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This fanfic is good-----------------------------------------------------------Chapters update schedule is stable and not inconsistent, the grammar is good and the writing is not annoying, the characters are well written and not boring(my favourite character is the Finn), the story is interesting and entertaining, the author is willing to listen to good suggestions and answers questions and he is doing his best to make it realistic so no forced plot or unrealistic gains and wins, the MC has flaws and is not perfect which shows the characters being put to good use as advisors and not just being put there to be amazed and awed.-----------------------------------------------------------Overall nice story, its one of my favourite fanfics good job author 👍
Quero mais! História muito boa. Gosto de Robert, gostaria que a antiga amizade não tivesse se perdido, espero que o Ned Stark fique bem. Gostaria de ver os gigantes indo pra Prússia.
Hola me gusta mucho la historia aún que me gustaba más la primera alguien que no sabía nada del mundo eso está va muy bueno pero no me quejó del cambio espero que la termines y si podes termina la primera gracias que tenga un buen fin de Año
So the problem is if the author is stupid you can't convince the people that the character is smart, the example of smart character is the author of manga kingdom, that manga is another level the tactic and strategy is convincing that the characters is smart.
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chapter 153: personal request. well... here I am giving my review, that I otherwise would never give. great novel absolutely solid writing quality.
My second criticism of the author's fanfic, I almost gave up after reading up to chapter 28, I made some criticisms and the author and he convinced me to continue reading, on the web there is also no kingdom building fanfic so I kept reading, now I really like the fanfic and I'm practically on chapter 60, my only complaint is that the points of view that appear in the fanfic have to be of interesting and important characters not of small NPC, the protagonist could have more prominence then the fanfic would be perfect
I really wanted to give it 5 stars but there are certain things that really bother me about the story. I read it up to chapter 28. The protagonist doesn't even appear in the story properly, like he doesn't have any feats or dialogue that makes us readers like him. The protagonist is insignificant in the story because he doesn't have any moments that the protagonist has. Another thing I hate about this story is how the author portrayed the protagonist's army as much more intelligent, strong and perfect, while all the people of Westeros are dumb. It took a lot of the fun out of the story. I don't know if I'll be able to continue reading if this isn't fixed.
A really interesting fic, The author improves with each new chapter. I haven't seen the concept like this before and the politics are more complex than in other fiction. Also a good MC, highly recommended.
amazing story with great concepts and ideas that dosent strictly follow the original. definitely worth reading
everything is great, only problems with the release of chapters, they are inconsistent and they come out rarely, and the chapters themselves are short, but compared to the work itself, it's worth it
It is interesting, and unique story. You don’t find a story like this ever day on WebNovel you can read for free
I read until Ch.120 for now and plan to continue. This is a great story and I recommend it. It’s great that the mc tries to improve his lands in ways that are rarely done. It’s generally just the printing press, gunpowder and 4 fields rotation, which is fine and I hope that he adds at least 2/3 of these but it’s sad that it doesn’t go further like this story. Ignore the people complaining about Jenna, Jana? Anyway, it’s objectively a good choice at the time, unless he waits almost 2 decades to find someone else but that would be stupid without an heir. It’s clear that the Prussians are OP due to reasons explained at the start, if you don’t like that then It might not be for you.
amazing story telling, the quotation mark usage could use some sharpening, but other than that, the setting and character progression is my cup of coffee.
Very good story. The author has shown clear improvement in their writing formatting as the story progresses, and its perhaps the only story that I actively make sure to check for new chapters for.
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
One of the best stories out there. Highly suggest it if you want a different take than the usual Game of Thrones stories.
Very interesting fanfanic 🥰👍........................................................... ......................................................................................................
This must continue, it is one of my favorite stories I’ve read. BLOOD AND IRON
I like this book a lot. It's definitely one of the better GOT fanfics on web novel.There is some small concerns of mine like the upload consistency
I made a whole paragraph explaining why it’s good and deleted it on accident so now all you get is FUIYOOOOOOH
It’s really good definitely top 3 GOT FFS on here and definitely top 10 of all fanfics on here
It’s a great story, with a great plot, a great prologue and conflicts that are consistently entertaining, engaging and immersive. You actually feel as if the nation the MC inhabite is alive and thriving with their choices, factions and ideologies serving a purpose and having an entertaining impact on the GOT world. This is hands down the best fic I have ever read in the Game if Thrones universe and probably will ever read as it’s that good (not opposed to suggestions to other stories if you have some). The author does mostly everything right and gets better at writing as the story goes on.
I love the unique approach you have to transmigration and Reincarnation. one of the first I've read where more than just the MC gets brought to another world. the culture clash is also very interesting, yes a little information heavy at times but if you can get through it that information brings a whole new perspective on a couple of events. Oh and The Finn is awesome. Thank you author! Good Soup.
Reading the story since the old one, the rewritten one, and now the comeback one.. Come on man, keep writing it till it's finished and done..
Gostei da história, continuarei lendo...................................................m...........mm...........................................................................................
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The story idea is good . The author really needs to learn when and where to use quotation marks. He uses them for every paragraph.
