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Duke_Of_Dunks

Grammar isnt perfect but its not bad. Plot is ok. The characters are ok. Overall an "Okay" story.

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1mth
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Shakila_Shoemaker

This is a really good book after the first chapter it gets way better the story has really good writing when it comes to characters

1mth
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Shapla_Easmin

if I have to say anything about this story in one line then i say that it is legendary. there is much book like is kind of plot in all web novel. I wait for update every week . it is one of my favorite book in web novel . please don't drop off this book 🙏🙏🙏 please

2mth
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Malthaael

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2mth
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Yuri_is_Ntr

I'm not here to reading about a manchild playing a game, come on we have twitch for this... But really high iq? You a not talking about mc are you? Because that would be a lot more disappointing then it is right now.

4mth
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DaoistosrKh6

the longest fakin useless prolonged I had ever seen ch 80+ and we are still not in DxD, and increase your tiny idiot as* knowledge about overlord Donki

4mth
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Martin_Den_Katte

Very good, but not perfect. If you like overload I would recommend reading this. The "New-World" Arc is pretty fire, but what scares me is the DXD arc, as I have no clue how It will turn out. Me personally I would rather it only stay in the "New-World" and not move on.

4mth
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DaoisthtV4wE

Writing Quality: Author takes inspirations but to the level where you could say he is copying other works directly. Story Devlopment: After a 100 Chapters, the story didn't reach anywhere, espcecially in High School DxD Character Design: OC are dull and one dimensional and others are out of character most of the time. Updating Stability: Takes a lot of time but the contact delivered isn't of quality. World Background: Better than other stuff but yeah...

5mth
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JavaKing

the start were pretty good. the game world i mean. but when he finally came to "new world", it went down pretty fast.

5mth
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Dantalion34

It's not bad not good either I can tell some parts of it is ripped off from overlord origin in some parts in the gamer arc and the chaotic good fic in the chaloric stone and the ouroboros scene............................................................................................................

6mth
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autumn_sonata

.........................................stay strong

9mth
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Killah_King

I was enjoying it, but it is way to focused on the harem, the author doesent thìnk tĥrough their plot, focuses on the wrong things plus doesnt use what he writes.

9mth
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Vishakh_Nair_3606

author, I want to know whether the mc will to another world like Naruto,one piece, etc. If so, when will he go and which one will he go

11mth
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Theory18

very good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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Kil0
LV 4 Badge

This story is incredibly well written. I wasn’t a fan of a few of the plot points but the actual quality of the writing is far superior to the average fanfic.

1yr
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LastGod

This is just a dude playing a video game in fanfiction form. I mean, I lost interest in it so fast. I could be doing this instead of reading about it.

1yr
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Jorah26252

Just another overlord novel with a psychotic evil mc that gains power and forgets his morals.

1yr
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KIKOwoods_gaming

i absolutely love this fanfic and hope you continue it.

1yr
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SeijiKageyama

I just finished the Yggdrasil arc and I can only say that I absolutely loved it.

1yr
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We_Are_Gamers

more more... more more...moi more...moi mmmoooorrrreeeee

1yr
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NyxOuroboros

I, who read the Overlord LN, find this fic disgusting. Although the main idea is good, I suggest deleting this completely, reading the Overlord and DxD LN, and then creating something readable.

1yr
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Evrabonzz

I don't know why but this plot development is very familiar. Hmm... I wonder.No hate, keep up the good work ma boi.

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1yr
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Dog_That_Eat_Flame

If you find this Fanfic good, then I have a better recommendation for you guys. Try reading Overlord: The Origin. It a fanfic that where most of the idea of this fanfic came from. My author guy here butchered some parts of it and pasted it here, things like fight, loots, and even events are got copied from it.

1yr
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lemmongrasp

great fanfic, it has a good beginning, it's slow paced but not too slow, great development, it's become one of my most favorite dragon mc fanfic :3

1yr
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aaron_ayavire_1332

---------very nice.....----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

1yr
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Michael_Kelly_1022

This story has been quite good and has left an impression on me but I have join this story on the ater parts of it thus I have a bias for some of the details off this review as this is based off of one of the anime I appreciate the most this is the main reason that I say hat I am bias in this review and find this story to be as great as is, now for the criticism of this story some details are taken from the original story it was based on others feel like a dead horse being beaten over and over to work and doesn't come out right as well as he use of a system skill as Friday feels as if the author just wanted a way to make the instince that happens to the mc to happen but that all doesn't stop making his story to be as amazing as I think it to be

1yr
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Treagon_Volkihar

I really enjoyed reading this far, I had a lot of fun reading it, and I see a lot of potential in this fanfic, I really hope this story continues, because I really want to see its conclusion

1yr
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XII_6869

People are so thirsty for overlord content even a mediocre story with bad grammar gets so popular 😂

1yr
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KuNaLsAmA

Your storytelling skills are exceptional, and your characters are so well-developed. However, I couldn't help but notice that the release schedule for new chapters is somewhat longer than I'd prefer. plz don't get me wrong I deeply appreciate the time and effort you put into crafting each chapter. Your commitment to quality is evident in every word, and I wouldn't want you to rush through your creative process. Nonetheless, if it's at all possible, I kindly request that you consider increasing the frequency of chapter releases, even if only by a little. That's it I am off....

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1yr
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flowerDmug

One of the best Overlord fanfics, but I'm going to give it a 3.4 because of the updating stability. I have to wait a whole week to read 1 chapter, so yeah.

