/ Urban / Reborn: Instead of Chasing the School Beauty, I Chased Her Mother
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Young and ignorant, I didn't recognize Auntie's worth, mistakenly cherishing the maiden like a treasure!
Li Zhiyan, strung along by the campus belle, was reborn with a Wimpy System, back to the year 2010, to the very day he stood at the graduation party with a bouquet of flowers ready to confess to the campus belle Yu Sisi, about to be publicly rejected and become the laughingstock of his classmates for years to come.
He glanced at the 41-year-old Aunt Gu Wanzhou beside him, mature, intellectual, elegant, kind, understanding of others' feelings, never fighting for the spotlight.
Li Zhiyan decisively picked up the flowers and made a public confession to the charming Auntie.
"Aunt Gu, actually, I've liked you for a long time."
[The male lead is 18; the female lead is 40+.]
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The book overall is really good. I like how the MC interacts with the aunties, not too raunchy butnot too innocent either. I do want to know, however, if this story is leaning towards the harem side or monogamy.
there are translation mistakes and the characters are a bit 2d but nonetheless makes for an entertaining read, I just wish there would be a beta reader or checker for these. loving how the system give the mc reasons too gain the money and not just send to his bank out of nowhere, this way even if the system is gone one day, his connections will still be real
Despite the ML being a hypocritical, manipulative, lying, cheater; the story is entertaining in the beginning. But the redundancy of him seducing countless older woman gets boring. Also, this is a harem story; yet, the spice level is low.
ai just got to chapter 30 and this book is really good so far but honestly there is no friends that would give money like that.... and the MCs friend did this for him in his past life not this one and hes asking his friend to go after revenge for himself more then the MC and Y the hell is the MC even trying to seriously go out with these older women when he wants to go back/be with the girl from college that he found loved him and stayed by him!! Honestly what the MC is doing right now is fine because hes only really going after 1 but if he goes after more then 1 then its messed up and then if he still goes after any of them when college starts and tries to go out with her while going after all of these other women then its not fair to the girl. from the past and even the one in college and even to the other women... honestly it is messed up as of now anyways because he is still in love or wants to be with the girl from college but hasnt meet her yet in this life and I can understand wanting to be with someone to avoid thinking about her and all that till the time comes but its still messed up to love someone and still go be with someone else!!!!!
This story seems to be pretty hollow, outside of the flirting that it's a bit funny, there's no more to the story. Mc doesn't have a single redeemable trait, there's no mentality, no intelligence, no effort, no goals or objectives, maybe his numbness to embarrassment is one and his feelings for his mother and friend, but no more. In these kinds of novels is obvious that you won't get a proper world building so I won't go there. Typical exaggerations and misconceptions are present for every little thing to justify favorable impressions and later establish a genius persona(mc's) in the background characters. I think that his love story in his past life would have been a lot more interesting to read, but obviously with a good ending. Finally, translation is good, it isn't five stars but it's okay.
Interesting premise and a promising start to the story. Mc is interesting and I see some potential for his character evolution. Translation quality leaves room for improvement and certain expressions or phrases should be explained if mentioned repeatedly.