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An actually good borderlands fanfic. plus titan fall what more could you ask for?
Really liking this story keep going and I will keep reading only think I can tell you to change is that his name is handsome jack need to give some respect to such a hate able tragic villain
It’s pretty good, the beginning chapters are kinda bad but after you get past that it’s gets better. Overall fun read.
Honestly, having played and experienced everything Borderlands related and absolutely LOVED Moze in Borderlands 3, I can say that this is basically all I could ask for. I personally love the story direction and the idea of a Titanfall Pilot absolutely fits in line with what a Vault Hunter would be. But if you’re on the fence about it, imagine Moze with double jump and Wallrunning. Nuff said
Some solid work and building of characters and world. relationships are memorable and using the whole titanfall universe (including apex legends) worth of tech is satisfying and the mechanics of health work out realistically without losing to much game meta which would be something like aye If he's bleeding he'll lose health, if he heals then shoot em with element or bigger bullet. I like tech and some one using it properly makes it even nicer so please at least bless yo homies with this fine piece eh?
I will give 5 if not for Update stability all in all greate story and interesting idea.
An insanely good story that only suffers from being updated rarely, and not having an upload schedule.
Estou gostando muito dessa historia, ainda não da para determinar o que o personagem esta planejando, mais isso torna mais saboroso de ler esperando o que acontecer quem ele vai encontrar o que vai fazer. Sinceramente só fico chateado que não tenham tão poucas historias com tecnologia modernas como essa. Muitas perdem no caminho ou desistem por N motivos, continue com o bom trabalho e por favor, por favor, por favor escreva mais pois o desejo de ler mais é grande.
hello, author here to pat myself on the back for taking the initiative to start writing. However, I recognize that there's a lot of room for improvement, so I'll be giving myself 5 stars when I've completed it. Peace
I really like this so far, it’s the first borderlands fanfic I’ve read but its one of my favorite games so i really hope you keep this one going. Keep up the great work!!
As a fellow writer of another Borderlands fanfic, I would say yours needs more work but it does deliver on quality. Personally not my taste but I can see the appeal. Due to this, I'll give you a five-star review due to obvious bias but having looked over the fanfic elements I do particularly find the sentient system to be off-putting. Overall keep going and don't drop, the steady stream of chapters is a great way to keep yourself motivated. I belive that with the right motivation this could be a staple.
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I haven't read this work yet, but I'm just leaving my review here in order to support the author of Borderlands fan fiction. I love it when people write about unpopular fandoms, I'm already tired of Harry Potter or NAruto alone.
haven't read yet but will change rating after I have. just wanted to know that with the Apex Pred system will he have access to Legend abilities like Wraith's phasing and portals?
Pure excellence. There’s not enough borderlands fics. I’m excited, please dont drop. Author, you’ve made a friend with this one.
Read up to Ch. 7, not bad, but needs some rework done. -Grammar is only decent, there are quite a few mistakes here and there. -System is sentient, don’t like that. Also the regeneration seems useless, you need to expand on your explanation more, cause the stats just resetting to zero for a better body doesn’t make sense, that’s what END is for by YOUR explanation. -In the beginning, mc bought items in public, and also while training for the army at their location which is stupid as hell. Also talking to himself instead of just thinking, people really need to stop writing this way in regards to systems. -Mc is 34, ends up joining the army so late which is dumb, if you were gonna have him go to pandora that way then why would you have him be 34? Also he seems more like a teenager with the way you’ve written him, what is the point author? No reason at all whatsoever. -Every explanation is pretty bare bones from how he got here and getting the system, to joining the army and currently going on a mission, even the training itself seems so lackluster. Not enough context everywhere in general, but barely ok enough to push the story forward which makes this story weak.
Not familiar with borderlands but a fan of titanfall.This fic got me interested in more. The grammar, weighting quality, and character are good, no complaints.
Borderlands and titanfall? Sounds too good to be true! So i went digging and saw this(pic related) Does this mean you're going to include yuri, NTR, fut*s and other poison? Some content warnings ahead of time would be great, Lord knows that they absolutely shoved bl2 and 3 with 'representation'
Basically one of the better bl stories out there (not that there are many still being published) but I really enjoy this and like the fact that bl3 and 1 is acknowledged by the author when most of the time it’s just bl2 or something completely out of canon I have great enthusiasm for the author’s continuing work.
I say the book is good and all, but why add a harem tag, because for me at least it does not make any sense why there would be a harem in borderlands.
Nice,mix just wish you uploaded more. But beggars can’t be choosers. All around 👍
An actually good borderlands fanfic. plus titan fall what more could you ask for?