This fanfic is good-----------------------------------------------------------Chapters update schedule is stable and not inconsistent, the grammar is good and the writing is not annoying, the characters are well written and not boring(my favourite character is the Finn), the story is interesting and entertaining, the author is willing to listen to good suggestions and answers questions and he is doing his best to make it realistic so no forced plot or unrealistic gains and wins, the MC has flaws and is not perfect which shows the characters being put to good use as advisors and not just being put there to be amazed and awed.-----------------------------------------------------------Overall nice story, its one of my favourite fanfics good job author 👍
Quero mais! História muito boa. Gosto de Robert, gostaria que a antiga amizade não tivesse se perdido, espero que o Ned Stark fique bem. Gostaria de ver os gigantes indo pra Prússia.
Hola me gusta mucho la historia aún que me gustaba más la primera alguien que no sabía nada del mundo eso está va muy bueno pero no me quejó del cambio espero que la termines y si podes termina la primera gracias que tenga un buen fin de Año
So the problem is if the author is stupid you can't convince the people that the character is smart, the example of smart character is the author of manga kingdom, that manga is another level the tactic and strategy is convincing that the characters is smart.
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chapter 153: personal request. well... here I am giving my review, that I otherwise would never give. great novel absolutely solid writing quality.
My second criticism of the author's fanfic, I almost gave up after reading up to chapter 28, I made some criticisms and the author and he convinced me to continue reading, on the web there is also no kingdom building fanfic so I kept reading, now I really like the fanfic and I'm practically on chapter 60, my only complaint is that the points of view that appear in the fanfic have to be of interesting and important characters not of small NPC, the protagonist could have more prominence then the fanfic would be perfect
I really wanted to give it 5 stars but there are certain things that really bother me about the story. I read it up to chapter 28. The protagonist doesn't even appear in the story properly, like he doesn't have any feats or dialogue that makes us readers like him. The protagonist is insignificant in the story because he doesn't have any moments that the protagonist has. Another thing I hate about this story is how the author portrayed the protagonist's army as much more intelligent, strong and perfect, while all the people of Westeros are dumb. It took a lot of the fun out of the story. I don't know if I'll be able to continue reading if this isn't fixed.
A really interesting fic, The author improves with each new chapter. I haven't seen the concept like this before and the politics are more complex than in other fiction. Also a good MC, highly recommended.
amazing story with great concepts and ideas that dosent strictly follow the original. definitely worth reading
everything is great, only problems with the release of chapters, they are inconsistent and they come out rarely, and the chapters themselves are short, but compared to the work itself, it's worth it
It is interesting, and unique story. You don’t find a story like this ever day on WebNovel you can read for free
I read until Ch.120 for now and plan to continue. This is a great story and I recommend it. It’s great that the mc tries to improve his lands in ways that are rarely done. It’s generally just the printing press, gunpowder and 4 fields rotation, which is fine and I hope that he adds at least 2/3 of these but it’s sad that it doesn’t go further like this story. Ignore the people complaining about Jenna, Jana? Anyway, it’s objectively a good choice at the time, unless he waits almost 2 decades to find someone else but that would be stupid without an heir. It’s clear that the Prussians are OP due to reasons explained at the start, if you don’t like that then It might not be for you.
amazing story telling, the quotation mark usage could use some sharpening, but other than that, the setting and character progression is my cup of coffee.
Very good story. The author has shown clear improvement in their writing formatting as the story progresses, and its perhaps the only story that I actively make sure to check for new chapters for.
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
One of the best stories out there. Highly suggest it if you want a different take than the usual Game of Thrones stories.
Very interesting fanfanic 🥰👍........................................................... ......................................................................................................
This must continue, it is one of my favorite stories I’ve read. BLOOD AND IRON
I like this book a lot. It's definitely one of the better GOT fanfics on web novel.There is some small concerns of mine like the upload consistency
I made a whole paragraph explaining why it’s good and deleted it on accident so now all you get is FUIYOOOOOOH
It’s really good definitely top 3 GOT FFS on here and definitely top 10 of all fanfics on here
It’s a great story, with a great plot, a great prologue and conflicts that are consistently entertaining, engaging and immersive. You actually feel as if the nation the MC inhabite is alive and thriving with their choices, factions and ideologies serving a purpose and having an entertaining impact on the GOT world. This is hands down the best fic I have ever read in the Game if Thrones universe and probably will ever read as it’s that good (not opposed to suggestions to other stories if you have some). The author does mostly everything right and gets better at writing as the story goes on.
I love the unique approach you have to transmigration and Reincarnation. one of the first I've read where more than just the MC gets brought to another world. the culture clash is also very interesting, yes a little information heavy at times but if you can get through it that information brings a whole new perspective on a couple of events. Oh and The Finn is awesome. Thank you author! Good Soup.
Reading the story since the old one, the rewritten one, and now the comeback one.. Come on man, keep writing it till it's finished and done..
Gostei da história, continuarei lendo...................................................m...........mm...........................................................................................
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The story idea is good . The author really needs to learn when and where to use quotation marks. He uses them for every paragraph.