A Destined Young Master Villain

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Xerzxes

Calling all curious minds! Feel free to pick my brain about my novel right here. While it may be my first novel, I poured every ounce of my creativity and effort into it. And English is my fifth language, so forgive me if there are a few grammar mishaps. But hey, why not roll the dice and (please) give the novel a try? thank you! Also bare with the first arc theres some cringe stuff on there but after that I promise no more of that R18 tag is for violence and horror since the mc is quite bloody ruthless in the second arc There’s not going to be Ecchi type scenes until in the later chapters 200+

LV 12

Shivam_Thakur_1883

mc transmigrated into a villain character with vilent personality and next second his personality too 180 degree turn.... he is fking smilling and thanking like some stupid person complete unexpected of his previous body... and guess what no one fking become suspicous... and yeah it's ssoo much cringe to read... ---- his sister look at him disdainfully -- mc does flowery smile--- rest of people be like--- " oh wow young master is changed"....; yeah it's fking cliche story of decent mc in cliche novel...

LV 3

NewbieJimjim

To be honest, I really enjoy reading this novel. The writing is simple and easy to understand. I like how the author combine sci-fi and fantasy element together. The plot looks generic but it is still interesting while reading it. The pacing also great not too fast or too slow. Overall, I really enjoy reading this! Highly recommend!

LV 3

Ashente

As someone who has read many novels in this genre, I can safely say that this novel has everything to be ranked. I'm even surprised at its low ranking. The story is intriguing, the writing is slow, but that makes it easier to visualize the universe and get attached to the characters. I like the rather original turn of events. I'm delighted to recommend this novel. I'm definitely subscribing to it! Keep going author 👍

LV 4

PRINCEAETHER

it's overall a good novel .you can try reading and it's grammer is good and chapter length is also fine and for the plot until where i have is marvelous and character of mc is cunning. so give it a try if you are into villain or academy novels.

LV 1

brokensouls

Until chapter 10, the story goes very well. I would like Zen to fight a lot in the future and that his system was not his entire strength. I would like his talent to also decide the development of his strength. The author of patience and great success.

LV 13

Eternal_Shu

give more more more!!!!!we want more@##!!!

LV 4

Kapia_Taba

so here is my review on this novel, writing quality is good, story development, is like ok character design is good, update quality do mass release bro[img=disgusted][img=disgusted] and world background is good 👍 in my opinion , I like villainous Mc so I liked this novel till now hope author don't mess this novel and don't drop this novel

LV 14

Yandere_Obsession

Listen the writing quality and quantity could improve but there’s usually two chp a day so don’t really mater to much just the quality makes people want to drop even if everything else is great. It’s pacing isn’t to fast or slow it’s to the point. The Charcters could use some work showing more sides of them and making them a little less stupid. Overall book got insane potential for the future.

LV 13

Alejandro_Plaza

Waiting for more chapters, more development of the story and character.. Having high expectations, and hoping not to be disappointed in the end.. Recommendable so far, and hoping it won't be abandoned..

LV 1

Thiago_Ferreira_6770

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LV 13

Xerzxes

Hey, Im just here to say please give the novel a review thank you!

This novel has a unique setting this actually is my first novel on this app I found this while searching for the novel I was going to read at first I was just going to ignore it because it only have few chapters but I’m very satisfied with the work so far the author has done. It also seems like it is the first work of this authors it’s very well done.

LV 12

Just_act_lazy

where are you? bro it's been over a month

LV 4

Divine_Sovereignty

Sigh! Mc is like a lucky bastard who had everything it not fun u could have guess what will happen next in every arch smh if he despise the protagonists just kill him why go through all that trouble he has everything people could possibly think off and he talking about creating secret organization when all he did was just took large chunk of his family military and renamed it blackout😂 the most outrageous part is that he got and limitless overpowered system 😂on top of the the endless might of his family if he get op system just get him reborn as a commoner sigh it hard getting a novel that would make on excited

LV 4

ArthurDexVillin

It's good novel, it's not for serious reader, but it's good for light reader, the world and characters are also engaging. So, overall if you are into anti-hero, villain type mc this novel is good pick. I just wish there where more chapters though.

LV 1

ReazIQ

Yo just don't give up on this novel 🤞 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 15

NecW

The system panel is unique, and I like the plot concept. I've left the author some feedback that can turn this novel with potential into something great!

The plot is perfect and everything in the story has its own reason for happening. Pretty much everything make sense and the story flows smoothly.