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The realism is what makes the novel good, the manner with which the MC describes his emotions and how he levels up with logic I was most impressed with Scentia -- the Oracle Engine it's a "unique" ability that you rarely come across. The novel itself looks like System and at the same time isn't so I understand the tags used.
Dear author, I must say that your novel has caught my attention with its intriguing concept and plot. I encourage you to keep going with the direction you feel is right for the story, and trust in your instincts as a writer. Remember to focus on developing your characters and their motivations, as this will create a strong foundation for the plot to unfold. Additionally, exploring the themes and underlying messages of your story can add depth and resonance to the narrative. Overall, I wish you the best of luck with your novel and look forward to reading more of your work.
thanks for helping me when nobody did. I cannot do much. but here is a cola. thanks!
this book deserves 5 star in my opinion. The writing is good and well to my understanding, the world is well devloped and the author is working hard... what else do we need? I like this book, please dont drop it author
The story is a great one, I love how you describe the different type of magic. The narrative is impressive and I hope Nyx all the best in Excelsior. I know the story is going to get more and more interesting as time goes on.
I must say this novel is great. I really like the way you have created your MC. I loved it. I also love the way you are taking your story ahead. keep it up author. Nice job👍🏻
Nice book, well written, and interesting. I recommend it to everyone out there.
Another shameless review, but you guys should give my novel a try I feel it's really good but doesn't get enough justice for some reason. If you guys want a perfect paced story this is the right one for you, I ask that you not give up on the story simply because it starts off slow. Honestly, my style of System and Reincarnation is different so if you want something special then this is the way to go!
I wholeheartedly endorse this book. Without a doubt, you ought to look it up! I'm only reading the few chapter of this book, so I can only judge it, but I have to commend Sypnosis for being the first chapter that actually grabbed my attention. I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic.
the name and cover of the book is beautiful 😍 I want o read and I like the world background but character design is little bad just a little but plot and writing style is 👍😊
i really like the Main Character, cool and smart. The world building and the writing is amazing. I got more to learn.
reading status 5/5 27/3/23 Dear author I saw your comment somewhere so I checked out your profile and I found this,your writing skills highly appreciated and the plot is also very nice,storyline Idk yet because I've just read 1st chapter and I'm here to hive you a review giving you five stars for your hard work 😩❤🤝 keep writing 😊 Check out mine too
GREAT STORY WITH INTRIGUING AND UNIQUE CONCEPTS AND PLOT. I CAN SEE A LOT OF HEART AND EMOTION HAS BEEN PUT INTO THIS NOVEL. I LOVE THE WAY EVERYTHING IS WRITTEN WITH LOGIC. GREAT NOVEL, HIGHLY RECOMMENDED
1) Quality of writing - 4. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3,1. 4) Character design - 2,7 5) background of the world - 3,4. 6) Overall rating - 3,7
I think that this is an interesting and novel novel. Mc splitting himself into two and then managing then brings freshness to the already used up reincarnation and other elements. I am excited to see where this is going to go and excited to learn how the double mc is going to utilize this to his advantage. Good Luck Author!
Really good world building, to the point it gives the story 4 points on it's own, characters are ok, but do feel a bit one-dimensional at times, however the story progression is the worst part, somehow completely filled with the background of the world to the point the actual story feels unimportant, it gets better later on but its still a problem. In resume: Story has a lot of potential especially in the world build, but while it did deliver a good story, it didn't live up to what that world needed.
The writing is genius each and every single word carries meaning and emotion The story itself seems like it's a story an actual story and not something like the usual I've been reincarnated or I have system its just a wonderful story . impeccable writing The mystery and the lore that surrounds the story will hook you. I wish you luck author.
Cool cool cool, not bad bro the story is really 3D in fights especially him against the guild
I like the fact that he's OP but there's logic to how strong he is especially the apocalyptic flame control in chapter 26, I feel like this novel can get somewhere with more time given to it. please don't give up on writing this novel
Won't lie, this is some genius work by the author. The way he elaborates and describes his events makes you think the stuff actually happened. Description of magic is on a whole nother level. I'm sold. Keep up the good work mister.
Good Story . I love the way the author tells the story . It just gives more emotion and perspective . The plot is also very unique . I was hook up and did not get bored reading it.
That's an AMAZING plot! I loved it, and despite a few punctuation and grammar issues, the story hooked me right from the start! I just think the paragraphs could be a little shorter, to make the reading a bit more dynamic. Despite that, chef's kiss!
I really like demon lord fantasy novel and the first chapter also very interesting ☺️ keep your good work
First one here. Why are you still looking at me? I'm here just to say I'm first. I already told you what I'm doing... C'mon, there's no cookie or cake. Cake is a lie. Go read the book already hmph!
Membuka SPOILER Excuse my shamelessness lol, but I believe this is a good book it just depends on how you view stories and hope to gain better understanding of a character. If you want a properly developing story with an acceptable system of knowledge then you're in the right place. The story has a good pacing as well as a strong MC which I'm sure you'll like, take your time and enjoy this journey with me...
