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Tulis ulasanЧестно говоря, я не совсем понимаю главного героя. Даже если ты хочешь защищать своих близких, не нужно быть для них курицей- наседкой, а если хочешь сохранить оригинальный сюжет, а он с самого начала именно это и говорит, то не надо в него влезать вообще. В общем, я как вижу, если бы он действительно хотел спасти свою сестру, ещё до начала плавания Эйса он мог бы это сделать.
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It’s good book, but not the best… jus t lik this book because this dont have harem.. I just don’t like harem, just so stupid word ever… anyway, but sadly each time I read this, I got highly second hand embarrassment, so cringe… so goofy!
Its a copy paste of 'twins of the sea' fanfic, but here mc is Sanji's brother instead of Luffy's with some minor changes in how the mc interacts with others.Mc doesn't affect the storyline atall
I think this one can be considered as one of the example of a novel where you can get more information by reading the reviews rather than the chapters itself. I don't want to give it low rating, but can't give it high rating either. average if you like "follow the Canon" kind of novel
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This, is a Great Work. Bravo! The Comedy is Great, i was laughing and chuckling all the way to the end. The MC is Powerful, but not a babysitter for the crew. The chemistry with other characters is Great, not looking so forced like other fanfic, it's quite subtle. There's some character development for Mc, although not much. Also, the Mc is smart and can actually strategize. And The Most Important Thing to Note : No Stupid Harem. (I don't hate Harem story, it's just i think they're hard to make it right, that most of the time the characters looks like a braindead or blind or many other things, that the flow of the story just get wrecked beyond repair)
its rly good im wondering if your posting this on other sites i cant be bothered to deal with webnovel telling me to download their app to see the full chapters
Good premise but the mc just follows the crew like a dog, legit just normal one piece with mc tagging along. In the beginning it seemed like mc would go off and do his own thing but nah
It is very similar to another story where the MC is Luffy's brother, he ate the "goro goro no mi", he joins the navy wearing a fox mask, he spends his time following the muguiwara and annoys everyone (especially smokey since he is his superior). 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
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I like the story quite a bit, even though it is following canon. The jokes are repetitive at times but it makes me laugh. The only joke for me that annoyed me by the repetitiveness is the one where MC gets mad at getting called an idiot and then calls them an idiot followed by a narcissistic moment for himself. Overall a good fanfic, I'm not sure why there are people complaining about a fanfic but good work author!
The MC instantly getting along with everyone for no reason, coupled with how annoying his character sounds makes me wanna bleach my eyes with how cringe this trash is. This site needs a delete ASAP rating exactly because garbage like this fanfic exists. Also, the timeline is all over the place, not to mention the writer intentionally mix' it up because, and I qoute, "It's more fun". You know what else is fun, author? Rounding up braindead mollusks like you (who thinks posting your cursed work sounds like a good idea) and burning you all in one giant camp fire. The least you idyeeeets can do is make us people with common sense feel warm for the night.
Author, with MCs monologues etc., insists making MC seem like a good person, when the person in question left his terminally ill mom with his f'ed up family, in favor of 'guiding' (or let's be honest, he just wants to go on adventures), Sanji, when Sanji himself would've been fine having escaped alone. He's perfectly capable of helping a character ease her pain, or at least be beside her throughout the process, but still chose to leave her to her destiny. This is what plagues most garbage-rated works on this site - Moral inconsistency. These Authors don't know how to properly convey a character's moral compass in a way that's organic, so they supplement it with monologue, etc. instead of actions. It's poor story telling, leading to a disconnect between how the author views their character and how the reader sees them. It's one of the most st-upid, very-in-your-face, mistakes an author can make.
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Alright story telling and good backgroun, it’ just I dont like the mc, to simpy. And also it’ just a recap of the og so it got boring very quickly. Other then that good story
Writing quality: The story is well written the sense that I haven't found any major grammatical mistakes as of yet... Story development: The author has changed many events which were crucial for the character development of Canon Characters... Character Development: something destroyed by the author...examples like major characters sympathizing or just listening to the mc even when he approaches them firstly....brush imagine going to dragon and talking casually ..... u ain't gonna get a gossip buddy for sure... Furthermore the mc has gained mastery over his devil fruit as if it were nothing......this is just a joke to those people who have been training their devil fruit power for years.... Update stability: Well, its good.. World background: nothing much to say about this since this is a fan fiction Lastly, I mean no harm to anyone and am just offering some criticism....But simple acts like ace not losing an arm have a huge effect of the character development and even in the future plot....
this had a good start then it just devolved into a mess that gets annoying...litteraly 99% of this fic is the mc laughing at something not funny...like no plot no nothing just the mc laughing at litteraly nothing funny...
no reason to read this unless you like recapping the original since nothing will change in the story no reason to read this unless you like recapping the original since nothing will change in the story
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Overall it's good story, although i don't like how mc just became the Neny of Straw hats. He can just go in his own way. For his own adventure.
Not a single novel that I have ever read comes close to this ones comedy. Many times I laughed outloud, Absolute gem of a novel. Thank you!
really good and love the development of the characters......................................................................................
