celestialshadows1

celestialshadows1

male LV 4
2022-05-11 Bergabung Global
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celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
22 days ago
Posted

i love this fic there was no effort put into the translation please translate it properly and read through the fic before posting it. Consider using gramerly and don't just Google translate

celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
3 months ago
Posted

amazing book please continue to update it i love rhe premise pf the work

celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
4 months ago
Posted

alright love the story the concept the character and all of that if it is that you are translating please read through and make sure you have the right pronouns and gender for the characters the story is good overall though just fix the gender and pronouns issue it is quite annoying

celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
4 months ago
Commented

so the chapter was good I would live for it to be a little long in the chapters in the future please make the fight scenes longer and more detailed more sword play as well he is a master martial artist emphasize that. The overall writing was no good no grammatical mistakes. I just hope for longer chapters with better fight scenes 5 stars

celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
4 months ago
Commented

hi I love the story and the concept the writing is amazing the grammar is good so far but you keep on changing the gender of characters and quite frankly that is extremely annoying please fix that

celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
5 months ago
Posted

hi this story is absolutely amazing words can't describe how good it is please update the story you have my power stones please update

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celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
5 months ago
Commented

I love this book but the chapters are extremely short please make them longer

celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
6 months ago
Posted

hey please don't drop this book it is amqz8ng please continue it

celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
6 months ago
Commented

love it just please do 2 chapters a day I will suppo

celestialshadows1
celestialshadows1
6 months ago
Posted

hi bro, I love the story. Please post at leat everyday or every other day you have to be consistent to get ranked and more power stones