Find Me, In Another Place And Time

LV 12

obiparadise_purity

A very interesting story, and I must say the author did a very good job in writing this story. I don't usually read story like this but this book kept me on one spot for hours. I love the character Lea and Rea, and the story kept me hooked.

LV 13

DollyRoma

To begin, I wish the synopsis was more attractive. It made the story sound like a novel that needed to be in the male lead category and overall lacked excitement. Secondly, the author is obviously most likely a fan of anime and manga based on the plot. I read a manga recently with a plot very very similar to this, not saying the story is stolen or anything…no no no, I’m just saying it could’ve been a bit more original. Lastly, as an avid reader of romance novels, I honestly do not think this novel will do very well in the female lead category. Its themes and elements are more suited for male audiences. However, updates are consistent and the grammar is more than decent. There was unfortunately no poetry in the wording so reading didn’t immerse me in the novel but it’s best quality is that it is a good plot. I hope the author isn’t negatively swayed by my words, but this is my honest review. All the best with your writing 🫶

LV 1

GMSJakers

I immediately thought this was more of a romance story, but many things surprised me as I read this book, completely altering my initial thought about this story.

LV 3

Qilinblood

It's seriously mesmerizing! The author brilliantly blends romance, mystery, and the idea of parallel worlds into one captivating story. The writing style is so captivating, and the characters feel so real that you can't help but get emotionally attached. While there are a few moments where the pacing feels a bit off, it doesn't take away from the overall experience.

LV 4

YourAverage_Reader

To be true I don't really like story's with female lead there over drama irritates me, but after reading first few chapter, i found myself more and more into story. though start may be bit slow but its steady and Appling. i am looking forward to your next chapter....another thing attracted me was your cover, it realy a very different approach, though some might find it boring i really liked that.

LV 1

Scorpious_star

The pacing of the book is superb, with each chapter flowing seamlessly into the next. The author's ability to paint vivid imagery with words is truly remarkable. The plot twists and turns, keeping readers on the edge of their seats, eager to uncover the next revelation. It is a testament to the author's skill that the story maintains its momentum while allowing for moments of introspection and emotional depth. GREAT WORK!!!

LV 13

Crown_Nyx

I dont normally like female leads but this was done nice. The story progressing at a nice pace only needs more constant updates! Keep up the work

LV 3

ForerunnerOfSky

Very well written in terms of flow, grammar, disalogue and imagery. There’s not much to complain about it has a solid premise and has a lot of potential. Hope to see it grow in popularity

LV 3

Bloom07

Theirs not much to complain about your writing, it was simply marvelous. And although I don't read much about female lead stories but I didn't expect it to be this good. The story has huge potential. Keep on writing🪶

LV 2

Rock_writer

It's a great story and it's plots are great but the names of characters' name are really funny. As I read the story it turns more and more intresting I'm waiting for the next chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 1

Billy_Bags

Man, I can't say enough good things about how nice of a read this is. It just flows so easily. Love the characters, love the world building, everything. Can't wait to read more.

LV 4

Shadow_Library_

interest plot and characters have a great potential, also the writing improved throughout the story, keep it up and I wish this novel a great achievements

LV 3

NewbieJimjim

I enjoy the tone and reference in the story; even though the story might be slow, the narrative and details are well-written. There are a few grammar errors, but they are not a big deal. Overall this is an exciting novel for the hunter genre.

LV 3

Theothegiant

Honestly not a fan of system genres they tend to be repetitive and predictable but the story line and the character interactions totally made up for it its like one of those rare exceptions!

LV 4

Harleeyah24

Honestly, this exceeded my expectations by far! I love the storyline already! It’s a familiar plot, retold from a completely unique and very intriguing perspective. I cant wait to see how the story unfolds further! This was fantastic!

LV 11

The_Mad_Titan

A lovely read for anyone interested in the system genre. Although there are a few grammatical blunders, the author makes up for them by keeping us on our toes with each chapter, providing interesting dialogues and a vivid look at the kind of world the story is based in. Keep up the good work author!

LV 3

Shamira_Farhath

Good effort Author! Begining in a simple manner, you neatly differentiated the difference between the world and earth, eventhough the setting is more or less similar to earth. I find it fun just getting started with the first chapter itself. Great work author. Keep it up.

LV 4

Annisax

I am very impressed with your writing skills. Every detail is fully described properly and the more chapters I read the addicted I get. Please don't keep me waiting, keep updating the chapters[img=update]

LV 4

KayLillyt_1

This is really worth it. There are so many unexpected twists and turns. In a nutshell, it’s an unpredictable one. The author is doing a good job. An Interesting story with even more interesting characters. Love it!

LV 14

yunjun

A good start. Although I usually don't read FL, the story fits within litRPG themes, which I like. The world setting has many things common in the genre, such as dungeons and hunters, but the author also adds their own ideas. However, the idea of main character, who is not yet a licensed hunter, being ordered to enter a dungeon seems a bit unrealistic to me. I think it would be better if she decided to snuck in herself, or if there were more convincing reasons why it needs to be her presented. Overall, shows promise, nice work!