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ok, so I made it to chp 34, and it's a great story. The only problem I have is that she's still 2 years from the academy, and the story ends on chp 59. Arthur-San in the future I'd use more time skips. Please keep writing wonderfully plot filled stories. [img=strong]
Love this, especially the non yuri fem mc. Does anyone got recommendation for similar fanfic (non yuri/straight ship)?
Well, let's talk about this hottie MC is insa- err awesome Her choices in this story and how she is deviating it from the canon are interesting or more like watching her take those choices is interesting. To conclude... I really like the story.
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Gostei bastante uma obra boa em meio a tanto lixo mas esse negocio do naruto esquizofrênico tá me irritando protagonista inteligente só acho que você ta dando poder demais segura a mão um pouco e tenta focar mais nisso e aumenta um pouco a velocidade de capítulos eu quero maissss
Manipulative si hinata with a lot of realistic and canon based talent, love it, although many of us seldom dislike female mc but trust me you’ll like it. Hinata in this story give some gu changge fang yuan and aizen vive hahah
i really like the story so far its really amazing, i like how manipulative your making the character be also how she does not hide her true self from everyone its mostly reminds me of overlord and how his denizens are so loyal to him hope you start again with the story. happy christmas and new years
A great story, with an even better MC. ..:.!.:.. ..:.!.:.. (-'.^.'-) -....- ..!.. ..!.. :...:
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It's not for everyone, the MC is very dark and seems at times needlessly cruel, but so far the author has done an excellent job with the story. There's a payoff for every choice, even the ones that seem bad at the time. Worldbuilding is excellent, he uses the Byakugan creatively and gives it its deserved spot as an equal of the Sharingan. Imagine if Orochimaru did not get fixated on the Sharingan, the stuff he could accomplish with the Byakugan, combined with meta-knowledge of the verse gives the MC a lot of potential. Downsides: The MC has internal monologues, which might be a story point, if not they add little to the story. The relationships are shallow, the MC exploits everyone so there is possessiveness on her part, but no real depth in the relationships. It is most obvious in her relationship with her mother.
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Even though there aren’t that many chapters yet this is an awesome novel. Already one of my favorite naruto ff on here. The way her power is increasing and how it’s explained makes for such an interesting read. The grammar is top notch and the mc is extremely cunning and with her schemes
if ur reading this, simply put, mc is straight out evil, bully kids like Choji, groom a kid (Naruto), and is op. Don't worry tho, it is all within her plans as she is evil schemer muehehehehe
First of all the title was off putting, not much just hmmm you know, I saw it a few times and was like should i? Then synopsis go hmmm I don't like it and after a week or two I saw it again I was bored I go first chapter then bam whoa and after a few more I just said "how wrong I was" this is nice I love it, every interaction with Naruto makes me see a future Hinata who looks like a queen sitting on him touching his face and smiling and she goes fufufu idk that's what I see when she starts taking, "you know?"
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The story is good, and a Yandare MC is quite enjoyable, but, I personally dislike how heavy the grooming is. I just feel bad for how she is manipulating Naruto, but overall, great story.
I haven't gotten the chance to read this yet. however, from the reviews, I can't wait. Though if I'm honest, I might be using this as a. it of a guide. But once I do read what's available, I'll give a better review.
О да! ШИКАРНО! Я даже не думал что кто-то может написать Хинату Хьюгу ТАК хорошо! Очень нравиться её слегка высокомерный характер. наступи на меня! Круто! Она манипулирует для своей пользы. Клан это её собственность! Брат это её игрушка а Наруто её будущий муж который ВСЕХ победит такими темпами. Очень крутая идея.
Sigh, such a good story with a fascinating and interesting mc but the author had to ruin it with the op nonsense! Isnt the gentle fist and having the best byagukan in the universe enough? maybe add senjutsu and even the tenseigan in the future? But NO that wasn't enough for the author; she is now mastering all the elements, learning medicine and killing anbu from the other side of the village with lightning before the academy. Hints about copying other bloodlines... etc. Its so over the top that even kaguya wouldn't be able touch her in a few years. Where is the suspense?
overall it's good. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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ok, so I made it to chp 34, and it's a great story. The only problem I have is that she's still 2 years from the academy, and the story ends on chp 59. Arthur-San in the future I'd use more time skips. Please keep writing wonderfully plot filled stories. [img=strong]
Love this, especially the non yuri fem mc. Does anyone got recommendation for similar fanfic (non yuri/straight ship)?
