Percy Jackson and the Gaia System

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GOD_001

His character development took a turn for the worse; he became reckless, arrogant, and foul-mouthed. Still rubbish in terms of power . The system is of no use, MC's potential is very low, it will most likely follow the path followed by canon MC.Instead of wasting your time by reading this, it would be better to go and read the series again.

LV 13

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LV 4

BlackGoku222

Increíble historia[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 14

Uchiha_Naseru

Loving the story so far keep up the great work👍

LV 4

MrFaavavega

Besides a couple of grammar errors, I think this is really good so far. I'm really excited for this story.👍🤙

LV 4

Sidney008

other than grammatical mistakes i have no complaints so, give us more 👍🏻

LV 4

Lyson

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LV 14

Justindemigod

Enjoying the story so far can't wait for more!

LV 4

Abhijith_Vc

Good story and development but it has too many grammatic and spelling mistakes other wise a good read

LV 5

Just_ForFun

The story is good, and the update schedule is fine, but a few minor mistakes can be improved. But overall, it has an engaging storyline [img=exp]

LV 2

Artem_5195

with translation title I have Percy Jackson and the Gay System. Hahaha. And the story is good...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 1

Gilgamesh_Kazama

Bro, your story is very good, there are some flaws, but these are the little things in life, I am very happy with your story so continue. (it is a translation)

LV 12

EdgeLord_23

It's a nice read and has a lot of potential. Mc develops a lot of bad qualities like thinking of people as friends but not putting in the effort to develop that friendship (Always looking out for what he can get). Let's say for instance trying to give skills that's useless to him to his friends. And Mc should also try and stick to a legend path. Throwing Fireballs as a son of poseidon, feels weird. By developing a legend as Son of poseidon, I mean focus of water abilities and sword techniques, develop relationships with others that have connection with sea. Use darkness magic to enhance water attacks. Let the legend develop as a story like. after Percy conquered the underworld he developed an affinity for darkness magic. I know I am probably not making sense. It just feels like there is no direction for character development and there is no hope for side characters to get abilities eventhough they are supposedly the mc best friends. And it can't boil down to Luke because he was a red flag friend from Start with everything read by mc in his status. ps. I enjoyed the story up until after fight with Elsa.

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kisna24

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FallenDemon88

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LV 5

thyagofer

Gostei muito da hiistoria. É realmente bom.