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I don't recommend it to anyone who cares about character consistency, narrative payoff, or grammar. It's a lead man you might barely like making choices you don't like.
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Turn your brain off if you wanna read this cause there are just so many contradictions and the mc acting like an actual bozo it’s just annoying only reason I read this is cause nobara is fl and author most likely gonna drop before it even gets to that point overall if you have nothing better to do read it ig (this meme can sum up the entire story)
This story starts so well but the author literally says something just to contradict it in the next chapter. Also the MC supposedly wants to explore Japan and then out of nowhere he just starts living with a random family. Also that family just decides to invite a random person to their house for no apparent reason and they act as if they had always lived together when they literaly met the previous day.
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very slow update...i forgot half the story when i read a new chapter after a month off update or so.... I'm quitting this fanfic...very bad story development too.😮💨😮💨
Amazing novel author, I truly enjoyed reading so thanks! The characters are good, the way you put everting together it’s just good!!
Solid fanfic also the low rating is because of trolls who spamming 1 stars rating for some reason
hey there author I hope you are doing well and I hope this message reachs you. I noticed that you have problems with uploading and I guess you probably are like me, you feel lazy to write and upload and I found a solution for that. I created a p@rteon for my books and started uploading, this both motivated me to write and upload and made me gain money. so as a fellow author, who think that you work is really great and deserve to be finished I suggest you start a p@treon where you sell your books, while uploading here at the same time.
To be honest everything is amazing about this book the except for your update speed but all in all good writing and pacing and great way of making your story fit in seemlessly
man this is a good book will you continue this or drop like the other books
sadly 1 is the least amount of stars i can give if I could I'd have given negative
the fic is good but its like im reading a manga, the fic will updated after 2 or more weeks
Seems solid. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I (do I) A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but you're too shy to say it (say it) Inside, we both know what's been going on (going on) We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but you're too shy to say it (to say it) Inside, we both know what's been going on (going on) We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
this is a good fanfic but the update is slow but it's okay for people that are patient
please don't droppe this story 😭your storys are amazing but you dropped them so please don't droppe this
Guy please ++++ chapters🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
This author always has amazing work however he never finished them, so as you can guess this fanfic also has an amazing start so far but do expect him to drop it after 20 chapters or so, and believe me nothing you say will change his mind after he/she drop it, I don't think bro even check our comments or reviews. It's sad but hey what can we do?🤷
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man you jjust had to destroy ours dreams of to see a good mha fanfic that the mc have a system but is not super hiper mega ultra over power
Mc has a hero complex. If others like it fine, just not for me. Character interactions feel off, I’m trash at explaining so I won’t elaborate. If I read correctly, after chapter 2-3 his system is completely useless as anything other than a status screen. The characters have reactions that make no sense that make me feel as the picture states.
You drop all of your stories before they hit 20 chapters, then you start a new one and drop that story, again and again. Your going to drop the new story your making befor it hits 20 chapters i can already see it. Nice stories though
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Really cool start of the novel. I hope the novel is going to continue with being so good and you are not going to drop it.
The story is boring and does not make any sense so people who want be sane don't read it
I don't recommend it to anyone who cares about character consistency, narrative payoff, or grammar. It's a lead man you might barely like making choices you don't like.
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Membuka SPOILER Turn your brain off if you wanna read this cause there are just so many contradictions and the mc acting like an actual bozo it’s just annoying only reason I read this is cause nobara is fl and author most likely gonna drop before it even gets to that point overall if you have nothing better to do read it ig (this meme can sum up the entire story)
This story starts so well but the author literally says something just to contradict it in the next chapter. Also the MC supposedly wants to explore Japan and then out of nowhere he just starts living with a random family. Also that family just decides to invite a random person to their house for no apparent reason and they act as if they had always lived together when they literaly met the previous day.
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very slow update...i forgot half the story when i read a new chapter after a month off update or so.... I'm quitting this fanfic...very bad story development too.😮💨😮💨
Amazing novel author, I truly enjoyed reading so thanks! The characters are good, the way you put everting together it’s just good!!
Solid fanfic also the low rating is because of trolls who spamming 1 stars rating for some reason
hey there author I hope you are doing well and I hope this message reachs you. I noticed that you have problems with uploading and I guess you probably are like me, you feel lazy to write and upload and I found a solution for that. I created a p@rteon for my books and started uploading, this both motivated me to write and upload and made me gain money. so as a fellow author, who think that you work is really great and deserve to be finished I suggest you start a p@treon where you sell your books, while uploading here at the same time.
To be honest everything is amazing about this book the except for your update speed but all in all good writing and pacing and great way of making your story fit in seemlessly
man this is a good book will you continue this or drop like the other books
sadly 1 is the least amount of stars i can give if I could I'd have given negative
the fic is good but its like im reading a manga, the fic will updated after 2 or more weeks
Seems solid. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I (do I) A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but you're too shy to say it (say it) Inside, we both know what's been going on (going on) We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but you're too shy to say it (to say it) Inside, we both know what's been going on (going on) We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
this is a good fanfic but the update is slow but it's okay for people that are patient
please don't droppe this story 😭your storys are amazing but you dropped them so please don't droppe this
Guy please ++++ chapters🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
This author always has amazing work however he never finished them, so as you can guess this fanfic also has an amazing start so far but do expect him to drop it after 20 chapters or so, and believe me nothing you say will change his mind after he/she drop it, I don't think bro even check our comments or reviews. It's sad but hey what can we do?🤷
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man you jjust had to destroy ours dreams of to see a good mha fanfic that the mc have a system but is not super hiper mega ultra over power
Mc has a hero complex. If others like it fine, just not for me. Character interactions feel off, I’m trash at explaining so I won’t elaborate. If I read correctly, after chapter 2-3 his system is completely useless as anything other than a status screen. The characters have reactions that make no sense that make me feel as the picture states.
You drop all of your stories before they hit 20 chapters, then you start a new one and drop that story, again and again. Your going to drop the new story your making befor it hits 20 chapters i can already see it. Nice stories though
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Really cool start of the novel. I hope the novel is going to continue with being so good and you are not going to drop it.
The story is boring and does not make any sense so people who want be sane don't read it