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This bok is so great. I loved the start plus, the plot too. Its soo excellent. The Mc is very strong and genius built character. Writing is also good great and easy flowing. Great book, loved the work.
I like the story so far. The world-building is good. Characters are interesting. Pacing is smooth and easy to read. Good job, Author! Looking forward for more.
It is a thrilling adventure that takes readers through a world of kingdoms and chaos. The story follows Arthur, a prince from the kingdom of Reverie who experiences a tragic attack that shakes the balance of power in the Holy Trinity. Driven by a desire to seek revenge and restore peace, Arthur embarks on a journey that takes him through the treacherous underworld and the other kingdoms of the Holy Trinity. The plot is well-crafted and keeps readers engaged throughout the story. The characters are complex and well-developed, and the world-building is imaginative and immersive. The themes of loyalty, betrayal, and revenge are explored in a compelling way that will keep readers invested in the story until the very end.
What an interesting characters indeed. They're all detailed and well-toned. I can hear their voice just from reading the text. I'm anticipating Arthur's family life in the sooner chapters.
The setting and world building is great. i like how the characters get described and how the story is unfolding. cant wait to read more:)
Really good novel, with a refreshing concept and plotline. Good characters and world building, but it is too short for now. Waiting for more chapters!
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Absolutely refreshing read. I really loved how you portrayed the character, plot and scenes so well. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work.
This is just a wonderful book, I think am already in love with it 🥺🥺... I really don't know what to say, cause this is a book like never before
The starting is interesting. I read only few chapters and I should say the plot is very good. The characters has various personalities. I can’t wait to read more.
Amazing story, I can't wait for the next chapter. It's amazed me how you give a little political thought and also the problem inside the story really make me exited for the next chapter. Good Job!!
What a story!!! I cant wait for another chapter to come up. The plot is clean and very amusing. Good job author, keep it up!!! I'll wait for another chapter.
A great read so far! A few grammatical errors here and there, but the plot makes you kinda forget it while reading since it flows so well. Keep up the good work! As a fix for your grammar, you can try having the chapter checked or run through a grammar checker first.
This is just great, only just few chapter but it get better and better. If there's a grammatical error, it covered by how the author portrayed the situation
Amazing, the story really get me into it. I can breathe when it come to the attack scene. It just amazing and i hope to see it again, Good Job author!!
what a wonderful book, this just amazing when the author potrayed the situation. It's like a whole new different world with a clear emotion in this story. keep it up!!
The books is actually incredible, it has an amazing start, although there are some grammatical errors here and there the books still an amazing read, keep it up author or should I say Arthur, get it 😉😏
Great beggining and it’s really good even though there’s still some mistake but keep goingg. Looking forward to the next chapter comming up👍🏻
The story has a pretty good start. It would have been perfect if not for some grammatical errors. I would like to continue so keep uploading .
The book is fresh and clean, with a good plot that gives a good base to the story. The setting is nice and clean, and the beginning was beautifully constructed.
This bok is so great. I loved the start plus, the plot too. Its soo excellent. The Mc is very strong and genius built character. Writing is also good great and easy flowing. Great book, loved the work.
I like the story so far. The world-building is good. Characters are interesting. Pacing is smooth and easy to read. Good job, Author! Looking forward for more.
It is a thrilling adventure that takes readers through a world of kingdoms and chaos. The story follows Arthur, a prince from the kingdom of Reverie who experiences a tragic attack that shakes the balance of power in the Holy Trinity. Driven by a desire to seek revenge and restore peace, Arthur embarks on a journey that takes him through the treacherous underworld and the other kingdoms of the Holy Trinity. The plot is well-crafted and keeps readers engaged throughout the story. The characters are complex and well-developed, and the world-building is imaginative and immersive. The themes of loyalty, betrayal, and revenge are explored in a compelling way that will keep readers invested in the story until the very end.
What an interesting characters indeed. They're all detailed and well-toned. I can hear their voice just from reading the text. I'm anticipating Arthur's family life in the sooner chapters.
The setting and world building is great. i like how the characters get described and how the story is unfolding. cant wait to read more:)
Really good novel, with a refreshing concept and plotline. Good characters and world building, but it is too short for now. Waiting for more chapters!
Membuka SPOILER Absolutely refreshing read. I really loved how you portrayed the character, plot and scenes so well. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work.
This is just a wonderful book, I think am already in love with it 🥺🥺... I really don't know what to say, cause this is a book like never before
The starting is interesting. I read only few chapters and I should say the plot is very good. The characters has various personalities. I can’t wait to read more.
Amazing story, I can't wait for the next chapter. It's amazed me how you give a little political thought and also the problem inside the story really make me exited for the next chapter. Good Job!!
What a story!!! I cant wait for another chapter to come up. The plot is clean and very amusing. Good job author, keep it up!!! I'll wait for another chapter.
A great read so far! A few grammatical errors here and there, but the plot makes you kinda forget it while reading since it flows so well. Keep up the good work! As a fix for your grammar, you can try having the chapter checked or run through a grammar checker first.
This is just great, only just few chapter but it get better and better. If there's a grammatical error, it covered by how the author portrayed the situation
Amazing, the story really get me into it. I can breathe when it come to the attack scene. It just amazing and i hope to see it again, Good Job author!!
what a wonderful book, this just amazing when the author potrayed the situation. It's like a whole new different world with a clear emotion in this story. keep it up!!
The books is actually incredible, it has an amazing start, although there are some grammatical errors here and there the books still an amazing read, keep it up author or should I say Arthur, get it 😉😏
Great beggining and it’s really good even though there’s still some mistake but keep goingg. Looking forward to the next chapter comming up👍🏻
The story has a pretty good start. It would have been perfect if not for some grammatical errors. I would like to continue so keep uploading .
The book is fresh and clean, with a good plot that gives a good base to the story. The setting is nice and clean, and the beginning was beautifully constructed.