Well, let's talk about this hottie MC is insa- err awesome Her choices in this story and how she is deviating it from the canon are interesting or more like watching her take those choices is interesting. To conclude... I really like the story.
Membuka SPOILER Gostei bastante uma obra boa em meio a tanto lixo mas esse negocio do naruto esquizofrênico tá me irritando protagonista inteligente só acho que você ta dando poder demais segura a mão um pouco e tenta focar mais nisso e aumenta um pouco a velocidade de capítulos eu quero maissss
Manipulative si hinata with a lot of realistic and canon based talent, love it, although many of us seldom dislike female mc but trust me you’ll like it. Hinata in this story give some gu changge fang yuan and aizen vive hahah
i really like the story so far its really amazing, i like how manipulative your making the character be also how she does not hide her true self from everyone its mostly reminds me of overlord and how his denizens are so loyal to him hope you start again with the story. happy christmas and new years
A great story, with an even better MC. ..:.!.:.. ..:.!.:.. (-'.^.'-) -....- ..!.. ..!.. :...:
Membuka SPOILER It's not for everyone, the MC is very dark and seems at times needlessly cruel, but so far the author has done an excellent job with the story. There's a payoff for every choice, even the ones that seem bad at the time. Worldbuilding is excellent, he uses the Byakugan creatively and gives it its deserved spot as an equal of the Sharingan. Imagine if Orochimaru did not get fixated on the Sharingan, the stuff he could accomplish with the Byakugan, combined with meta-knowledge of the verse gives the MC a lot of potential. Downsides: The MC has internal monologues, which might be a story point, if not they add little to the story. The relationships are shallow, the MC exploits everyone so there is possessiveness on her part, but no real depth in the relationships. It is most obvious in her relationship with her mother.
Membuka SPOILER Even though there aren’t that many chapters yet this is an awesome novel. Already one of my favorite naruto ff on here. The way her power is increasing and how it’s explained makes for such an interesting read. The grammar is top notch and the mc is extremely cunning and with her schemes
if ur reading this, simply put, mc is straight out evil, bully kids like Choji, groom a kid (Naruto), and is op. Don't worry tho, it is all within her plans as she is evil schemer muehehehehe
First of all the title was off putting, not much just hmmm you know, I saw it a few times and was like should i? Then synopsis go hmmm I don't like it and after a week or two I saw it again I was bored I go first chapter then bam whoa and after a few more I just said "how wrong I was" this is nice I love it, every interaction with Naruto makes me see a future Hinata who looks like a queen sitting on him touching his face and smiling and she goes fufufu idk that's what I see when she starts taking, "you know?"
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The story is good, and a Yandare MC is quite enjoyable, but, I personally dislike how heavy the grooming is. I just feel bad for how she is manipulating Naruto, but overall, great story.
I haven't gotten the chance to read this yet. however, from the reviews, I can't wait. Though if I'm honest, I might be using this as a. it of a guide. But once I do read what's available, I'll give a better review.
О да! ШИКАРНО! Я даже не думал что кто-то может написать Хинату Хьюгу ТАК хорошо! Очень нравиться её слегка высокомерный характер. наступи на меня! Круто! Она манипулирует для своей пользы. Клан это её собственность! Брат это её игрушка а Наруто её будущий муж который ВСЕХ победит такими темпами. Очень крутая идея.
Sigh, such a good story with a fascinating and interesting mc but the author had to ruin it with the op nonsense! Isnt the gentle fist and having the best byagukan in the universe enough? maybe add senjutsu and even the tenseigan in the future? But NO that wasn't enough for the author; she is now mastering all the elements, learning medicine and killing anbu from the other side of the village with lightning before the academy. Hints about copying other bloodlines... etc. Its so over the top that even kaguya wouldn't be able touch her in a few years. Where is the suspense?
overall it's good. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................