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My communication with my reader base is especially lacking. I put this here for those with suggestions and take joining the discord server as too burdensome. Please highlight areas of improvement and suggest unique ideas. I promise to respond. ^_^ Of you're expecting a review, it's in the auxiliary Chaps, along with the link to my discord server.
A well written story that clearly has a great deal of thought put into the world and the characters living within it. I have thoroughly enjoyed the clever plots and schemes as well as some of the combat and I find myself anticipating future events. It pains me that this story remains relatively unknown. I will follow it to the end.
1.Slow pace needs time-skips. 2.The MC is still a 5-year-old after almost 100 chapters. 3.Too many unnecessary fillers. 4.Excessive focus on background characters. I enjoyed the first 20 to 30 chapters, thinking it was just setting up the story and anticipating a time skip. But oh boy, was I wrong. We're 100 chapters in, and there’s still a ton of unnecessary filler. This novel seems more focused on background characters than the main character. For example, there are 50 to 70 chapters of random mining for mana stones—completely unnecessary. This could have been handled earlier in the story or skipped altogether. Instead, we get a drawn-out sequence that feels like it’s there just to pad the novel. And the whole "killing people with snakes" arc feels like a convoluted way to stretch the story without adding meaningful progression. Even worse, after 100 chapters, the protagonist is still a 5-year-old acting like a full-grown adult. I get that this is a fantasy story, but even fantasy needs some realism. It’s becoming boring. You could skip 10 to 30 chapters and still feel like you haven’t missed anything—that’s how painfully slow the story is. The writing itself is solid, but the pacing and unnecessary padding make this novel feel disappointing. It could really benefit from a rewrite or a significant cut to its length.
Only updating is the problem, I really want more chapters coming in shorter time. Thx 🙏🏻 ☺️
most of the chapters don't even have the main character and it's just a bunch of side characters doing stuff
It’s all good but mage > knight my man I’m just disappointed in not a mage but just knight .
This is top notch witting. I bet he's hesitant in giving us the full gist from beginning, he made the story so nice and suspenseful to read. Nice job keep it up.
Book cover 💯Novel name 😎Synopsis 🤩it is nice to see another author from Nigeria 🇳🇬 Here, bro I send good vibes and confidence your way
novel was good up until about chapter 7 so if you're looking for a quite "bite" of story then this is the book for you. unfortunately the author seemed to want to write a new story that far in and redesigned the main character out of nowhere or atleast that's how it felt. I didn't read every comment or pay attention to polls so maybe they got pressured into rewriting the story into a swordplay story but the sudden rupture from magic blessed mc with a magic oriented physique who specialises in study, quick thoughts and "mana veins" or whatever they're called to throwing that all out the window so he can become a knight was too disruptive.
good story... :) digoiogiefgidiofoidojdgjohgogl lkg gmn m[gj l oh mh h mng g ,ng k gn og og og j o orj vbij jg jj gj j gjg jg jg jgjg g jgj g jg j
ch 269, bro you gotta be kidding me right, all that planning and you just throw it away?? Bruuhhhhhh, srry not my cup of tea, when you see mc getting abused for litteray no reason, why did he not call over fredric when he cleary had time and knew what would happen just naahhh.
This is one of my favourite. so I need more chapter to read.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
When will we go back to having 1 ch/day? As the updates are spaced out sometimes I lose where I left off ........................................................
I’ve come from a novel where I can’t read properly but I won’t tell you why. I’m getting flashbacks in this cover on an Athena WEBTOON
what happened to the story is it dropped? after all it's an interesting story love the pace at wish it develops.. keep up the good work don't stop this novel
A top quality novel that is finally not harem, It’s filled with various interesting and unique ideas and I like the original back-in time theme. Overall it’s a great story .
Talking about ch 241. And i just want to say that i am a bit harsh with the critique, and just want to say that while there may be inconsistences (very few) those do not define the incredible book you have written. I trully enjoy reading it . In retrosepct i just want to say to you the author that you are doing an amazing job and do not lose confindence in yourself and you ability to write. Its just that when you are immersed in the book you can get heated real quick. So dont take the critque that you get to personal as most if not all come from passionate readers who enjoy your story. Its almost like when something bad (or not enjoyable) happens many will complain but when you are doing an amazing job, there is often no praise (if you take me as an example ahha). So keep up.
