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It is good and has a lot of potential, unfortunately it has not been updated The background is good, the time and place is also what is suggested is continuity because the truth is that the title honors what is happening, forget me not, several have already forgotten of this story except me
You know, I'm a simple man. I like good books, and I hate bad books. And seeing you release this novel kind of irks me, you know? Because it's good. Don't get me wrong about that. It's just, I'm a bit mad that you released this one, who has a good premise, and forgetting your other one about the same game, who's also pretty good, and you haven't updated that one for a month. Don't play with me, man. Because you have a good concept for this book you have now, who only has two chapters. I'm giving this five stars because it's pretty good, but don't become those authors who release topics that have potential, but only update them for five or ten chapters, and abandon them because they didn't have enough time to do them. So, for a recommendation, only focus on one or two novels at a time, to not make you overstress, man. Because when you release a topic that people like, they will not be happy when you don't update it, okay? Take this cookie, and don't forget to update your good novels, man, okay?
I have been thinking since this release, but did you get dumped? this story released 2 week since hiatus of your cafe fic, that hiatus saying that u get yourselves girlfriend. bow this with notice me not or forget me not power? did you get forgotten or bot noticed anymore by your Girlfriend?
I like the concept of the story, it's different. however, your update leaves much to be desired. I totally understand it's a ploy by dropping your story and just picking it up later.
AHEM, AHEM. As per usual, I, the reader(and also other fellow reader) shall now start, begin, and dare I say execute the Grand ritual... That is... LET'S FXKKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Its genshin fics with unusual as the author, ofc it would be a good thing to read. Btw author, is your another genshin fics is dropped? . . . . .
It is good and has a lot of potential, unfortunately it has not been updated The background is good, the time and place is also what is suggested is continuity because the truth is that the title honors what is happening, forget me not, several have already forgotten of this story except me
You know, I'm a simple man. I like good books, and I hate bad books. And seeing you release this novel kind of irks me, you know? Because it's good. Don't get me wrong about that. It's just, I'm a bit mad that you released this one, who has a good premise, and forgetting your other one about the same game, who's also pretty good, and you haven't updated that one for a month. Don't play with me, man. Because you have a good concept for this book you have now, who only has two chapters. I'm giving this five stars because it's pretty good, but don't become those authors who release topics that have potential, but only update them for five or ten chapters, and abandon them because they didn't have enough time to do them. So, for a recommendation, only focus on one or two novels at a time, to not make you overstress, man. Because when you release a topic that people like, they will not be happy when you don't update it, okay? Take this cookie, and don't forget to update your good novels, man, okay?
I have been thinking since this release, but did you get dumped? this story released 2 week since hiatus of your cafe fic, that hiatus saying that u get yourselves girlfriend. bow this with notice me not or forget me not power? did you get forgotten or bot noticed anymore by your Girlfriend?
I like the concept of the story, it's different. however, your update leaves much to be desired. I totally understand it's a ploy by dropping your story and just picking it up later.
AHEM, AHEM. As per usual, I, the reader(and also other fellow reader) shall now start, begin, and dare I say execute the Grand ritual... That is... LET'S FXKKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Its genshin fics with unusual as the author, ofc it would be a good thing to read. Btw author, is your another genshin fics is dropped? . . . . .
....author was cooking but stopped .....