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Don’t read this novel, the author loves to advertise on other people’s works.
I really like the effort in building the background, and the overall consistency of the story. The best part which I appreciate, is that the author does not make the story too 'fictitious', by showing that the characters do instantly become loyal to the protagonist, like fangirls constantly admiring the latter, but still harbor individual thoughts of their own.
Honestly, the author needs time skip here. cause I really don't enjoy cabrera and others building their guild. We don't need to know everything about guild making and side character's pov. MC needs more screen time cause he is the center of the novel, his character development, power development. What did he do with the loot and how he gonna use it, how he gonna train his 5 new subordinates(slaves). After, showing these points in the next few chapters, the author should time skip.
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So Curious When I read the First chapter. I will put this book to my library. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story development and world creation is superb. I liked how the character has been gradually drawn with enough care for the details as well... definitely a good read... keep going, author👍
novel has a lot of potential,grammar is good, and has a good basis for later, but so far I've been very frustrated as the novel gives me a lot of detail I rather find unnecessary, with multiple pov switches sometimes a chapter. I also am really not a fan of exploring the plot with a child mc for to long with which the novel so far has set us up for. The mc himself has a lot of room for growth which is good but as stated it seems like we'll be in his childhood years for awhile which really is gonna hamper that. Overall this novel is a novel that is gonna grow into itself but for me personally is gonna be one left to develop before I invest more of my free time into it.
Hello author! it's me Delinquent World's author, it was actually pretty good story not gonna lie! i actually wasn't expecting you to comment on my novel, please check out on my novel (dialogue story) ! there might be a grammar error fell free to fix it and support me as well!😊
A real story, a new story, a good story. Finally not then n-th copied and stolen sequence of the always same cliches. Well written and interesting. You HAVE to try this!
It's Sooo Goood 😍😍 I love it a lot... It is flawless☺ I am really far behind you and I have lot to learn from you Author... Hats off Your hardwork really paid off 🙂 keep going
Do I have to even give you a review. Your story is awesome. The plot is also very interesting. More ink to your pen. I have only started to read chp 1 and it got me and made me to add in my library. looking forward to reading all your chapter.✍️✍️✍️
This started off good but too many pov switches literally mc barely appears and the author drags side character arcs for no reason
I have read countless novels but this is the first time im writing a review. That is to say this novel has forced me to write a review. Firstly, i love how detailed and alive the characters are, as this is a must for me to get invested into a novel. Secondly, the mix of genres in ingenuitive to say the least. Ontop of all of this, and the best part is, the story and the why it is told to us is top notch. Kudos to writer for that. The story is indept and has enough variables and cliffhangers to not let the dept of cause it to become stail or stressful to read. Finally, the English is first class which is just the best iceing on the top. So over all 9/10. Strongly recommend. 😁
Story is amazing , the world building is really good, so is character design and the plot , one of the best ones I've read . If anyone knows a novel as good as this and of a smart mc please leave suggestions. thank you.
the book is a fun read up until the Grand scheme the it's became something else then the story stopped became stagnantto be exact 91 chapters still in the jungle. the Mc is still 5years old, the 2weeks grand scheme is no boring but not fun to read either the author overdid it too much it became tedious. the switching of characters to much that it can take more than 8 to 10 chapters without the actual Mc being in the picture only his schemes. overall this is a scheming novel through and through from the looks of it it I'll continue for a very long time readable though no doubt but to much schemes at some point becomes boring 💤 real quick.
After reading all of the currently unlocked chapters I can safely say that this story is extremely well written. All of the characters that get introduced feel as if the author spent weeks just building them. And not to mention the lack of grammatical errors and plot loopholes and inconsistencies. Overall I'd definitely recommend this novel to anyone who loves system and cultivation novels, and personally I think this is one of the best currently written cultivation novels on the Webnovel platform,
started reading it yesterday first chance I have got to comment and it is amazing. the Mc is believable the plot is great and every chapter makes me want more
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the writer has put a lot of effort into writing it can be seen by the absence of grammatical error he has also put a lot of thought in the background of the world amazing amazing novel
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I really like this book cause I usually don't read books like these but this book has to be the only exception cause it's really nice and I would recommend it
According to the first two chapters O read, I can say for sure that the writing quality is perfect and the plotline is awesome for anyone to dig in for the story. Moreover, the character design is nice. I loved the battle scene at the starting point of the story. I could imagine being on the battlefield and enjoy the thrill, bravery they showed while facing countless enemies. I felt bad for the cannon fodder people, but they were true warriors. As for the world background, since it was only 2 chapters, I can't say much. Although the story feels slow but it's steady and I like it. Good job, author. Keep it up! 🙂👍
I saw that there isn’t a tag for romance so does that mean there’s no romance? I know he’s a kid right now so there obviously won’t be any but will there be any in the future when he’s older?
this story tick all the boxes. story is not too fast or slow. doesnot skip through stuff. mc is levelheaded. and much more. all I can tell is I really enjoyed reading and looking forward to new chapters.
no romance?Brasil aqui🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷🥳🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🥳✌️🇧🇷🥳✌️🇧🇷🇧🇷✌️🥳✌️😡🇧🇷🥳🥳✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🥳✌️✌️✌️🇧🇷🇧🇷✌️🥳✌️🇧🇷
This is exactly what I've been craving for😩 many thanks to this author for the recommendation as well as a great story to make my week❤
Don’t read this novel, the author loves to advertise on other people’s works.
I really like the effort in building the background, and the overall consistency of the story. The best part which I appreciate, is that the author does not make the story too 'fictitious', by showing that the characters do instantly become loyal to the protagonist, like fangirls constantly admiring the latter, but still harbor individual thoughts of their own.
