Arc_Dragon

Spiritual Master of Elf world or something like that was its tranlsation

Five stars Just for translation because I have read it raw and MTL versipn and trust me it was the worst and by God even the story was good it was unreadable.But this is great and I commend you on your work.

I commend the you for good translation and some editing.You did fine work .I only have problem with the story so this will be my dissatisfaction of the raw author. Mc is in Japanese anime and is Japanese and has named his daughter like Chinese xiaxia Novels ok fine. Mc has problems writing Japanese Manga or comic and also monsense that he must adapt chinese element? Is this chinese superiority mentality like they can copy good works praise them and then think adding chinese elemen5 is better because he can't use Japanese story .this is just in few chapters. Too much chineese and there is nothing to do .The story is not bad as a chill but these things are regular in any chineese story and I guarantee thr author also have only watched few animes because he could have known that "Your Name" has light Novel that is just in first 10 chapters showing how much chineese mentality is toxic they have audacity to write about a japanese fantic and then have mc not comfortable with it but plagarising with chineese culture is fine.bahhh so imagine If I write about more 380+ chapters there will be almost 10 essays so Short review.

I will change the review when anything Makes sense .Jumping from one place to another is just ridiculous.Too much susoense and no heads or tails is not a good start .Not even a clue of why is Naruto like this and what is different should be indicated not like this mysterious.If you wanted to just skip Naruto then do it no need to scam people as the first part or what happened to Naruto is just not mentioned .Hiruzen comes and tells about his mother Hiruzen dies .How the fuck would hiruzen tell him about his father during a battle when he died . You are just making mysterious stories which will get boring .It may be early but this is nonsense .I will see how the story goes then think about improving review if any at all. Nit even Flashbacks , just doing slice of life like thinks and all that what bullshit and Naruto is philosophical .Emperor of uzumaki all that by the time you move firward you will have so much to explain as atleast now everything needed to be explained

Listen people may say I am negatice but I literally have nothing to say .You are going too fast paced and even if we see in fanfiction basis and anime basis this is really unrealistic unless its a crack fic .There are many things that is just ridiculous .A 3 year old kids no matter whoever it is cannot do stuff.This is too much crack . I am not even complaining about AU stuff you added as that can be used if you put thought to it .I suggest you read the stories you write and think a little .A spar with Hokage was the most dumbest thing I have ever seen .Its like watching Original Naruto got lot dumber and insane . He is three .Even if he reincarnated .I mean swriously even in ninja world .Do you not know somethings are not possible even as four year old? . The fic idea is not bad but come on it feels like it is really written. By a three year old child. Too much Bullshit MC . Op is fine but this is too much nonsense going around