I will say, much of the criticism about this arc is valid. For example, the bad time skips, leaving many unexplained aspects. And most importantly the nerf. In my opinion much of this story and its sucsess is predicated upon the fact that the mc is calculativ, smart and strong. And the fact that he sometimes makes stupid choices like this one with no considerations is tottaly out of charactor, and creates a paradox. This makes the story not make sense logic-wise. Hence it makes the reader feel stiffiled, irritated, becuase it feels as if you (the author) is forcing it, by bourdening the mc ( for something that is not so important, relatively speaking) and this makes it especially bad because since those who read this are rooting for the mc. I understand why some people might find it vexing reading him going through so much trouble when he could logically bully the entire world with his strength. You tried to justify the reason, (and i qoute" people make stupid mistakes"), but this is not good enough. Take this as a learning experience.
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Author did a good job in portraying the royal family and his journey as reed. Honestly is a refreshing novel different from the normal ones. I feel lucky that I found this gem.
This comment to let you know i am reading your novel so stop spaamming the comments.
so far i really enjoyed the reading. it's all we can expect from this niche and a bit more. the world building has a nice touch but the lore even though it's well made with reassured background and foundation to be explored it is also lacking a bit of touch, i mean we had glimpses about certain topics but like the demons spawn or their activities we only heard them now (200ish) but I also can understand a bit the author wants to keep leading to finish in a fast paced way the overview of the first continent and that's ok but it also lacks understanding of those forces and their mindset... i mean the psique of characters, it's like they're robots doing stuff. there's no interaction beyond accomplishing tasks. There's no depth to their psique, I'm including side characters and mc himself. but it's funny bc those grandmasters were well made and the emperor as well. every chapter made to acomodate those people were funny and full of nice expectations but the rest are only robots accomplishing tasks without much of a interaction. the slave with red hair was introduced with so much details in the first shopping spree I thought I would see her doing stuff but after that she just greets the guests. and last but not least I must say the way the author made the culture of plundering and greedy behavior for resources was spectacular. it was stablished systemativaly and a sort of justification not the same info dump all cultivation novel writes. there's some sort of resonance and you could see the "rules" there's no hypocrisy because everyone blooded their hands to get there and iit's understandable. it's just some insights of myself please hope you don't mind. keep it up 🙂
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💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 (........... Player Best System...............) ( SYSTEM )::GRADE::( 1 ) ( STATUS ):( FEATURES ) ( Queste. ) ( Inventory. ) (. Shop. ) ( Upgrade. ) ( Name )::JIVAN ( Title ) :: ??? ( TRUE.Name )::?????? ( Age. ):: 18 ( RACE )::HUMAN ( Gender:Male ( Bloodlines )::HUMAN Bloodlines ( Physique )::HUMAN Physique :: Gamer mind Physique :: Gamer body Physique :: Gamer Soul spirit Physique :: ??? ( LEVEL )=( 1 ) ( 9 experience equal 1 Stats ) ( Level up condition experience collect total to ( Experience 6,299,937 ) ( level up condition two stage ) :: ( One Stage ):: Basic Stats+( A ) :: ( Two Stage ):: very very hard mission complete ( Job Classes:?????????? ( Rank: ( Human )+ (lord)++ ( King )+++ ( emperor )++++ ( God )+++++ ( Basic Stats ) ( foundational Stage: ( Strength:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Agility:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Defence:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Vitality:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Soul:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Mana:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Intelligence:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Basic Stats ) ( Perfect Stage: ( Strength:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Agility:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Defence:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Vitality:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Soul:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Mana:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Intelligence:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Basic Stats ) ( Perfect limit breaker Stage: ( Strength:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] (Agility:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Defence:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Vitality:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Soul:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Mana:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Intelligence:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ________ ( Skills in soul container in 70% Skills in Body Container in 30% ) ( Skills. Rank ) ( Skills:: Common skills :: Extra skills :: Rare skills :: Unique skills :: Ultimate skills :: Supreme skill :: Origin skills :: Dormant Skills :: Awakening skills _________________ ( Abilities in soul container in 30% Abilities in Body Container in 70% ) ( Abilities Rank ) ( Abilities :: Common Abilities :: Extra Abilities :: Rare Abilities :: Unique Abilities :: Ultimate Abilities :: Supreme Abilities :: Origin Abilities :: Dormant Abilities :: Awakening Abilities ___________________ ( level 1 magic Grimoire. ) +( level 1 spell page 100 ( level 2 spell page 200 ( level 3 spell page 300 ________________ (. Teer magic )+{ 1 + 10 } ...... ( 1 Teer magic Spell ( 2 Teer magic Spell ( 3 Teer magic Spell ( 4 Teer magic Spell ( 5 Teer magic Spell ( 6 Teer magic Spell ( 7 Teer magic Spell ( 8 Teer magic Spell ( 9 Teer magic Spell .. ( Super Teer magic Spell 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 ___________________________________ [Strength: (Normal male: 10 points). Strength is a compound value of different types of strength. Isometric, plyometric, eccentric and concentric strength values from every muscle are involved in the final calculation. (Two humans with the same strength value can have different muscular strength and very different builds. A world-level bodybuilder could have the same score as a world-level sprinter. The former would crush the latter in charge lifting, whereas he would have a hard time to keep up with the sprinter’s speed and explosiveness.)] [Agility: (Normal male: 10 points). Agility is a compound value of reaction speed, reflexes, coordination, balance, body control, and suppleness values. (Two humans with the same agility value can have very different builds).] [Defence: (Normal male: 10 points). Constitution is a compound value of stamina, toughness, body density, blood amount and your immune system. Toughness can refer both to the hardness of your body or the one of your cells as well. It usually correlates with a higher body density and thus a higher mass as well.] [Vitality: (Normal male: 10 points). The natural pendant of constitution. Vitality is a compound value of cell vitality, your metabolism, and cell-repair efficiency. It can be affected by your diet. Note that vitality is different from lifespan. For example, mice have a strong vitality, with a very high metabolism, but they die fast. A perfect DNA repair ability could increase your lifespan limit, but on Earth, such an ability is unheard of.] [Intelligence: (Normal male: 10 points). Intelligence is a compound value of reaction speed, memory, ability to focus, mental strength, processing speed, visualization, creativity, and many other cognitive abilities. Note down that psychological issues wouldn’t necessarily be solved by a higher intelligence and could instead be exacerbated [Soul:(Normal male:5 points).defines the soul and explains the activities of living things by laying out three defining capacities of the soul: desire perception, and intellect. He then uses these three fundamental capacities to account for further abilities such as and imagination and supernatural and super strong emotions and True Name and super strong desire create and Skills and Abilities and Concepts and Laws .[Mana:(Normal male:10 points).Mana is a form of magic used to pay the mana cost required to cast most of in the magic Spells . It is also used to cover other costs, such as those to activate certain abilities and Skills The most basic mana source is land, though certain spells and abilities to Skills can also produce mana ___________________ ( 0+999 )+( G ) ( 9999+19.999 )+( F ) ( 19.999+29.999 )+( E ) ( 29.999+39.999 )+( D ) ( 39.999+49.999 )+( C ) ( 49.999+59.999 )+( B ) ( 59.999+69.999 )+( A ) ( 69.999+79.999 )+( S ) ( 79.999+89.999 )+( SS ) ( 89.999+99.999 )+( SSS ) _________________________________________________________ basic stats fight 1 time strong opponent Experience increase to normal (basic stats fight 2 time strong opponent Experience increase to 100% (basic stats fight 3 time strong opponent Experience increase to 200% (basic stats fight 4 time strong opponent Experience increase to 300% (basic stats fight 5 time strong opponent Experience increase to 400% (basic stats fight 6 time strong opponent Experience increase to 500% (basic stats fight 7 time strong opponent Experience increase to 600% (basic stats fight 8 time strong opponent Experience increase to 700% (basic stats fight 9 time strong opponent Experience increase to 