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The Whiskey King(Sample)
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He pushed my legs apart and brought his face towards my core before he could do anything I asked in an urgent voice "what are you doing Luca?"
He looked into my eyes, gave my breasts a rough squeeze and said "claiming what's mine" and with that, he devoured my core without giving me the time to process his words.
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No soft Romance
When Kylie Kirby, an editor of The Early Times magazine met Luca Cornwallis, the owner of one of the best whiskey brands in the US, other than sparks something else will also begin to develop in her body
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I will highlight a few points for those who are looking to read this book to help you out. The characters - the characters are well written. I like how direct the ML is and how confident he is. He is a direct man who knows what he is doing most of the time and seems competent. Writing - it is good enough to understand. Some paragraphs are too big and wordy which makes it difficult to tell who is speaking what. But this is something you'll not notice once you get past the first chapter. World Background - it seemed interesting but I'll need to read a little more before making any judgement on it.
The synopsis is intriguing. I read few chapters and I enjoyed reading it. The story and characters both are interesting. Looking forward to more chapters. Good work author. 👍
Really love this! The story moves fast so you don't to worry about big long boring fillers. It definitely keeps you on your toes and coming back for more!
I love the flow of the characters. it really goes well. You have a great highlight and interesting story. You're highly recommend 👏👏 Keep it up author you will get there
The characters and the way their chemistry is building up is very interesting and exciting. Both of them have their own traits, and I like the way the FL does not lose her feisty-ness before the ML. Good work.
I'm going to be very frank, I wasn't expecting this, the title got me wondering but I'm glad I did read it. it was fun and amazing, I love the ml and the fast pace as well. nice work author.
I enjoyed the story well done author character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 100 chapters and please post 7 chps a week atleast for us readers
The book is so good I can't stop myself I want to read every chapter. The book is a promising read and contains well define charters. Good job author......
The beginning of the story is very interesting. I liked the characters as well. I really enjoyed reading your story so I am looking forward to read more chapters in the future.😊
I like the ML. very direct and precise. The character development is great. The story is interesting and looking forward to more chapters. Great work author!
Hi! i'm Airis lee and i really like your story!. You have such great and amazing plot and setting,i hope you'll update soon. I will be waiting. Good luck!
I will give my honest review here. The plot is okay but, sorry for my word but it's a bit bland at the beginning. I like the ML actually because he is a pretty straightforward person for me, as well as the FL that seems like a feisty one and won't back down in any fight. As for the paragraphs, might as well you cut some of them or divide it because there are a lot of confusing conversations there and sometimes I can't follow T_T Your synopsis, might as well revise it into some mystery element about it, like... put some excerpt on it like a trailer chapter that would make the readers would want to read more. ^_^ This has a potential. Just revise some of your scenes that would make an impact to the readers. ^_^ Keep writing! ^_^
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This gives me fifty shades of grey vibes. Lol hahaha. Anyway, Author delivered the message well. The intimate scenes are written well, enough to entice readers. Good work, Author!🧡😊
I loved the synopis, and the ml and the fl[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Synopsis always catches the reader... a great beginning and a smooth flow 😍😍 love your work author .. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
We have quite a novel here, ehem! The leads are really naughty and i'm totally hooked, interesting and with enough steamy scenes. Keep it up author.
Okay, the synopsis looks steamy, kind of interesting. I'm yet to dig in, I expect craziness and I am in for it. So far I think you're good, the rest, I will comment chapter wise. All the best in the competition my dear.
I like how the story beging and how the characters flows in word. It's such an amazing and interesting stories. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Came here from review swap and I must say the overall writing is great, while this is not my cup of tea, the simple writing style of the author is pretty good and I didn't have a hard time reading it. One suggestion though— if it's just Kylie's POV, you don't have to put Kylie's POV every single chapter. Then again, maybe you're going to add additional POV's later on in the story so don't take my suggestion into consideration.
Woo~ liked the conference of the ML Luca.... Also the devilish character of him.....l really like when ML give us such an attitude 😜😉 Also FL is nice and feisty..... Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.... Keep going author and all the best for ur novel..