The realism is what makes the novel good, the manner with which the MC describes his emotions and how he levels up with logic I was most impressed with Scentia -- the Oracle Engine it's a "unique" ability that you rarely come across. The novel itself looks like System and at the same time isn't so I understand the tags used.
Dear author, I must say that your novel has caught my attention with its intriguing concept and plot. I encourage you to keep going with the direction you feel is right for the story, and trust in your instincts as a writer. Remember to focus on developing your characters and their motivations, as this will create a strong foundation for the plot to unfold. Additionally, exploring the themes and underlying messages of your story can add depth and resonance to the narrative. Overall, I wish you the best of luck with your novel and look forward to reading more of your work.
thanks for helping me when nobody did. I cannot do much. but here is a cola. thanks!
this book deserves 5 star in my opinion. The writing is good and well to my understanding, the world is well devloped and the author is working hard... what else do we need? I like this book, please dont drop it author
The story is a great one, I love how you describe the different type of magic. The narrative is impressive and I hope Nyx all the best in Excelsior. I know the story is going to get more and more interesting as time goes on.
I must say this novel is great. I really like the way you have created your MC. I loved it. I also love the way you are taking your story ahead. keep it up author. Nice job👍🏻
Nice book, well written, and interesting. I recommend it to everyone out there.
Another shameless review, but you guys should give my novel a try I feel it's really good but doesn't get enough justice for some reason. If you guys want a perfect paced story this is the right one for you, I ask that you not give up on the story simply because it starts off slow. Honestly, my style of System and Reincarnation is different so if you want something special then this is the way to go!
I wholeheartedly endorse this book. Without a doubt, you ought to look it up! I'm only reading the few chapter of this book, so I can only judge it, but I have to commend Sypnosis for being the first chapter that actually grabbed my attention. I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic I will read the next chapter since it was fantastic.
the name and cover of the book is beautiful 😍 I want o read and I like the world background but character design is little bad just a little but plot and writing style is 👍😊
i really like the Main Character, cool and smart. The world building and the writing is amazing. I got more to learn.
reading status 5/5 27/3/23 Dear author I saw your comment somewhere so I checked out your profile and I found this,your writing skills highly appreciated and the plot is also very nice,storyline Idk yet because I've just read 1st chapter and I'm here to hive you a review giving you five stars for your hard work 😩❤🤝 keep writing 😊 Check out mine too
GREAT STORY WITH INTRIGUING AND UNIQUE CONCEPTS AND PLOT. I CAN SEE A LOT OF HEART AND EMOTION HAS BEEN PUT INTO THIS NOVEL. I LOVE THE WAY EVERYTHING IS WRITTEN WITH LOGIC. GREAT NOVEL, HIGHLY RECOMMENDED
1) Quality of writing - 4. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3,1. 4) Character design - 2,7 5) background of the world - 3,4. 6) Overall rating - 3,7
I think that this is an interesting and novel novel. Mc splitting himself into two and then managing then brings freshness to the already used up reincarnation and other elements. I am excited to see where this is going to go and excited to learn how the double mc is going to utilize this to his advantage. Good Luck Author!
Really good world building, to the point it gives the story 4 points on it's own, characters are ok, but do feel a bit one-dimensional at times, however the story progression is the worst part, somehow completely filled with the background of the world to the point the actual story feels unimportant, it gets better later on but its still a problem. In resume: Story has a lot of potential especially in the world build, but while it did deliver a good story, it didn't live up to what that world needed.
The writing is genius each and every single word carries meaning and emotion The story itself seems like it's a story an actual story and not something like the usual I've been reincarnated or I have system its just a wonderful story . impeccable writing The mystery and the lore that surrounds the story will hook you. I wish you luck author.
Cool cool cool, not bad bro the story is really 3D in fights especially him against the guild
I like the fact that he's OP but there's logic to how strong he is especially the apocalyptic flame control in chapter 26, I feel like this novel can get somewhere with more time given to it. please don't give up on writing this novel
Won't lie, this is some genius work by the author. The way he elaborates and describes his events makes you think the stuff actually happened. Description of magic is on a whole nother level. I'm sold. Keep up the good work mister.
Good Story . I love the way the author tells the story . It just gives more emotion and perspective . The plot is also very unique . I was hook up and did not get bored reading it.
That's an AMAZING plot! I loved it, and despite a few punctuation and grammar issues, the story hooked me right from the start! I just think the paragraphs could be a little shorter, to make the reading a bit more dynamic. Despite that, chef's kiss!
I really like demon lord fantasy novel and the first chapter also very interesting ☺️ keep your good work
First one here. Why are you still looking at me? I'm here just to say I'm first. I already told you what I'm doing... C'mon, there's no cookie or cake. Cake is a lie. Go read the book already hmph!
Membuka SPOILER
Excuse my shamelessness lol, but I believe this is a good book it just depends on how you view stories and hope to gain better understanding of a character. If you want a properly developing story with an acceptable system of knowledge then you're in the right place. The story has a good pacing as well as a strong MC which I'm sure you'll like, take your time and enjoy this journey with me...