Divine_univers

Divine_univers

LV 15
2020-12-18 Bergabung Global
Lencana 20

Moments 503
Divine_univers
Divine_univers
18 days ago
Replied to Rain_Heart_2943

I'd purchase privilege I'm just broke at the moment :(

Divine_univers
Divine_univers
Divine_univers
29 days ago
Posted

surprisingly pretty good. story flows decently well, characters feel like they have their own personality and it's interesting enough. also love the fact the privilege chapter prices are what they are. as most stories charge 50$ for 25 chapters which are only 1k words. the fact you get 50 for 10 is what i think all privilege prices should be. Keep it up author

Divine_univers
Divine_univers
1 months ago
Commented

guy really is making someone else participate in the duel, it almost feels like Baron Nathan is trying to let the relationship between their houses deteriorate

Divine_univers
Divine_univers
1 months ago
Posted

story suffers from a lack of flow, it's very event to event based, and it's hard to read at certain points do to sentence structure not being the best. fights can be hard to imagine and as stated above with the event to event based reading it feels like details are left out at certain points. still think its worth reading it's just rough

Divine_univers
Divine_univers
2 months ago
Replied to SanXan

part of the reason I stopped reading it, there's a difference between inspiration and quite literally feeling like a copy and paste with very minute differences

Divine_univers
Divine_univers
2 months ago
Replied to Royal_martyr

i check out damn near anything so probably

Divine_univers
Divine_univers
2 months ago
Replied to Berks

yeah but the whole story hasn't even taken a month yet 😭 if I didn't know better id say he had his awakening 2 days ago and now he's all knowing all powerful this quick

Divine_univers
Divine_univers
2 months ago
Commented

how much time has passed since his awakening cause I actually have 0 clue

Divine_univers