DxD: The King of Dragons

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MagicianMiracle

This time the MC is not a reincarnator while the history of the dxd world is a bit different due to the dragons death and the mc being Mordred also the fact that author said he might do a bit of Fate(nasuverse) stuff from what I've read of the 5 chapters. There isn't much to review beside the writing is great like author other books just bit of mistakes on the spelling of some words but that's very rare beside that I have great expectations for the fanfic!

LV 4

ArtV

As far as chapter 24 I readToo much filler, A lot of the characters feel forced, some scenes seem cringe especially in the comedy part, the MC is very immature (I mean you already know there's a problem with your mind why you're still easily provoked and don't figure out how to fix it) Moreover, he is like a wannabe king Who often wants to look good only his words and actions don't describe that, I hope this book can be better (especially MC character development)

LV 4

HeavenDragon

Disgusting Genderbent

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RS_1

yes some new DXD fic, some of them just dont have flavor

LV 4

Isana_Yashiro

Looking Forward To Your Story Author-San And Future Development Of It Always Supporting Your Work

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Sasha_Reaper

I hope your sister gets a good Isekai. She was a great writer. All the best to you.

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LoL_DxD

yooo its kay gonna see this one as a plus in my daily dose of reads nice

LV 14

TheXeno

May your sister get a large yuri harem in her new paradise. May God bless her and her family.

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Siegfrized

Thank You for everything. Hope you have pleasant Journey.

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Dario_Alcarazz

Everything was going well in the story until the author had to make a forced plot to make the mc a pervert and he is not even a reserved pervert, he is an open pervert much more frank than Issei, the truth is, he ruined the story a lot

LV 4

Slandered_man

Well the story is kinda okay in dxd matters compared to various other fanfics of dxd with more to be desired about various factions and characters The mc is a self-righteous individual who accuses Azazel of being pedo when he try to approach an injured [fem] Vali without any evidence and then doesn’t even bother to correct his misunderstanding all while telling other about azazel being into kids (and Bam you get vali in his group after azazel left her after the accusing shenanigans) And then get mad at kiba yuuto who is like (10-12years) for accusing him of the death of his comrades and involvement in the church holy sword project (The mc basically has sword with strong holy aura pushing it to divine sword, kiba senses that and began to shout at the mc and accuse him of the mentioned above ) The mc then proceeds to call him frenzied dog who Need discipline and threaten him with either submission or death (And rias with her affection for her servants remain silent during all of that and then praised the mc at the end of it ) Also for anyone interested there is : -Kid mc budding romance with Tiamat and the harem -female vali and issei (who like to touch his chest and butt accordingly) -Yuri in the harem with mc presence aka (during threesome) Which is the nail in the coffin honestly With the mc boasting about being dragon and king ,I can’t see how would any dragon (who are famous of their possisiveness of treasures and their mates ) or king which is self explanatory allow his harem to indulge in relationships with each other (cucking himself ) It will begin with his presence but once the interest in each others body begin ,it is game over bro (later it will be relieving each other stress when he is not around ) Don’t tell me they will have interest in yuri staff only when the mc is present

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Doffy1557

rest in peace to your sister a good writer I hope the best isekai to her 🙏

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antony_silva

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John_Rex_98

in honor of the author's sister who wrote this, RIP and thank you, happy journey in Isekai

LV 4

Jester_Fall

Another story I really enjoyed. I was really looking forward to how this would progress in the author’s vision. But now it’s time for said author to rest. I hope you have a beautiful isekai. Live a beautiful life in your next world.

LV 14

WalAcht57

A good fanfic and an author of culture, may she rest in peace. o7

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Siegfrized

Thank you, her story was the reason I played Honkai once more, and it brightened my day when COVID struck. Through the interaction between the author and writer, I was able to overcome my loneliness in isolation. Her story and the protagonist's actions motivated me to finish my thesis. Only now have I realized that the 'Never Give Up' trait that the protagonist has for 'Honkai Corruption', 'Erosion', and 'Oripaty' is picturing the author's way of fighting her illness.

LV 14

inbredbobafett

The story is so good I can read the book with out having to guess what the author means the grammar is good over all a very fun to read book

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pingvinchik

cooooo;oooooooooooooo;ooooooooooooooooooooo;oooooooooo;ooooooooooooooooo;ooooooooooooooooooooooo;ooooooooooooo;oooooooooooooooo;ooooooooooooooooool

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Carlos_Henrique_4295

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