A Superman in Marvel

LV 10

Benoit_Valtin

too many cliché sentences, it's horrible to read, I want to stop, it's a visual pain at this level. I saw you respond, we feel that you want to but it doesn't work, it's too basic.

LV 4

LastGod

Seems more and more like it is written by chat gpt the plot seems like an after thought the more u read its cool to actually see a superman in marvel doing superman stuff but i dont see any connection to people he has no one he loves some of the character interactions dont make sense and then their is a flash back that makes him seem like a toddler. Just everything makes it seem like this is a child that got these powers and not a mature adult.

LV 4

Mohammed_Jawad

I think I’m doing alright as a beginner I need to learn a lot more tbh any help will be appreciated 🙏

LV 4

Supper_mega

it's not really that good and I didn't feel any superman vibes in the mc or in the story

LV 1

NeaCambelt

Srx faire quitté la terre à Bruce ? ??? Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 4

Mark1681

This reads like it was written by ChatGPT. I only managed to read the first three chapters, but it doesn't have much substance to it other than "superman stops a crime."

LV 1

Kid_Wicked

I'm liking everything I've read so far, and I'm curious to see what else you cover from the comics. Although the other chapters were confusing since some of the chapters kind of repeat a few things that happened previously. Keep it up.

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Flakeykoala807

It's really good just keep going you're doing good next is coming up I believe the civil war now I want to know what side he's going to choose? he's probably going to choose Captain America side

LV 4

HarHarMahadev

Overall good. Hope that the author will keep updating this story.

LV 3

Flakeykoala807

Hey I'm back and I'm going to say it's getting better and better every time I read this we're now at at war world hulk oh I'm so pumped up what's going to happen don't stop keep going man you're doing good

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Mohammed_Jawad

Ofc I’m gonna give myself a good review this story so gas after chapter 10