Blazing eyes (Uchiha OCSI)

LV 4

CruelReality

The grammar and the story are lovely. The biggest issue I have is with how illogical the MC is. The MC is way weaker than he should be because he constantly is creating conflict between himself and his clan. If he simply pretended to be conpliant and utilized the clan library and training he could be comparable to itachi. Instead he outwardly and overtly insults everyone for no reason thus drastically weakening himself. He also seems to have no agency as he lets people he cares about die (shisui/Mikoto) and does not attempt to change anything. All this MC does is get in his own way and act depressed. Anyway, perhaps there is a chance for character development in the future, but thus far this story is only okay 5.8/10.

LV 1

Mastersun

The author in this one shows the Uchiha clan as absolute evil, and the Hokage as a white and fluffy rabbit, although in fact the Uchiha clan was in many ways unfairly suppressed by 3 Hokage and advisers

LV 1

Angelina_WTF

The fanfiction is completely illogical. mc, as mentioned in other comments, suppresses itself. at first the author says that mc is more talented than itachi, but at the same time he is much weaker than itachi. mc trained for years not to win, but to survive. Wow. as if the author is trying with all his might not to make the protagonist a steward, and thereby makes the story stupid. and here you will not find any battles or anything like that. this is a fanfic just about how mc creates problems for himself out of the blue, always stupid, but tries to seem smart, a little philosophy that doesn’t lead to anything special, in short, stupid fanfic under the wrapper “wow philosophy, I’ve never seen anything like that ". and as for illogicality, well, for example: jiraiya does not teach mc anything, because he is afraid that he will be like orochimaru, and at the same time, just before this line, he said that the main character is too kind and does not want to kill his enemies. further, his only friend was shisui, but he did nothing for him, did not help in any way, did not even want to. this fanfic is a complete disappointment, i was stupid while reading it

LV 2

AnotherAtlas

Two chapter review. Cuz only that many as of now. First chapter was very promising, but the second one has some red flags. First of all, describing a random girl genin? Typically in stories, if something is even remotely described about a person, he/she will be important. And since it's mentioned it's a girl, I fear that the author is in a rush to collect a harem or something, which would turn this into trash. Once again, this is just a red flag as of now, but this one tends to have a 95% prediction rate. Second of all, the simping for the third hokage. I'm not saying he has to be written as some evil mastermind like in some novels, but even then he is often, at the very least, incompetent.

LV 14

YaGa

just don't read it, it's a waste of time.

LV 4

Sleepingdog7917

mc is older then itachi yet he can't prevent the killings simply dumb

LV 2

AnotherAtlas

So, this is an update to a previous review. This novel started off well, but sadly only went downhill. The way this novel one-sidedly shows the uchiha as some sort of evil masterminds and the author and mc simp for the third hokage just seems childish and cliche. The story could have had some events and dialogue happen very slightly differently and it would have been 3 times better than the way it is now. The only way I could justify some of the forced plot is that Shisui used kotoamatsukami on the mc. And we know that didn't happen. Also, if the author is planning to have the mc be with that random purple hair genin girl, he should add the romance tag.

LV 4

Haise_Sasaki1

Room temperature iq mc.... ........ . ....

LV 4

1Volk_Winc_est4

I'm surprised to discover that there's a kind of illogical and ridiculous hatred of the uchiha clan in the fan fiction community. The main character is a sort of hateful spoiled brat, who alienates his extended family (his clan) for no reason other than his subjectivity and the anti-Uchiha bias he has. In this story, the third hokage is not the cynical, naive coward he actually was, but a sort of whitewashed grandpa and his clan is demonized.

LV 4

Humbuub

The MC is just hard to like. Author had a major asspull when suddenly everyone starts to like MC. Everything is just illogical and it made the reading experience less enjoyable. The writing is good though, some missing words/prepositions sometimes but the grammar and structure is on point. The updates is on the slow side.

LV 1

BlueEyesWhiteCat

Some of the reviews didn't do justice to this fic. Sure, at the start MC did frustratingly inconsistent, but the development, pacing, and dialogue between the characters overall are pretty well-thought out. The only big downside is just the updates, though the writer made a fair trade with longer chapter. Keep going man

LV 3

alabama_man

The MC is obsessed with staying low key and creates all of his own problems by being a little bastard. It's an Uchiha MC that doesn't try and stop the massacre and hides his sharingan.

LV 1

Zenaxs

Thanks for this work. Please do not believe the low rating, I understand why some might not like it, but for the same reason I liked it, so I advise you to give a chance to fiction

LV 4

Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 3

SOMBRIO

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LV 2

Machete_007

Don't read the reviews this story is a progressive one. The more you read it the better it becomes.Just read it and stick to it you will thank me,..................................................mm...........,.

LV 1

DaoistvLIrkc

great fan fiction and then tired of all the Chinese....,................................................................................................................................................................,..............

LV 14

Skaviouz

I disagree with some reviewers now that I've read the first 29 chapters. Yes, the MC is emo, but I don't think it feels unrealistic. People talk game about how he never wanted to help his own clan and how the author makes Hiruzen the epitome of goodness while the Uchiha is portrayed as bad, but I disagree. There is a arc where he calls out the Hokage to his two teachers. Also it's worth noting that it wasn't all the Uchiha, only a select few. So I think other reviewers are focusing on small segments. I like how the story feels like it has actual development of the character and how they interact with others. I don't feel like bad when there is a time skip and I enjoy the few episodic filler which can be used for character development at times and not only comedy. There is consistent new chapters over the last month and the writing is acceptable quality and I don't recall anything bad when I think back on it.