DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex

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Adeniran_Charles

great to see a good story about riser Phenex.awesome cover art too

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Arc_Dragon

I love this so far and Just hope that you donot go akikan style or drop it.I am suggesting (it's more of asking) like you got Ezra right? Just hear me out as I am not saying to do this but just voicing out. The peerage (new Members ) Ais from Danmachi Ruby Rose (Rwby) Like I don't think anyone used them so far this way . Bring someone from other verse like Mashu (Fgo) or even Saint Martha hehe he the looks on Heaven faction will be priceless . Tatsumaki is a good choice Then Lastly like Bring someone from Marvel or DC or even some like Tohru from that Anime called dragon Maid or something I forgot anime name

LV 1

AllenCross

Average fanfic, gives rise to mixed feelings. Unfortunately, it's mostly monotonous, the characters' personalities are cold, robotic. There is no plot as such, all the action is naive. The main character is described as a "villain", but he is more like a child with delusions of grandeur, logic in his actions is mostly absent, all his actions are impulsive. And the other characters are made to look stupid. There is no fight as such, or rather there is, but it is a light description on the likes of came, saw, won, there is no drive, tension. If you think that he (the main character) will even remotely resemble such "villains" as, for example: Professor James Moriarty from the book/movie "Sherlock Holmes" or at least Lelouch Vee Britain from Code Geass, then unfortunately you won't see it.

LV 4

MasterMaxence

It's a good fanfiction so far, I can't wait to see how the plot will continue.

LV 4

Dark_Symphony

Very interesting, hope you don’t need him up to fast

LV 1

Subhadip_No_way

There are flaws but I like this.Sometimes it does feel rushed but it's just beginning so I hope you improve as you write more.I suggest something from cultivation Novels too can make interesting like that Phenix bloodline from ATG is a good one to have.I don't know how it works though as I am not a fan of those "I ,your father" type novels.Also show some conversation with his family and peerage members and not make people think it's a diary.We have to speculate some so show his wholesome moments with family too.This way even if you are villain we can see his motives as sometimes Villains are more complex than hero and make him more scheming like Aizen.No need to just brute force on his enemies.He can Humiliate Issei more like he can also talk to Gremory family or phoenix family about Issei behavior or do something more drastic but orchestrate it like why a Grafiya only interferes only when Riser is about to do something but Issei can shout whenever he wants ..I mean there are some places you just skipped over

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Andrew_maconha

I didn't really like the protagonist, I thought he did a lot of unnecessary things and I also don't like super chaotic things, I'm not complaining about him killing people, mostly unnecessarily, I like chaotic protagonists but I also like intelligent protagonists, chaotic but intelligent protagonists, no matter how much they change the plot or things like that, they are always in control and a lot of the time they let the plot unfold to get the most benefits or changes the plot to results that he predicted and that won't affect the world much, or turns the world upside down by doing crazy things and in the midst of the chaos he benefits, I think the best example I have and the protagonist of annihilation maker the crazy things he did always benefited him as much as possible. Other than that, I thought the story was great with good grammar and few holes in the script.

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Deztopia

dude, your story is good, but the text looks like generated AI, I advise you to revive it and diversify it, and try to avoid monotony and tautology

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Trouxa_157

A good FanFiction, it seems that lately in the Webnovel among the DxD stories, it has only been reincarnated as Rizer Phenex and this is one of the best!

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SinnersLaw

Read it for yourself and find out its pretty interesting so far hope author Rodney make him too ok too quickly ...............................

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Xmpr30

I love the whole Reincarnated As Riser Phenex trope, but this fanfic has 3 issues: - The characters and dialogue are too robotic and monotonous. This makes the characters look less realistic, and makes their whole personality revolve over Riser. - Because of the first point the romance in the novel is less heartwarming. - Unnecessary Killing. I don't mind killing but the MC in this story was a straight up murder hobo, killing people when there were better ways of dealing with them. A good example of this was the human witch used to track down Asia. Instead of killing her to hide information, a better way would be using mind erasing magic(all devils know it). Realistically her disappearance would only bring him more attention.

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Mr_Ink2065

Love the fan-fic so far. Can’t wait for the the next chapters.👍👍👍

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Wide_SHOT

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Zero_9758

I hate the fake love talks between Riser and Sona. They just look that fake. And the system is a mix of bad and good. No so OP sadly. I wish there were more ways to earn points, and suddenly the story is moving a lot faster in regards to bonds and all. Fate is inevitable I guess

LV 4

Garland

It's always interesting to read about Mc taking over Riser's body but very few ever make it actually good to continue reading. While it started all good, the MC overall just turned pretty boring through all the chapters. Everything was just quick to start and most of it just falls on the MC's lap without him doing anything. Other characters make choices and act completely OOC without any good reasoning to them like with Akeno overall and the whole situation with Riser and Sona. Fights are even boring without much struggle or even spectacle if he is that strong. Reading chapters and chapters just feels samey and even when their are things happening, it doesn't really do much overall to make it a good reading. Overall it had a good start but it just drag on and became bland as things moved forward.

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Shawn_0858

Wonderful chapter can't wait for more love the context of the oval rating of the world background love the character dysfunction love the story development love the updating status love the translation output I love it all

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Lau_Souza

First of all, this is DxD... So this is hsrem and this is okay. Writting is okay but seems like a IA talking and acting for other characters. Risee is a bit weak... He has strong powers and it's just a bit strong then orjginal. Next, he has a free hate against him from part of Issei's plot armor, because Sirzechs, Azazel and others don't like or trust him without any good reason. It's a good fanfiction, but for me it's becoming boring. Good luck for you in your path.