Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits

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MrZeeb

Writing quality - Like always, the content is well delivered and the way the power system and spells is developed seems very interesting and well thought out from what we know so far. Looking forward to seeing more of it. Story Development - World building has started off strong, has the foundations to be a great story. Quite interested in seeing how the MCs relationships are going to develop. Character Design - Definitely one of your best written MCs and side characters, every interaction has been fleshed out throughly, and the characters aren’t cardboard placements. The MCs personality is great, not cheesy or overly edgy. Hope to see more interactions! All in all, story has great potential and i cannot wait to see more of it!

LV 14

SleepDeprivedSloth

Alright, writing this review to clear some of the doubts some readers have. This review should help you decide whether to pick this book or not. First, and the most important thing, The relationship between Vaan and his mother will be a completely normal mother-son relationship. I don't even know why I even need to make this clear, I never hinted at any kind of romantic interest between the two, pls. Second, this book will not have a harem. Third, MC's character might be a bit because of his history. And uhh... I don't have anything else to say... Ah right, This book is amazing. I can say it because I have read it till the last chapter. I even know the future chapters so I can tell you that this book will get even better. So you guys should read it.

LV 14

SleepDeprivedSloth

Hai Hai! I will be writing the 10th review myself. My book? Definitely 5 Stars. (Biased I am, kukuku.) Anyways, I can confidently say that this is my most well-thought-out book out of all I have written so far, the world-building is great, I gave my all to write a likable characters with their own flaws and potential to grow. The magic in the book isn't just normal, "Fireball!" And boom! I have tried to explain Magic Theories, Magic Circles, Inner Circles, Magic Patterns, and all that to make it as immersive as I can. Honestly, I will just say one thing, Trust your sloth friend and read the first 20-30 chapters, I am sure you will not regret it. Thank you~ Have a great day~

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Antaka

Here's a detailed review.I have got nothing bad to say about it. The mc is likable, uses his brain, is witty and most important of all is far less cringey than Nux and far less edgy than Azriel. In short a well balanced and a well written Mc. The story itself is very interesting and world background seems very wide from the little info we got. The characters do not seem 2D altho i dont know if it'll be the same in the future(i sincerely hope it does). Its very easy to read and not very complex. One thing i'd like to advice to author sama is this time please flesh out characters and give them depth through various events, be they from past or present, so the readers can emotionally connect to the characters. Internal monologues and POV changes is one such way of doing things. Ofc creating an entire rough file for the character traits and personality makes it easier for the author to decide which actions a certain character will take in various situations. AND ofc thanks for giving us another banger, hope to see more of you soon.

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Dev_Sankhla

5 Stars from me cause I really like 'SHGS'as for the book so far it's good, but i hope you drop more chapters fast cause 18 chapters is very few for me to build intrest , well you can drop atleast till 30 chapter really fast.and finally the MC personality there's nothing to complain really likable.keep up the good work

LV 14

FOOL01

think i need to give my first review, and a negative one at that. Author dropped this novel without a word (on webnovel). an hes still around since he's updating his other novel. low score is to draw attention since most people like to give 5s on this platform

LV 15

EnergyDao

5 stars cause it fits my liking and has high quality while not mincing the social factors of the story development, although a bot slower than the usual for the author development quiet a nice read.

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Retlom

what a great read so far your writing improved by a lot. this might turn to my favorite novel from you [img=update]

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Pewkmon

Thought i reviewed already. Either way, a book made by Mr. Sloth is bound to be a masterpiece in writing. Altough found some things about the book that i didn’t like, they were minimal and didn’t ruin the experiance in the slightest. I find this to be a great book

LV 3

giveantake

so for what ever reason the author has decided to stop updating this novel out of blue. they are updating their other novel, so was an interesting choice to 'drop' this without a word. the score reflects the fact the author is no longer updating, so theres no point in reading this. otherwise this would have been another highly scored review .

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Aditya_7228

love the book!! was hooked instantly,, but can change the name, sounds pretty lazy.. .other than that amazing also I m heading to read your another book heard it's a great read so i off..

LV 13

The_True_KING_

Another great work by Sloth. It's great but still too little chapters😭 and thank you for another great read

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Gyraton

Made by sloth makes it an automatic 5 idc about anything else. But the story is good for anyone that wonders.

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AeonAeon

Author isn't making clear when he is gonna start updating again or if he has dropped this novel.

LV 1

AkiraaYue

Sigma Mc, op mom and a cute waifu, what else does a man need.. 10stars!!!

LV 15

Eitay

This story sure shows the development of the author in writing, so far (24 chapters) it is well written

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ACE_KinGz

selfish review I like overpowered MC and 18 tag............,.........................................................................

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Vaishu_Wankhedhe

Want moreeeeee.. you will love it.. I specially liked the cool names.. I hope the spirits have too. like having their own background would be kinda cool.. imagine a cute little spirit saying in a cheeky way "I am Aqua Oceansia" my frnd recmded it.. it's awesome she was bragging as if she wrote it on her own. .

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AkiraYue

Loved it... Mc is an absolute chad. btw harem?

LV 15

B0mbaCl0ck

I'll give a 5 for good luck.Question: Is there harem? Will his mother be in it? Asking for a friend.