chapter my friend.

Yea since someone can destroy the chip and then have access to his mind

Thanks for the chapter ! Good chapter btw, can't wait to read more.

Good luck for this fanfic. Thanks for the chapter :)

Very good his change of plans and the realization of his own naivety. Let's hope he's not naive afterwards, I really liked the twist. Star city can be a good city for him.

I will and I do. I'm telling you my thoughs so you know what I'm thinking rn :)

We now follow our main character: Batman! Chapter especially for him, he will replace Ezra. I'm kidding. But not kidding, I don't really like that from the start he is confronted with someone invincible, like Kara. Whatever the reasons, whether she's nice, whether she becomes his wife later, I don't like it.... it's like forcing the mc to go in one direction, he will have to minimize his choices, he will no longer be so free with people like that close to him or after him, even Batman himself is part of it because he is still well above the MC currently, whether physically, mentally or technologically. Even if they work together for x reasons or whatever I hope he won't be on their radar or detected so quickly... I preferred a mc who is totally free before he can literally let even strong people let him do whatever he want, he seems to have everyone on his tail in a few months, it's disappointing. Well, that’s just my point of view after all.

No sorry, it's too much for me. Good luck with the rest of the creation of this story but it's absolutely not my cup of tea, I'm stopping reading the story. I don't like the mc's strategy/reaction, the way Nezu, All Might and the others reacted too, it's quite illogical. The fact that he's being watched even though we know how it's going to end, I don't like that. Anyway, sorry again but that's not what I like to read.

Yes I'm reading your story but I didn't like this chapter.

Thanks for the chapter :)