800% ___________ (basic stats fight 10 time strong opponent Experience increase to 8000% (basic stats fight 11 time strong opponent Experience increase to 9000% (basic stats fight 12 time strong opponent Experience increase to 10.000% (basic stats fight 13 time strong opponent Experience increase to 11000% (basic stats fight 14 time strong opponent Experience increase to 12000% (basic stats fight 15 time strong opponent Experience increase to 13000% (basic stats fight 16 time strong opponent Experience increase to 14000% (basic stats fight 17 time strong opponent Experience increase to 15000% (basic stats fight 18 time strong opponent Experience increase to 16000% (basic stats fight 19 time strong opponent Experience increase to 17000% ____________________ (basic stats fight 20 time strong opponent Experience increase to 1.80.000% (basic stats fight 21 time strong opponent Experience increase to 2.80.000% (basic stats fight 22 time strong opponent Experience increase to 2.80.000% ___________________________________________________________
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Very good novel i recommend you read it has few error so if your worried about it don't
yea tbh I like the book the only things bringing it down are the pov switches and the mc is still 5. and taking the mc outta the story for 8 plus chapters at a time kills the vibe I started to just skip chapters without him.
The Story is really well written. Nice Worldbuilding, nice characters. The only issue : not enought chap xD [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Congrats Void_ for getting 5k collections that's quite a big achievement and im proud of you.
This story is extremely well written and I can tell a lot of effort has been put into building the world and MC. There are very few grammatical errors due to the author actually caring about the readability of his novel that you don’t typically see in other novels of this level. The author is actively taking suggestions from his readers which contributes to how well the story reads. One thing that I believe the author does well in this novel is keeping the flow of the story consistent and reliable. I think the main contributor to this is the fact that the author plans out events ahead of time, outlining key events and chapters before writing them to connect seemingly insignificant details that you might look over to events later on in the story that would have played out much differently.
My communication with my reader base is especially lacking. I put this here for those with suggestions and take joining the discord server as too burdensome. Please highlight areas of improvement and suggest unique ideas. I promise to respond. ^_^ Of you're expecting a review, it's in the auxiliary Chaps, along with the link to my discord server.
A well written story that clearly has a great deal of thought put into the world and the characters living within it. I have thoroughly enjoyed the clever plots and schemes as well as some of the combat and I find myself anticipating future events. It pains me that this story remains relatively unknown. I will follow it to the end.
1.Slow pace needs time-skips. 2.The MC is still a 5-year-old after almost 100 chapters. 3.Too many unnecessary fillers. 4.Excessive focus on background characters. I enjoyed the first 20 to 30 chapters, thinking it was just setting up the story and anticipating a time skip. But oh boy, was I wrong. We're 100 chapters in, and there’s still a ton of unnecessary filler. This novel seems more focused on background characters than the main character. For example, there are 50 to 70 chapters of random mining for mana stones—completely unnecessary. This could have been handled earlier in the story or skipped altogether. Instead, we get a drawn-out sequence that feels like it’s there just to pad the novel. And the whole "killing people with snakes" arc feels like a convoluted way to stretch the story without adding meaningful progression. Even worse, after 100 chapters, the protagonist is still a 5-year-old acting like a full-grown adult. I get that this is a fantasy story, but even fantasy needs some realism. It’s becoming boring. You could skip 10 to 30 chapters and still feel like you haven’t missed anything—that’s how painfully slow the story is. The writing itself is solid, but the pacing and unnecessary padding make this novel feel disappointing. It could really benefit from a rewrite or a significant cut to its length.
Only updating is the problem, I really want more chapters coming in shorter time. Thx 🙏🏻 ☺️
most of the chapters don't even have the main character and it's just a bunch of side characters doing stuff
It’s all good but mage > knight my man I’m just disappointed in not a mage but just knight .
This is top notch witting. I bet he's hesitant in giving us the full gist from beginning, he made the story so nice and suspenseful to read. Nice job keep it up.
