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I’ll be dropping this at Chapter 68. Your story is excellent so far. Great writing but the MC is hopelessly & irredeemably Evil and shows no signs nor seems to put any effort into at least being likably evil It’s basically Joffrey from GOT Vs. Homelander from The Boys An you have gone the Joffrey route. I wish you the best and to keep up the writing but I just don’t like a MC that has zero bottom line our any semblance of morals.
interesting concept, but extremely repetitive. MC feeds on low level mutant rejects to build up her strength for a hundred chapters. The MC spends a bit of time being trained by shield, before ditching them to continue feeding on mutants on a larger scale. There's a lot of spelling mistakes. There's also a glaring pothole that the author tried to fill early, but the way it's fixed doesn't make any sense: eating dirt and rocks can gain MC "mass" so that she can evolve and create minions at first, but it's then nerfed: the more she feeds on something, she gets diminishing returns, which makes no sense because of the law of conservation of mass. out also means that her growth is massively unsustainable, and she'll rapidly reach her growth limit before consuming everything on the planet. basically, this story only needs an actual storyline, coherent lore and some proofreading to be great
Female MC, harem won't getting it yet maybe it Will when this novel react 200 chapter?, but really won't get it for the first 100 chapter, also MC Will grow up same girl as cover pic 🧐
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Read all the chapters in 4 hours, really liked the concept and pace of story. Hope that author keeps updating the story because I am hooked and want to see what will happen in future. ...................................d.d.d.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x..xx.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x..x......x.x..x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x
Personally, it doesn't quite appeal to me. I'd rate it a 1 out of 5. Essentially, it leans heavily into a 'kill or be killed' narrative. The cycle of killing, consuming for DNA, and subsequently eroding any initial semblance of humanity might intrigue those fond of a relentless anti-hero trope. As of now, there aren't any major flaws, except the main character seems rather... lifeless, for lack of a better term. So far, it doesn't offer much in terms of positive development. Make of that what you will.
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The writing is great with no grammatical errors as far as I am aware of. The stability of updates are great, they take breaks to think on the story but when written it comes out quickly, and so is basically a bunch of chapters come out over some time then a break then repeat. The story development is well written, organic, and well thought out. The character designs are good. While the world background is vast.
Don’t really know how to write a good review, but the book has been looking good so far :)
I like it a lot and I hope the updating Scandal wil Main Daily or Weekly I hoe it Will not go on hiatus any time soon en you keep the updates stady
Pretty enjoyable read, had to look up what a few things might have been cause i’m not the most informed on Marvel, but even without that th story flows fine and is easily understandable. Author is consistently updating again as well.
Well written and great direction doesn't feel rushed like eell reach the Max power with nowhere to go and lots of plot set ups rn so looking forward to the future slow updates but everyone has a life
Pretty easy to follow along, decent chapter size and good writing. Pretty good read
The MC's so op at the same time not. I kinda forgot if had put my review before, so
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This book is just awesome as the author, so cool and amazing. I like how the story went and the MC's progress to get stronger.
Really good read it was a hidden gem. Hope another chapter is updated soon would love to continue reading this. I like the monster/alien mix into it. 👍👍👍👍😊😊😊😊😊👍😊😊👍😊😊😊😊 (Was just to fill up the character count) (Was just to fill up the character count) (Was just to fill up the character count) (Was just to fill up the character count) (Was just to fill up the character count) ————————————————————————
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This is one of the best evolution stories that I have read in a long time, and it as a very unique species for the mc, very good.
It was such a great start and there were no grammar mistakes. The story is interesting and Liliana reminds me of myself, to be honest. Keep it up, Author!
Good story, good writing, good plot for a great fandom, The book is going great. I read a few but enjoyed it a lot. keep it up, cause we enjoy fandom too
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Probably one of my favorite marvel fics. I really enjoyed it, though quite a while between updates. Overall, I feel it definitely is a good read.
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Overall I enjoy this. The MC concept is excellent. The only thing I worry about is the author’s commitment. Hope you keep updating this!
I love this a lot has so much potential My only problem is the updates can be very weird but I like weird so keep it up
I haven't watched much of X-men but I still really enjoyed it! It is done really well in my opinion.
Pretty good but way too many holes too early in the story. In the beginning she said there was no way she could penetrate the Jaguar’s skin barehanded then chapters later she suddenly have claws that can slice through her own skin after she upgraded her stats which at that moment was above the level of the Jaguar (note that her strength was still the same as it was when she fought the Jaguar). Then there’s the fact that the fact that the fact that she can just change her body randomly af but it was never once a part of her status so it just feels like an excuse for her being able to integrate into human society. It’s all just feel like there’s no plan when it came to the storyline.
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Eh justnbot my cup if tea its a solid 3/5 but irs basically a borderline gotta kill them all type of fic kill eat gain DNA lose what but of humanity you had in the first few chapters if your interested in mindless murderhobo this is the fic for you nothing wrong with it so far outside of the MC feels.. I don't know but puppet comes to mind so far and nothing really good either so take it as you will
Hey there, author here! Decided to do a Marvel novel for fun. Keep in mind I'm not aware of every small detail that takes part in the marvel universe and as such some things may seem odd, so just take it as an AU. :) Hope you enjoy.
