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Great story! hope to see more of this wonderful work of art that the author has drawn up for us. There is so much possibility to this story! keep up the great work!
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Extremely forced, nonsensical explanations, there is no scale to the powers, everything is happening at the speeds where it is not conceivable yet every moment appears like cheap indian soap opera slow mos. There is always the talk of consequense to an event, like we don't see him suffering from loneliness, we are told so as a consequence he talks about it as if informing us that now he is sad. I dropped the story where he first talks to the alien, it was again forced nonsense, he wonders for a while why he can understand the alien speak( he speaks like a cheap drama student writing a dialogue of a griffeing father) as if he is a dimwitted human instead of a supercomputer "that works at speed ls unimaginable"
I'm not good at explaining and reviewing. But I can say this isn't fanfic, this's more than fanfic and I really enjoy this. This is not adding OC to the OG story like other fanfics but creating an alternative storyline. (Also, I suggest never adding the harem in your story if you don't want your story to get ruined by it!). I love this story and looking forward to more chapters.
Buenísimo esta historia, tanto personaje como ideas puestas que casi nunca se ve en historias de Marvel que siempre se quedan en la tierra o empiezan
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I’m actually really enjoying this story I hope to see more soon. Really wanna see how it develops further especially if he decides to be a hero of earth or something that would be really interesting. Thanks for the chapters
Can’t wait to see how the story develops. Good concept can’t wait to see how the mc develops.
Don't Mind me, Just shamelessly giving myself some good reviews. However I can answer any questions you have here
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Great story! hope to see more of this wonderful work of art that the author has drawn up for us. There is so much possibility to this story! keep up the great work!
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Extremely forced, nonsensical explanations, there is no scale to the powers, everything is happening at the speeds where it is not conceivable yet every moment appears like cheap indian soap opera slow mos. There is always the talk of consequense to an event, like we don't see him suffering from loneliness, we are told so as a consequence he talks about it as if informing us that now he is sad. I dropped the story where he first talks to the alien, it was again forced nonsense, he wonders for a while why he can understand the alien speak( he speaks like a cheap drama student writing a dialogue of a griffeing father) as if he is a dimwitted human instead of a supercomputer "that works at speed ls unimaginable"
I'm not good at explaining and reviewing. But I can say this isn't fanfic, this's more than fanfic and I really enjoy this. This is not adding OC to the OG story like other fanfics but creating an alternative storyline. (Also, I suggest never adding the harem in your story if you don't want your story to get ruined by it!). I love this story and looking forward to more chapters.
Buenísimo esta historia, tanto personaje como ideas puestas que casi nunca se ve en historias de Marvel que siempre se quedan en la tierra o empiezan
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I’m actually really enjoying this story I hope to see more soon. Really wanna see how it develops further especially if he decides to be a hero of earth or something that would be really interesting. Thanks for the chapters
Can’t wait to see how the story develops. Good concept can’t wait to see how the mc develops.
Don't Mind me, Just shamelessly giving myself some good reviews. However I can answer any questions you have here