Book cover 💯Novel name 😎Synopsis 🤩it is nice to see another author from Nigeria 🇳🇬 Here, bro I send good vibes and confidence your way
novel was good up until about chapter 7 so if you're looking for a quite "bite" of story then this is the book for you. unfortunately the author seemed to want to write a new story that far in and redesigned the main character out of nowhere or atleast that's how it felt. I didn't read every comment or pay attention to polls so maybe they got pressured into rewriting the story into a swordplay story but the sudden rupture from magic blessed mc with a magic oriented physique who specialises in study, quick thoughts and "mana veins" or whatever they're called to throwing that all out the window so he can become a knight was too disruptive.
good story... :) digoiogiefgidiofoidojdgjohgogl lkg gmn m[gj l oh mh h mng g ,ng k gn og og og j o orj vbij jg jj gj j gjg jg jg jgjg g jgj g jg j
ch 269, bro you gotta be kidding me right, all that planning and you just throw it away?? Bruuhhhhhh, srry not my cup of tea, when you see mc getting abused for litteray no reason, why did he not call over fredric when he cleary had time and knew what would happen just naahhh.
This is one of my favourite. so I need more chapter to read.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
When will we go back to having 1 ch/day? As the updates are spaced out sometimes I lose where I left off ........................................................
I’ve come from a novel where I can’t read properly but I won’t tell you why. I’m getting flashbacks in this cover on an Athena WEBTOON
what happened to the story is it dropped? after all it's an interesting story love the pace at wish it develops.. keep up the good work don't stop this novel
A top quality novel that is finally not harem, It’s filled with various interesting and unique ideas and I like the original back-in time theme. Overall it’s a great story .
Talking about ch 241. And i just want to say that i am a bit harsh with the critique, and just want to say that while there may be inconsistences (very few) those do not define the incredible book you have written. I trully enjoy reading it . In retrosepct i just want to say to you the author that you are doing an amazing job and do not lose confindence in yourself and you ability to write. Its just that when you are immersed in the book you can get heated real quick. So dont take the critque that you get to personal as most if not all come from passionate readers who enjoy your story. Its almost like when something bad (or not enjoyable) happens many will complain but when you are doing an amazing job, there is often no praise (if you take me as an example ahha). So keep up.
I will say, much of the criticism about this arc is valid. For example, the bad time skips, leaving many unexplained aspects. And most importantly the nerf. In my opinion much of this story and its sucsess is predicated upon the fact that the mc is calculativ, smart and strong. And the fact that he sometimes makes stupid choices like this one with no considerations is tottaly out of charactor, and creates a paradox. This makes the story not make sense logic-wise. Hence it makes the reader feel stiffiled, irritated, becuase it feels as if you (the author) is forcing it, by bourdening the mc ( for something that is not so important, relatively speaking) and this makes it especially bad because since those who read this are rooting for the mc. I understand why some people might find it vexing reading him going through so much trouble when he could logically bully the entire world with his strength. You tried to justify the reason, (and i qoute" people make stupid mistakes"), but this is not good enough. Take this as a learning experience.
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Author did a good job in portraying the royal family and his journey as reed. Honestly is a refreshing novel different from the normal ones. I feel lucky that I found this gem.
This comment to let you know i am reading your novel so stop spaamming the comments.
