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Wow, this is such a nice story. The character design and world background is so amazing. Well done
This is a really fun read! I love the love/animosity between Delia and Jackson. Their constant bickering and rivalry is hilarious and entertaining. I love seeing a female lead who isn't afraid to stand up to the grumpy rich guy, so kudos for that too! Even though I hope they end up happily ever after, I won't mind a few more adversarial exchanges between the two leads.
Loved reading it. The story line was amazing. It has a lot of potential. The description of the scenes and the dialogues, all of them were so good. Keep up the good work author. I will be waiting for the updates.
A classic romance between rivals. Both protagonists are opinionated, smart, and stubborn. There are sweet enduring touches as well as bitter interactions as expected. The only issue I have with the story is the way the dialogue is set up (but I believe that may just be the author's style of writing). The synopsis uses quotation marks ("...."), but the story uses apostrophes ('....'). Overall, I look forward to future updates!
The plot is interesting but not refreshing since there's a lot of stories with this kind of plot already. I think the description needs more improvement, it could be better. Overall you did a great job! Goodluck! ❤️
Wow, this is such a nice story. The character design and world background is so amazing. Well done
This is a really fun read! I love the love/animosity between Delia and Jackson. Their constant bickering and rivalry is hilarious and entertaining. I love seeing a female lead who isn't afraid to stand up to the grumpy rich guy, so kudos for that too! Even though I hope they end up happily ever after, I won't mind a few more adversarial exchanges between the two leads.
Loved reading it. The story line was amazing. It has a lot of potential. The description of the scenes and the dialogues, all of them were so good. Keep up the good work author. I will be waiting for the updates.
A classic romance between rivals. Both protagonists are opinionated, smart, and stubborn. There are sweet enduring touches as well as bitter interactions as expected. The only issue I have with the story is the way the dialogue is set up (but I believe that may just be the author's style of writing). The synopsis uses quotation marks ("...."), but the story uses apostrophes ('....'). Overall, I look forward to future updates!
The plot is interesting but not refreshing since there's a lot of stories with this kind of plot already. I think the description needs more improvement, it could be better. Overall you did a great job! Goodluck! ❤️