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The author wrote themself into a corner and just kept slamming their face into the corner over and over again to the point that it got annoying to read.
Wow this ... The novel is a very good piece of fiction I give 5 stars without hesitationThe MC has a very OP energy, I really like it . . And I hope Thea will be paired with Kiana. Thanks to the author :)
Happy 1 Year Anniversary. It's has been a year since this book published, it's amazing how far this goes! Not only one of my Fav Fanfic, this book one of few amazing Honkai Impact 3 story in webnovel.
OMG!! ... . . I think this is one of the best fiction honkai stories especially Thea's power is overpower fic honkai I see .. ... ....👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍
soo, just a quick question, is KiaMei cannon in this fanfic? like, i've been looking for a kiamei comic and i can't find one soo
I found this book at April, that time this book only have 10 chapter and following till 50ish chapter coz that time busy with released Honkai game and fgo making with little time for webnovel. Unfortunately last month i got sad news that my favorite webnovel author get Isekai'ed, she write "Honkai Impact: Invictus." making me feel sad when play honkai, that's why I read this again, i hope that this story give happy ending or at least give happy story of beautiful girl just like what Elysia said, to heal my 'kokoro'
for my tuna only five stars is acceptable...................................................................................................................
it quite fun, at first I was skeptical since well, you know, things, but after I read it for awhile I am in fact quite hook.anyway, imma go and reread it now.will come back here after the 7th time.
one of the decent honkai fics on this app for ranking its invictus 1st this 2nd herrscher of shadow 3rd its third just because the herrscher of civilization fic hasnt exceded 100 chapters yet
ate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3
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Its great! The characters are very real, meaning the author has a profund understanding of the source material(Honkai Impact 3rd, That i started playing because of this fanfic), The pace is slow but the author releases 1 chapter per day, so it isnt a problem, However what i am worried about is the Grammar, which the author forgets to use verbs + ING, Example: in chapter 109 the author iniciates the chapter with "Sat" instead of Sitting, But its not that of a big problem, because most webnovels fanfic readers have reached a auto-translanting realm of comprehension of the Dao of Reading.
In my experience as a reader of many books and written a few samples of stories myself. As long as you explain things decently about the lore in honkai, it is enough for anyone to understand the story.Think of it as men meeting each other without knowing each others name but still laughing, joking, and jovially having a great time.
The story is very fluid so fluid that you don't feel the hours go by, this Fic is like the happy route, one of the best routes of Honkai Impact.
I really like this story. Hopefully the author is always healthy in writing this . And this story there is tuna.Hopefully this story will continue
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
nice, really like it very much. I see no mistakes here probably. It's very entertaining and interesting,looking forward..more chapters.
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Hello, kayoko Daa! It is here!!! I wrote this review because I still see some people who are confused about this fanfic novel that I made. Is it necessary to play the Honkai Impact 3 game to understand this novel? I've tried my best to make ordinary people, non-players, understand LORE game that if you don't play the game honkai impact. But, there may be several different prefective errors that we both misunderstand. Lore exists only to be enjoyed. If you don't understand, it's not fun at all. So, for non-players who read my novel until the last chapter, or for those of you who stopped reading my novel for some reason, please tell me what's confusing you. I'll definitely explain it in the next chapters in a way that makes sense. I will wait...
The author wrote themself into a corner and just kept slamming their face into the corner over and over again to the point that it got annoying to read.
Wow this ... The novel is a very good piece of fiction I give 5 stars without hesitationThe MC has a very OP energy, I really like it . . And I hope Thea will be paired with Kiana. Thanks to the author :)
Happy 1 Year Anniversary. It's has been a year since this book published, it's amazing how far this goes! Not only one of my Fav Fanfic, this book one of few amazing Honkai Impact 3 story in webnovel.
OMG!! ... . . I think this is one of the best fiction honkai stories especially Thea's power is overpower fic honkai I see .. ... ....👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍
soo, just a quick question, is KiaMei cannon in this fanfic? like, i've been looking for a kiamei comic and i can't find one soo
I found this book at April, that time this book only have 10 chapter and following till 50ish chapter coz that time busy with released Honkai game and fgo making with little time for webnovel. Unfortunately last month i got sad news that my favorite webnovel author get Isekai'ed, she write "Honkai Impact: Invictus." making me feel sad when play honkai, that's why I read this again, i hope that this story give happy ending or at least give happy story of beautiful girl just like what Elysia said, to heal my 'kokoro'
for my tuna only five stars is acceptable...................................................................................................................
it quite fun, at first I was skeptical since well, you know, things, but after I read it for awhile I am in fact quite hook.anyway, imma go and reread it now.will come back here after the 7th time.
one of the decent honkai fics on this app for ranking its invictus 1st this 2nd herrscher of shadow 3rd its third just because the herrscher of civilization fic hasnt exceded 100 chapters yet
ate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3 ka pancit cantoonate padala ko 3
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Its great! The characters are very real, meaning the author has a profund understanding of the source material(Honkai Impact 3rd, That i started playing because of this fanfic), The pace is slow but the author releases 1 chapter per day, so it isnt a problem, However what i am worried about is the Grammar, which the author forgets to use verbs + ING, Example: in chapter 109 the author iniciates the chapter with "Sat" instead of Sitting, But its not that of a big problem, because most webnovels fanfic readers have reached a auto-translanting realm of comprehension of the Dao of Reading.
In my experience as a reader of many books and written a few samples of stories myself. As long as you explain things decently about the lore in honkai, it is enough for anyone to understand the story.Think of it as men meeting each other without knowing each others name but still laughing, joking, and jovially having a great time.
The story is very fluid so fluid that you don't feel the hours go by, this Fic is like the happy route, one of the best routes of Honkai Impact.
I really like this story. Hopefully the author is always healthy in writing this . And this story there is tuna.Hopefully this story will continue
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
nice, really like it very much. I see no mistakes here probably. It's very entertaining and interesting,looking forward..more chapters.
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Hello, kayoko Daa! It is here!!! I wrote this review because I still see some people who are confused about this fanfic novel that I made. Is it necessary to play the Honkai Impact 3 game to understand this novel? I've tried my best to make ordinary people, non-players, understand LORE game that if you don't play the game honkai impact. But, there may be several different prefective errors that we both misunderstand. Lore exists only to be enjoyed. If you don't understand, it's not fun at all. So, for non-players who read my novel until the last chapter, or for those of you who stopped reading my novel for some reason, please tell me what's confusing you. I'll definitely explain it in the next chapters in a way that makes sense. I will wait...