so far i really enjoyed the reading. it's all we can expect from this niche and a bit more. the world building has a nice touch but the lore even though it's well made with reassured background and foundation to be explored it is also lacking a bit of touch, i mean we had glimpses about certain topics but like the demons spawn or their activities we only heard them now (200ish) but I also can understand a bit the author wants to keep leading to finish in a fast paced way the overview of the first continent and that's ok but it also lacks understanding of those forces and their mindset... i mean the psique of characters, it's like they're robots doing stuff. there's no interaction beyond accomplishing tasks. There's no depth to their psique, I'm including side characters and mc himself. but it's funny bc those grandmasters were well made and the emperor as well. every chapter made to acomodate those people were funny and full of nice expectations but the rest are only robots accomplishing tasks without much of a interaction. the slave with red hair was introduced with so much details in the first shopping spree I thought I would see her doing stuff but after that she just greets the guests. and last but not least I must say the way the author made the culture of plundering and greedy behavior for resources was spectacular. it was stablished systemativaly and a sort of justification not the same info dump all cultivation novel writes. there's some sort of resonance and you could see the "rules" there's no hypocrisy because everyone blooded their hands to get there and iit's understandable. it's just some insights of myself please hope you don't mind. keep it up 🙂
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💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 (........... Player Best System...............) ( SYSTEM )::GRADE::( 1 ) ( STATUS ):( FEATURES ) ( Queste. ) ( Inventory. ) (. Shop. ) ( Upgrade. ) ( Name )::JIVAN ( Title ) :: ??? ( TRUE.Name )::?????? ( Age. ):: 18 ( RACE )::HUMAN ( Gender:Male ( Bloodlines )::HUMAN Bloodlines ( Physique )::HUMAN Physique :: Gamer mind Physique :: Gamer body Physique :: Gamer Soul spirit Physique :: ??? ( LEVEL )=( 1 ) ( 9 experience equal 1 Stats ) ( Level up condition experience collect total to ( Experience 6,299,937 ) ( level up condition two stage ) :: ( One Stage ):: Basic Stats+( A ) :: ( Two Stage ):: very very hard mission complete ( Job Classes:?????????? ( Rank: ( Human )+ (lord)++ ( King )+++ ( emperor )++++ ( God )+++++ ( Basic Stats ) ( foundational Stage: ( Strength:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Agility:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Defence:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Vitality:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Soul:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Mana:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Intelligence:[ SSS ] [ 999 ] ( Basic Stats ) ( Perfect Stage: ( Strength:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Agility:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Defence:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Vitality:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Soul:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Mana:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Intelligence:[ SSS ] [ 9.999 ] ( Basic Stats ) ( Perfect limit breaker Stage: ( Strength:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] (Agility:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Defence:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Vitality:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Soul:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Mana:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ( Intelligence:[ SSS ] [ 99.999 ] ________ ( Skills in soul container in 70% Skills in Body Container in 30% ) ( Skills. Rank ) ( Skills:: Common skills :: Extra skills :: Rare skills :: Unique skills :: Ultimate skills :: Supreme skill :: Origin skills :: Dormant Skills :: Awakening skills _________________ ( Abilities in soul container in 30% Abilities in Body Container in 70% ) ( Abilities Rank ) ( Abilities :: Common Abilities :: Extra Abilities :: Rare Abilities :: Unique Abilities :: Ultimate Abilities :: Supreme Abilities :: Origin Abilities :: Dormant Abilities :: Awakening Abilities ___________________ ( level 1 magic Grimoire. ) +( level 1 spell page 100 ( level 2 spell page 200 ( level 3 spell page 300 ________________ (. Teer magic )+{ 1 + 10 } ...... ( 1 Teer magic Spell ( 2 Teer magic Spell ( 3 Teer magic Spell ( 4 Teer magic Spell ( 5 Teer magic Spell ( 6 Teer magic Spell ( 7 Teer magic Spell ( 8 Teer magic Spell ( 9 Teer magic Spell .. ( Super Teer magic Spell 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 ___________________________________ [Strength: (Normal male: 10 points). Strength is a compound value of different types of strength. Isometric, plyometric, eccentric and concentric strength values from every muscle are involved in the final calculation. (Two humans with the same strength value can have different muscular strength and very different builds. A world-level bodybuilder could have the same score as a world-level sprinter. The former would crush the latter in charge lifting, whereas he would have a hard time to keep up with the sprinter’s speed and explosiveness.)] [Agility: (Normal male: 10 