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Thomas Andre in Marvel
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Never in his wildest dreams could he have imagined this would become his life.
He's in another world, gifted with incredible power, and he's getting stronger every day. He's taller than ever and looks nothing like he used to.
After 35 years in this world, he's realized one thing: it's all bullshit. Heroic, villainous bullshit.
And honestly, these 35 years have been the best. He's finally doing whatever the hell he wants, becoming whoever he wants to be. Maybe it's worth taking Nick Fury up on his offerโjust for the fun of it.
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(A/N) My first work. I'll gladly listen to the criticism. And yeah, It's mostly MCU, with its main events, like first movie and Endgame etc. But some characters, like Spider Man is not the same.
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Sounds like a great premise was waiting for a story with Thomas Andrey to appear have high hopes for the story. Please don't drop.
I haven't seen a web novel with so much potential in a long time, I love your novel, I love Tomas Andre!!!!...................................................... .
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So far, im loving this. There are some pitfalls i hope dont happen. Like more of the solo verse coming to this world. Him losing his powers. u know lame stuff. This really seems like a good fic, and im hopeful about its future.
Read the first three chapters and I can already tell itโs going be a great fanfic
This refreshing ๐คฉ๐. I love it. The author really shows Thomas's personality correctly
You were doing great, I don't understand the specifics, but I don't need too, writing good is hard as hell, I know. Anyway, a little send-off. Great book, great plot, nice execution, and character development.
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Love how the author portrays him in this fanfic. Some people don't know that Andre even though he seems to look arrogant he still a hero who protects society just like in the manhwa.
Jilid 1
- 1 1.Entering. 8 months ago
- 2 2.Not good. 8 months ago
- 3 3. Pepper Pots 8 months ago
- 4 4.Why hello there. 8 months ago
- 5 5.On their way. 8 months ago
- 6 6. Titans Fight (1/2) 8 months ago
- 7 7.Titans Fight(2/2) 8 months ago
- 8 .8 8 months ago
- 9 9.We do not Stop. 7 months ago
- 10 10. New-Mexico. 7 months ago
- 11 11. We going at it. 7 months ago
- 12 12. Goliath vs The Destroyer 7 months ago
- 13 13.Chill 7 months ago
- 14 14.Little Thoughts. 7 months ago
- 15 15.Hammered Down 7 months ago
- 16 16. Drink. 6 months ago
- 17 17.New Plan 4 months ago
- 18 18. Web-Entering. 3 months ago
- 19 19. Spider. 3 months ago
I'd like to begin this review by saying you have a good idea here. With that said, let's begin. Writing quality is fairly decent. However, there are too many mistakes. Multiple cases of repeated words or sentences that dont make sense. Use grammerly or an AI to proofread a sentence, but dont use it for every sentence. There's also the issue with originality. I know that's weird to say for a fanfic, but the first two chapters are from another story. At least edit them a bit. Story development and background are my big issues. Events feel rushed and glossed over. Tony's time in the cave was at least 3 months. you had him there for a week, and he had somehow made his first suit. This is just one example. I get that this is an AU, but use the synopsis to tell us. Don't just drop a short description with no info as to what's going on and leave us out to dry.
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