Really liking this story keep going and I will keep reading only think I can tell you to change is that his name is handsome jack need to give some respect to such a hate able tragic villain
It’s pretty good, the beginning chapters are kinda bad but after you get past that it’s gets better. Overall fun read.
Honestly, having played and experienced everything Borderlands related and absolutely LOVED Moze in Borderlands 3, I can say that this is basically all I could ask for. I personally love the story direction and the idea of a Titanfall Pilot absolutely fits in line with what a Vault Hunter would be. But if you’re on the fence about it, imagine Moze with double jump and Wallrunning. Nuff said
Some solid work and building of characters and world. relationships are memorable and using the whole titanfall universe (including apex legends) worth of tech is satisfying and the mechanics of health work out realistically without losing to much game meta which would be something like aye If he's bleeding he'll lose health, if he heals then shoot em with element or bigger bullet. I like tech and some one using it properly makes it even nicer so please at least bless yo homies with this fine piece eh?
I will give 5 if not for Update stability all in all greate story and interesting idea.
An insanely good story that only suffers from being updated rarely, and not having an upload schedule.
Estou gostando muito dessa historia, ainda não da para determinar o que o personagem esta planejando, mais isso torna mais saboroso de ler esperando o que acontecer quem ele vai encontrar o que vai fazer. Sinceramente só fico chateado que não tenham tão poucas historias com tecnologia modernas como essa. Muitas perdem no caminho ou desistem por N motivos, continue com o bom trabalho e por favor, por favor, por favor escreva mais pois o desejo de ler mais é grande.
hello, author here to pat myself on the back for taking the initiative to start writing. However, I recognize that there's a lot of room for improvement, so I'll be giving myself 5 stars when I've completed it. Peace
I really like this so far, it’s the first borderlands fanfic I’ve read but its one of my favorite games so i really hope you keep this one going. Keep up the great work!!
As a fellow writer of another Borderlands fanfic, I would say yours needs more work but it does deliver on quality. Personally not my taste but I can see the appeal. Due to this, I'll give you a five-star review due to obvious bias but having looked over the fanfic elements I do particularly find the sentient system to be off-putting. Overall keep going and don't drop, the steady stream of chapters is a great way to keep yourself motivated. I belive that with the right motivation this could be a staple.
Membuka SPOILER I haven't read this work yet, but I'm just leaving my review here in order to support the author of Borderlands fan fiction. I love it when people write about unpopular fandoms, I'm already tired of Harry Potter or NAruto alone.
haven't read yet but will change rating after I have. just wanted to know that with the Apex Pred system will he have access to Legend abilities like Wraith's phasing and portals?
Pure excellence. There’s not enough borderlands fics. I’m excited, please dont drop. Author, you’ve made a friend with this one.
Read up to Ch. 7, not bad, but needs some rework done. -Grammar is only decent, there are quite a few mistakes here and there. -System is sentient, don’t like that. Also the regeneration seems useless, you need to expand on your explanation more, cause the stats just resetting to zero for a better body doesn’t make sense, that’s what END is for by YOUR explanation. -In the beginning, mc bought items in public, and also while training for the army at their location which is stupid as hell. Also talking to himself instead of just thinking, people really need to stop writing this way in regards to systems. -Mc is 34, ends up joining the army so late which is dumb, if you were gonna have him go to pandora that way then why would you have him be 34? Also he seems more like a teenager with the way you’ve written him, what is the point author? No reason at all whatsoever. -Every explanation is pretty bare bones from how he got here and getting the system, to joining the army and currently going on a mission, even the training itself seems so lackluster. Not enough context everywhere in general, but barely ok enough to push the story forward which makes this story weak.
Not familiar with borderlands but a fan of titanfall.This fic got me interested in more. The grammar, weighting quality, and character are good, no complaints.
Borderlands and titanfall? Sounds too good to be true! So i went digging and saw this(pic related) Does this mean you're going to include yuri, NTR, fut*s and other poison? Some content warnings ahead of time would be great, Lord knows that they absolutely shoved bl2 and 3 with 'representation'
Basically one of the better bl stories out there (not that there are many still being published) but I really enjoy this and like the fact that bl3 and 1 is acknowledged by the author when most of the time it’s just bl2 or something completely out of canon I have great enthusiasm for the author’s continuing work.
I say the book is good and all, but why add a harem tag, because for me at least it does not make any sense why there would be a harem in borderlands.
Nice,mix just wish you uploaded more. But beggars can’t be choosers. All around 👍