I’ll be dropping this at Chapter 68. Your story is excellent so far. Great writing but the MC is hopelessly & irredeemably Evil and shows no signs nor seems to put any effort into at least being likably evil It’s basically Joffrey from GOT Vs. Homelander from The Boys An you have gone the Joffrey route. I wish you the best and to keep up the writing but I just don’t like a MC that has zero bottom line our any semblance of morals.
interesting concept, but extremely repetitive. MC feeds on low level mutant rejects to build up her strength for a hundred chapters. The MC spends a bit of time being trained by shield, before ditching them to continue feeding on mutants on a larger scale. There's a lot of spelling mistakes. There's also a glaring pothole that the author tried to fill early, but the way it's fixed doesn't make any sense: eating dirt and rocks can gain MC "mass" so that she can evolve and create minions at first, but it's then nerfed: the more she feeds on something, she gets diminishing returns, which makes no sense because of the law of conservation of mass. out also means that her growth is massively unsustainable, and she'll rapidly reach her growth limit before consuming everything on the planet. basically, this story only needs an actual storyline, coherent lore and some proofreading to be great
Female MC, harem won't getting it yet maybe it Will when this novel react 200 chapter?, but really won't get it for the first 100 chapter, also MC Will grow up same girl as cover pic 🧐
Membuka SPOILER Read all the chapters in 4 hours, really liked the concept and pace of story. Hope that author keeps updating the story because I am hooked and want to see what will happen in future. ...................................d.d.d.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x..xx.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x..x......x.x..x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x
Personally, it doesn't quite appeal to me. I'd rate it a 1 out of 5. Essentially, it leans heavily into a 'kill or be killed' narrative. The cycle of killing, consuming for DNA, and subsequently eroding any initial semblance of humanity might intrigue those fond of a relentless anti-hero trope. As of now, there aren't any major flaws, except the main character seems rather... lifeless, for lack of a better term. So far, it doesn't offer much in terms of positive development. Make of that what you will.
Membuka SPOILER The writing is great with no grammatical errors as far as I am aware of. The stability of updates are great, they take breaks to think on the story but when written it comes out quickly, and so is basically a bunch of chapters come out over some time then a break then repeat. The story development is well written, organic, and well thought out. The character designs are good. While the world background is vast.
Don’t really know how to write a good review, but the book has been looking good so far :)
I like it a lot and I hope the updating Scandal wil Main Daily or Weekly I hoe it Will not go on hiatus any time soon en you keep the updates stady
Pretty enjoyable read, had to look up what a few things might have been cause i’m not the most informed on Marvel, but even without that th story flows fine and is easily understandable. Author is consistently updating again as well.
Well written and great direction doesn't feel rushed like eell reach the Max power with nowhere to go and lots of plot set ups rn so looking forward to the future slow updates but everyone has a life
Pretty easy to follow along, decent chapter size and good writing. Pretty good read
The MC's so op at the same time not. I kinda forgot if had put my review before, so
Membuka SPOILER This book is just awesome as the author, so cool and amazing. I like how the story went and the MC's progress to get stronger.
Really good read it was a hidden gem. Hope another chapter is updated soon would love to continue reading this. I like the monster/alien mix into it. 👍👍👍👍😊😊😊😊😊👍😊😊👍😊😊😊😊 (Was just to fill up the character count) (Was just to fill up the character count) (Was just to fill up the character count) (Was just to fill up the character count) (Was just to fill up the character count) ————————————————————————
Membuka SPOILER This is one of the best evolution stories that I have read in a long time, and it as a very unique species for the mc, very good.
It was such a great start and there were no grammar mistakes. The story is interesting and Liliana reminds me of myself, to be honest. Keep it up, Author!
Good story, good writing, good plot for a great fandom, The book is going great. I read a few but enjoyed it a lot. keep it up, cause we enjoy fandom too
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Probably one of my favorite marvel fics. I really enjoyed it, though quite a while between updates. Overall, I feel it definitely is a good read.
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Overall I enjoy this. The MC concept is excellent. The only thing I worry about is the author’s commitment. Hope you keep updating this!
I love this a lot has so much potential My only problem is the updates can be very weird but I like weird so keep it up
I haven't watched much of X-men but I still really enjoyed it! It is done really well in my opinion.
Pretty good but way too many holes too early in the story. In the beginning she said there was no way she could penetrate the Jaguar’s skin barehanded then chapters later she suddenly have claws that can slice through her own skin after she upgraded her stats which at that moment was above the level of the Jaguar (note that her strength was still the same as it was when she fought the Jaguar). Then there’s the fact that the fact that the fact that she can just change her body randomly af but it was never once a part of her status so it just feels like an excuse for her being able to integrate into human society. It’s all just feel like there’s no plan when it came to the storyline.
Membuka SPOILER Eh justnbot my cup if tea its a solid 3/5 but irs basically a borderline gotta kill them all type of fic kill eat gain DNA lose what but of humanity you had in the first few chapters if your interested in mindless murderhobo this is the fic for you nothing wrong with it so far outside of the MC feels.. I don't know but puppet comes to mind so far and nothing really good either so take it as you will
Hey there, author here! Decided to do a Marvel novel for fun. Keep in mind I'm not aware of every small detail that takes part in the marvel universe and as such some things may seem odd, so just take it as an AU. :) Hope you enjoy.