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Честно говоря, я не совсем понимаю главного героя. Даже если ты хочешь защищать своих близких, не нужно быть для них курицей- наседкой, а если хочешь сохранить оригинальный сюжет, а он с самого начала именно это и говорит, то не надо в него влезать вообще. В общем, я как вижу, если бы он действительно хотел спасти свою сестру, ещё до начала плавания Эйса он мог бы это сделать.
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It’s good book, but not the best… jus t lik this book because this dont have harem.. I just don’t like harem, just so stupid word ever… anyway, but sadly each time I read this, I got highly second hand embarrassment, so cringe… so goofy!
Its a copy paste of 'twins of the sea' fanfic, but here mc is Sanji's brother instead of Luffy's with some minor changes in how the mc interacts with others.Mc doesn't affect the storyline atall
I think this one can be considered as one of the example of a novel where you can get more information by reading the reviews rather than the chapters itself. I don't want to give it low rating, but can't give it high rating either. average if you like "follow the Canon" kind of novel
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This, is a Great Work. Bravo! The Comedy is Great, i was laughing and chuckling all the way to the end. The MC is Powerful, but not a babysitter for the crew. The chemistry with other characters is Great, not looking so forced like other fanfic, it's quite subtle. There's some character development for Mc, although not much. Also, the Mc is smart and can actually strategize. And The Most Important Thing to Note : No Stupid Harem. (I don't hate Harem story, it's just i think they're hard to make it right, that most of the time the characters looks like a braindead or blind or many other things, that the flow of the story just get wrecked beyond repair)
its rly good im wondering if your posting this on other sites i cant be bothered to deal with webnovel telling me to download their app to see the full chapters
Good premise but the mc just follows the crew like a dog, legit just normal one piece with mc tagging along. In the beginning it seemed like mc would go off and do his own thing but nah
It is very similar to another story where the MC is Luffy's brother, he ate the "goro goro no mi", he joins the navy wearing a fox mask, he spends his time following the muguiwara and annoys everyone (especially smokey since he is his superior). 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
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I like the story quite a bit, even though it is following canon. The jokes are repetitive at times but it makes me laugh. The only joke for me that annoyed me by the repetitiveness is the one where MC gets mad at getting called an idiot and then calls them an idiot followed by a narcissistic moment for himself. Overall a good fanfic, I'm not sure why there are people complaining about a fanfic but good work author!
The MC instantly getting along with everyone for no reason, coupled with how annoying his character sounds makes me wanna bleach my eyes with how cringe this trash is. This site needs a delete ASAP rating exactly because garbage like this fanfic exists. Also, the timeline is all over the place, not to mention the writer intentionally mix' it up because, and I qoute, "It's more fun". You know what else is fun, author? Rounding up braindead mollusks like you (who thinks posting your cursed work sounds like a good idea) and burning you all in one giant camp fire. The least you idyeeeets can do is make us people with common sense feel warm for the night.
Author, with MCs monologues etc., insists making MC seem like a good person, when the person in question left his terminally ill mom with his f'ed up family, in favor of 'guiding' (or let's be honest, he just wants to go on adventures), Sanji, when Sanji himself would've been fine having escaped alone. He's perfectly capable of helping a character ease her pain, or at least be beside her throughout the process, but still chose to leave her to her destiny. This is what plagues most garbage-rated works on this site - Moral inconsistency. These Authors don't know how to properly convey a character's moral compass in a way that's organic, so they supplement it with monologue, etc. instead of actions. It's poor story telling, leading to a disconnect between how the author views their character and how the reader sees them. It's one of the most st-upid, very-in-your-face, mistakes an author can make.
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Alright story telling and good backgroun, it’ just I dont like the mc, to simpy. And also it’ just a recap of the og so it got boring very quickly. Other then that good story
Writing quality: The story is well written the sense that I haven't found any major grammatical mistakes as of yet... Story development: The author has changed many events which were crucial for the character development of Canon Characters... Character Development: something destroyed by the author...examples like major characters sympathizing or just listening to the mc even when he approaches them firstly....brush imagine going to dragon and talking casually ..... u ain't gonna get a gossip buddy for sure... Furthermore the mc has gained mastery over his devil fruit as if it were nothing......this is just a joke to those people who have been training their devil fruit power for years.... Update stability: Well, its good.. World background: nothing much to say about this since this is a fan fiction Lastly, I mean no harm to anyone and am just offering some criticism....But simple acts like ace not losing an arm have a huge effect of the character development and even in the future plot....
this had a good start then it just devolved into a mess that gets annoying...litteraly 99% of this fic is the mc laughing at something not funny...like no plot no nothing just the mc laughing at litteraly nothing funny...
no reason to read this unless you like recapping the original since nothing will change in the story no reason to read this unless you like recapping the original since nothing will change in the story
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Overall it's good story, although i don't like how mc just became the Neny of Straw hats. He can just go in his own way. For his own adventure.
Not a single novel that I have ever read comes close to this ones comedy. Many times I laughed outloud, Absolute gem of a novel. Thank you!
really good and love the development of the characters......................................................................................
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Is robin the love interest?