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God the Machine
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What happens to what we make up? Is it created in reality and is it possible to participate in it and change it, since we are the creators of it? This question will be answered by one young man who had no idea that he would die and what awaits him after death.
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This is a translation. The original author is a Russian writer: Westheimer183
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Interesting fanfiction in mass effect as a ruler. I do not judge grammar because I read it from a translator, so please do not write about it. (many words should have an opinion) :)
There little thought going to make the background of the character. The story plot is rushed and this story could of made 100 or more chapters if there was more effort put in to it. Besides that this was a amazing fanfiction which got inspiration from different sources such as Roman, 40k warhammer, and other historical things from the past of the earth’s history. I loved it one of the better stories on Webnovel but if you do better you can make an amazing story worth 5 stars and would love to read more books from you. This is me trying to give you constructive criticism so hope you don’t take offense to this and keep up the amazing work as the author!
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Jilid 1
- 1 Second chance or your dream. 2 years ago
- 2 Legacy of Fear. 2 years ago
- 3 Dreams and Acts. 2 years ago
- 4 The Birth of God 2 years ago
- 5 He who is not with Me is against Me 2 years ago
- 6 The Road to the Stars and the Echo of War. 2 years ago
- 7 Diu vivunt in Imperium! Vivat Imperator! 2 years ago
- 8 What you created 2 years ago
- 9 Hidden in the Ages 2 years ago
- 10 Submit or die, it's the only way! 2 years ago
- 11 New Life 2 years ago
- 12 Hidden in the shadows and sparks of war 2 years ago
- 13 Those who have been abandoned 2 years ago
- 14 We are the Emperor's hammer! 2 years ago
- 15 Light in our hearts! 2 years ago
- 16 The enemy is an animal, a xenos, an alien! 2 years ago
- 17 Dove of Peace 2 years ago
- 18 I will be the Wind! 2 years ago
- 19 Secrets of the God of War 2 years ago
- 20 Challenging the darkness. 1 years ago
- 21 Anger is my sword. Faith is my shield. Mind is my fortress. 1 years ago
- 22 Star Wanderer 1 years ago
- 23 The Emperor's Arm 1 years ago
- 24 The Age of Mankind 1 years ago
- 25 My path is my duty 1 years ago
- 26 Changing your memory 1 years ago
- 27 Sons of Leo 1 years ago
- 28 Melting in the darkness 1 years ago
- 29 Guiding bridges 1 years ago
- 30 How far have you fallen by rejecting the light of Terra? 1 years ago
- 31 Death Guard 1 years ago
- 32 The Great Game 1 years ago
- 33 Queen 1 years ago
- 34 Warriors of the Empire 1 years ago
- 35 Darkness in the service of light 1 years ago
- 36 Valerian Gate 1 years ago
- 37 Divide and conquer 1 years ago
- 38 Dead Sands 1 years ago
- 39 The Fall of the Eagle 1 years ago
- 40 One step to the abyss 1 years ago
- 41 Moment of truth 1 years ago
- 42 Epilogue 1 years ago
A good story that begs for more . . . . .