points). Agility is a compound value of reaction speed, reflexes, coordination, balance, body control, and suppleness values. (Two humans with the same agility value can have very different builds).] [Defence: (Normal male: 10 points). Constitution is a compound value of stamina, toughness, body density, blood amount and your immune system. Toughness can refer both to the hardness of your body or the one of your cells as well. It usually correlates with a higher body density and thus a higher mass as well.] [Vitality: (Normal male: 10 points). The natural pendant of constitution. Vitality is a compound value of cell vitality, your metabolism, and cell-repair efficiency. It can be affected by your diet. Note that vitality is different from lifespan. For example, mice have a strong vitality, with a very high metabolism, but they die fast. A perfect DNA repair ability could increase your lifespan limit, but on Earth, such an ability is unheard of.] [Intelligence: (Normal male: 10 points). Intelligence is a compound value of reaction speed, memory, ability to focus, mental strength, processing speed, visualization, creativity, and many other cognitive abilities. Note down that psychological issues wouldn’t necessarily be solved by a higher intelligence and could instead be exacerbated [Soul:(Normal male:5 points).defines the soul and explains the activities of living things by laying out three defining capacities of the soul: desire perception, and intellect. He then uses these three fundamental capacities to account for further abilities such as and imagination and supernatural and super strong emotions and True Name and super strong desire create and Skills and Abilities and Concepts and Laws .[Mana:(Normal male:10 points).Mana is a form of magic used to pay the mana cost required to cast most of in the magic Spells . It is also used to cover other costs, such as those to activate certain abilities and Skills The most basic mana source is land, though certain spells and abilities to Skills can also produce mana ___________________ ( 0+999 )+( G ) ( 9999+19.999 )+( F ) ( 19.999+29.999 )+( E ) ( 29.999+39.999 )+( D ) ( 39.999+49.999 )+( C ) ( 49.999+59.999 )+( B ) ( 59.999+69.999 )+( A ) ( 69.999+79.999 )+( S ) ( 79.999+89.999 )+( SS ) ( 89.999+99.999 )+( SSS ) _________________________________________________________ basic stats fight 1 time strong opponent Experience increase to normal (basic stats fight 2 time strong opponent Experience increase to 100% (basic stats fight 3 time strong opponent Experience increase to 200% (basic stats fight 4 time strong opponent Experience increase to 300% (basic stats fight 5 time strong opponent Experience increase to 400% (basic stats fight 6 time strong opponent Experience increase to 500% (basic stats fight 7 time strong opponent Experience increase to 600% (basic stats fight 8 time strong opponent Experience increase to 700% (basic stats fight 9 time strong opponent Experience increase to 800% ___________ (basic stats fight 10 time strong opponent Experience increase to 8000% (basic stats fight 11 time strong opponent Experience increase to 9000% (basic stats fight 12 time strong opponent Experience increase to 10.000% (basic stats fight 13 time strong opponent Experience increase to 11000% (basic stats fight 14 time strong opponent Experience increase to 12000% (basic stats fight 15 time strong opponent Experience increase to 13000% (basic stats fight 16 time strong opponent Experience increase to 14000% (basic stats fight 17 time strong opponent Experience increase to 15000% (basic stats fight 18 time strong opponent Experience increase to 16000% (basic stats fight 19 time strong opponent Experience increase to 17000% ____________________ (basic stats fight 20 time strong opponent Experience increase to 1.80.000% (basic stats fight 21 time strong opponent Experience increase to 2.80.000% (basic stats fight 22 time strong opponent Experience increase to 2.80.000% ___________________________________________________________
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Very good novel i recommend you read it has few error so if your worried about it don't
yea tbh I like the book the only things bringing it down are the pov switches and the mc is still 5. and taking the mc outta the story for 8 plus chapters at a time kills the vibe I started to just skip chapters without him.
The Story is really well written. Nice Worldbuilding, nice characters. The only issue : not enought chap xD [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Congrats Void_ for getting 5k collections that's quite a big achievement and im proud of you.
This story is extremely well written and I can tell a lot of effort has been put into building the world and MC. There are very few grammatical errors due to the author actually caring about the readability of his novel that you don’t typically see in other novels of this level. The author is actively taking suggestions from his readers which contributes to how well the story reads. One thing that I believe the author does well in this novel is keeping the flow of the story consistent and reliable. I think the main contributor to this is the fact that the author plans out events ahead of time, outlining key events and chapters before writing them to connect seemingly insignificant details that you might look over to events later on in the story that would have played out much differently.