As far as I have thought about the arcs, no harem. And I'm also not thinking of romance of any kind as of yet.
Everything in this story screams top work! From the characters to the plot, and then to the world building And the writing? Ahh... 🤌🏽🤌🏽🤌🏽 It's been one hell of a while since I read something written in the First Person that was so good to keep following. I strongly recommend this amazing work! You're going places, my good author. You definitely are!
The more I read it, the more I'm engaged in this story. I'm seriously LOVING the way you write in first person. Like, REALLY!!!
That's one hell of a first chapter!!! Congratulations for the good start!
Thank you, my good sir! As for the side characters, they'll get their chance to shine. The story is still to tender to tell what'll become of them. Keep reading, and find out ^^
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I think that, aside some typos and the grammar, that has a few slight issues, the story shows a lot of promise with the vast world building, and the interesting character of Valtar. I'll be following this story as well as I can. Keep up the good work, dude ^^
AYOOOO!!!
Ch00.1. Somewhere other than Earth
Games · MrBoness
Thanks, dude! I'm eager to see what your opinion is when you reach the end of this first volume. I'm uploading a new chapter today, and Volume Two is going to be way more packed!
Thank you so So So SO FREAKING MUCH >////////< 🤘🏼🤌🏽❤️
Mad Hatter's Guide to Clearing The Game
Games · MrBoness