Honestly, the author needs time skip here. cause I really don't enjoy cabrera and others building their guild. We don't need to know everything about guild making and side character's pov. MC needs more screen time cause he is the center of the novel, his character development, power development. What did he do with the loot and how he gonna use it, how he gonna train his 5 new subordinates(slaves). After, showing these points in the next few chapters, the author should time skip.
Membuka SPOILER So Curious When I read the First chapter. I will put this book to my library. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story development and world creation is superb. I liked how the character has been gradually drawn with enough care for the details as well... definitely a good read... keep going, author👍
novel has a lot of potential,grammar is good, and has a good basis for later, but so far I've been very frustrated as the novel gives me a lot of detail I rather find unnecessary, with multiple pov switches sometimes a chapter. I also am really not a fan of exploring the plot with a child mc for to long with which the novel so far has set us up for. The mc himself has a lot of room for growth which is good but as stated it seems like we'll be in his childhood years for awhile which really is gonna hamper that. Overall this novel is a novel that is gonna grow into itself but for me personally is gonna be one left to develop before I invest more of my free time into it.
Hello author! it's me Delinquent World's author, it was actually pretty good story not gonna lie! i actually wasn't expecting you to comment on my novel, please check out on my novel (dialogue story) ! there might be a grammar error fell free to fix it and support me as well!😊
A real story, a new story, a good story. Finally not then n-th copied and stolen sequence of the always same cliches. Well written and interesting. You HAVE to try this!
It's Sooo Goood 😍😍 I love it a lot... It is flawless☺ I am really far behind you and I have lot to learn from you Author... Hats off Your hardwork really paid off 🙂 keep going
Do I have to even give you a review. Your story is awesome. The plot is also very interesting. More ink to your pen. I have only started to read chp 1 and it got me and made me to add in my library. looking forward to reading all your chapter.✍️✍️✍️
This started off good but too many pov switches literally mc barely appears and the author drags side character arcs for no reason
I have read countless novels but this is the first time im writing a review. That is to say this novel has forced me to write a review. Firstly, i love how detailed and alive the characters are, as this is a must for me to get invested into a novel. Secondly, the mix of genres in ingenuitive to say the least. Ontop of all of this, and the best part is, the story and the why it is told to us is top notch. Kudos to writer for that. The story is indept and has enough variables and cliffhangers to not let the dept of cause it to become stail or stressful to read. Finally, the English is first class which is just the best iceing on the top. So over all 9/10. Strongly recommend. 😁
Story is amazing , the world building is really good, so is character design and the plot , one of the best ones I've read . If anyone knows a novel as good as this and of a smart mc please leave suggestions. thank you.
the book is a fun read up until the Grand scheme the it's became something else then the story stopped became stagnantto be exact 91 chapters still in the jungle. the Mc is still 5years old, the 2weeks grand scheme is no boring but not fun to read either the author overdid it too much it became tedious. the switching of characters to much that it can take more than 8 to 10 chapters without the actual Mc being in the picture only his schemes. overall this is a scheming novel through and through from the looks of it it I'll continue for a very long time readable though no doubt but to much schemes at some point becomes boring 💤 real quick.
After reading all of the currently unlocked chapters I can safely say that this story is extremely well written. All of the characters that get introduced feel as if the author spent weeks just building them. And not to mention the lack of grammatical errors and plot loopholes and inconsistencies. Overall I'd definitely recommend this novel to anyone who loves system and cultivation novels, and personally I think this is one of the best currently written cultivation novels on the Webnovel platform,
started reading it yesterday first chance I have got to comment and it is amazing. the Mc is believable the plot is great and every chapter makes me want more
!d!d!kddkdkfkkrkr!!rlrlrlllrlldkd kddkdkfkkrkr kkrkrkfkkrkfrkfkkrkdkkrkdkddkdkkrkkrkrrkkrkkrkrkkkrkrkrkkrkfrkkfkkfdkkfkdkkfrtltoppopopoippuippuppup
can someone recommend similar stuff .... ....................................................................... ............................
the writer has put a lot of effort into writing it can be seen by the absence of grammatical error he has also put a lot of thought in the background of the world amazing amazing novel
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I really like this book cause I usually don't read books like these but this book has to be the only exception cause it's really nice and I would recommend it
According to the first two chapters O read, I can say for sure that the writing quality is perfect and the plotline is awesome for anyone to dig in for the story. Moreover, the character design is nice. I loved the battle scene at the starting point of the story. I could imagine being on the battlefield and enjoy the thrill, bravery they showed while facing countless enemies. I felt bad for the cannon fodder people, but they were true warriors. As for the world background, since it was only 2 chapters, I can't say much. Although the story feels slow but it's steady and I like it. Good job, author. Keep it up! 🙂👍
I saw that there isn’t a tag for romance so does that mean there’s no romance? I know he’s a kid right now so there obviously won’t be any but will there be any in the future when he’s older?
this story tick all the boxes. story is not too fast or slow. doesnot skip through stuff. mc is levelheaded. and much more. all I can tell is I really enjoyed reading and looking forward to new chapters.
no romance?Brasil aqui🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷🥳🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🥳✌️🇧🇷🥳✌️🇧🇷🇧🇷✌️🥳✌️😡🇧🇷🥳🥳✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🥳✌️✌️✌️🇧🇷🇧🇷✌️🥳✌️🇧🇷
This is exactly what I've been craving for😩 many thanks to this author for the recommendation as well as a great story to make my week❤