1yr
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Duke_Of_Dunks

Grammar isnt perfect but its not bad. Plot is ok. The characters are ok. Overall an "Okay" story.

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1mth
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Shakila_Shoemaker

This is a really good book after the first chapter it gets way better the story has really good writing when it comes to characters

1mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Shapla_Easmin

if I have to say anything about this story in one line then i say that it is legendary. there is much book like is kind of plot in all web novel. I wait for update every week . it is one of my favorite book in web novel . please don't drop off this book 🙏🙏🙏 please

2mth
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Malthaael

........................................

2mth
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Yuri_is_Ntr

I'm not here to reading about a manchild playing a game, come on we have twitch for this... But really high iq? You a not talking about mc are you? Because that would be a lot more disappointing then it is right now.

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
DaoistosrKh6

the longest fakin useless prolonged I had ever seen ch 80+ and we are still not in DxD, and increase your tiny idiot as* knowledge about overlord Donki

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Martin_Den_Katte

Very good, but not perfect. If you like overload I would recommend reading this. The "New-World" Arc is pretty fire, but what scares me is the DXD arc, as I have no clue how It will turn out. Me personally I would rather it only stay in the "New-World" and not move on.

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
DaoisthtV4wE

Writing Quality: Author takes inspirations but to the level where you could say he is copying other works directly. Story Devlopment: After a 100 Chapters, the story didn't reach anywhere, espcecially in High School DxD Character Design: OC are dull and one dimensional and others are out of character most of the time. Updating Stability: Takes a lot of time but the contact delivered isn't of quality. World Background: Better than other stuff but yeah...

5mth
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JavaKing

the start were pretty good. the game world i mean. but when he finally came to "new world", it went down pretty fast.

5mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Dantalion34

It's not bad not good either I can tell some parts of it is ripped off from overlord origin in some parts in the gamer arc and the chaotic good fic in the chaloric stone and the ouroboros scene............................................................................................................

6mth
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autumn_sonata

.........................................stay strong

9mth
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Killah_King

I was enjoying it, but it is way to focused on the harem, the author doesent thìnk tĥrough their plot, focuses on the wrong things plus doesnt use what he writes.

9mth
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Vishakh_Nair_3606

author, I want to know whether the mc will to another world like Naruto,one piece, etc. If so, when will he go and which one will he go

11mth
Lihat 1 balasan
Theory18

very good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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Kil0
LV 4 Badge

This story is incredibly well written. I wasn’t a fan of a few of the plot points but the actual quality of the writing is far superior to the average fanfic.

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
LastGod

This is just a dude playing a video game in fanfiction form. I mean, I lost interest in it so fast. I could be doing this instead of reading about it.

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Jorah26252

Just another overlord novel with a psychotic evil mc that gains power and forgets his morals.

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
KIKOwoods_gaming

i absolutely love this fanfic and hope you continue it.

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
SeijiKageyama

I just finished the Yggdrasil arc and I can only say that I absolutely loved it.

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
We_Are_Gamers

more more... more more...moi more...moi mmmoooorrrreeeee

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
NyxOuroboros

I, who read the Overlord LN, find this fic disgusting. Although the main idea is good, I suggest deleting this completely, reading the Overlord and DxD LN, and then creating something readable.

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Evrabonzz

I don't know why but this plot development is very familiar. Hmm... I wonder.No hate, keep up the good work ma boi.

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1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Dog_That_Eat_Flame

If you find this Fanfic good, then I have a better recommendation for you guys. Try reading Overlord: The Origin. It a fanfic that where most of the idea of this fanfic came from. My author guy here butchered some parts of it and pasted it here, things like fight, loots, and even events are got copied from it.

1yr
Lihat 3 balasan
lemmongrasp

great fanfic, it has a good beginning, it's slow paced but not too slow, great development, it's become one of my most favorite dragon mc fanfic :3

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
aaron_ayavire_1332

---------very nice.....----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Michael_Kelly_1022

This story has been quite good and has left an impression on me but I have join this story on the ater parts of it thus I have a bias for some of the details off this review as this is based off of one of the anime I appreciate the most this is the main reason that I say hat I am bias in this review and find this story to be as great as is, now for the criticism of this story some details are taken from the original story it was based on others feel like a dead horse being beaten over and over to work and doesn't come out right as well as he use of a system skill as Friday feels as if the author just wanted a way to make the instince that happens to the mc to happen but that all doesn't stop making his story to be as amazing as I think it to be

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Treagon_Volkihar

I really enjoyed reading this far, I had a lot of fun reading it, and I see a lot of potential in this fanfic, I really hope this story continues, because I really want to see its conclusion

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
XII_6869

People are so thirsty for overlord content even a mediocre story with bad grammar gets so popular 😂

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
KuNaLsAmA

Your storytelling skills are exceptional, and your characters are so well-developed. However, I couldn't help but notice that the release schedule for new chapters is somewhat longer than I'd prefer. plz don't get me wrong I deeply appreciate the time and effort you put into crafting each chapter. Your commitment to quality is evident in every word, and I wouldn't want you to rush through your creative process. Nonetheless, if it's at all possible, I kindly request that you consider increasing the frequency of chapter releases, even if only by a little. That's it I am off....

img
1yr
Lihat 2 balasan
flowerDmug

One of the best Overlord fanfics, but I'm going to give it a 3.4 because of the updating stability. I have to wait a whole week to read 1 chapter, so yeah.

1yr
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