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I’ve read 158 ch so far. Overall the story is pretty good. Mc is very op and his system is stronger than what it should be. I have a few gripes about the story mainly that the author isn’t very strict with the rules of the system. Supposed to be only able to use it so many times a day then uses it a bunch with no explanation the later states the limit increased by 1 use. Mc also so far has not killed any of the people trying to steal is stuff or that know about extremely rare items he has. And they all act like the cliche in the young master do what I say type of cultivators. Mc is also supposed to be low key but then does everything in front of massive amounts of people like crafting a pill that no one else in the world can. Mc gets abilities randomly that he shouldn’t know how to do like creating arrays and weapons. Now the good points of the story. It is translated very well. Mc isn’t so op that he just looks at people and they die. The background story seems pretty interesting. The premise of the system is a good idea. Like your system can correct flaws and such. It’s kind of like library of heavens path but a much stronger system that doesn’t have to cross reference other books to get perfection and effects more than just books and knowledge.
op power (not the good kind), dumb mc, very fast paced. Not worth reading without a serious rewrite. Then there's the writing quality... the story is mostly told to you and lots of little bits are skipped or simply ignored rather than take the time to add a few more words. Usually there's too many words but here is not enough. It's like skipping random cut screens that might have been worth watching
sorry,but u make this story more stupid or else because u r not given importance to mc or not concentrated in developing plot interestingly.
if u asked me to find the difference between a bot and Mc I would say that they are both the same. Mc has zero character development, zero world building. I tried till 20.ch can't read any further.
Make the Mc more dumb please if thats even possible because i'm having a blast reading this it feels like theres no character in the mc at all and the way the story progresses is just boring the Mc actually acts like a bot I don't know how else to explain it like does bro even think or have thoughts???
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World building seems fine at the beginning but up until 100+ chapters the MC is basically either doing wish fulfilment non-stop which is being accepted as normal by the characters around .... OR does not exist for instance the dao whatever at the capital ... he goes in to trade a pill tries to hid that he created the pill .... then goes ahead and concocts one and no one asks him any questions .... THEN decides he will extract a mountain spirit .... but then 3 chapters in a row he only says a line at the end of the chapter .... like he's not the mc ... then a secret realm pops up all of a sudden .... It's like there is no point to the story .... the writing quality is bad at best ... i'm dropping it with great sorrow at the novel had promise in terms of original story plot line buuut some things are soo way out of line that i can't anymore ... have fun trying to read it ....
Not worthy... Just another trash Chinese novel that don't have originality ect ect.... and trashh novel
A hypothetical novel where even the author doesn't know what he writes after writing a chapter. Totally a waste of time. I mean MC extracted all the toxins in his body with the system and a few chapters later he got a pill which extracted his toxins. what is the use of System if it cannot do anything??
First time I’v been forced to drop a review on a novel. Summed up in 3 words. Pile of garbage. The character was all over the place. Levelling system can’t even be considered a system. No explanation on things. World development is awful. I held hope it would get better but nope it got worse and worse with 0 objective or aim. Goes on to say “oh I’ll keep a low profile by not doing this” and next second does the thing he just mentioned not to do. Absolute waste of time.
System Genre : Absorbing Impurities As an old reader the title is very catchy. I love reading System Genre and the novels that I've read exceeded my fingers to count. The first five chapters will give you an excitement as the story goes on. This novel is like the LOHP, correcting the paths but in a way the system could do it in a blink of an eye. The author didn't put a restriction on the system from what chapters I've read(1st 5 chapters). Though it have a 3 uses per day cooldown😂🤦. Anyways, It could absorb flaws at cultivation manuals and arts. I don't know if the introduction is correct even artifacts and pills. I have a wildest imagination from the system. Can MC absorb the flaws from others? The enemy techniques? Lightning Tribulation? Death Energy? So much anticipation that I'm so excited to long read this and patiently to wait the upcoming chapters.
I gave up at chapter 125. Another wasted idea. There were a few ways this could have been handled well but the author is bad at storytelling. They decided to take the route where 99% of the story is just agonizingly tedious filler. Most xuanhuan authors have wised up and will skip straight to the interesting bits, but this story is the complete opposite -- everything from randos chatting to competitors refining pills or weapons is described in excruciating detail. Avoid this one. Don't be tricked by the interesting cheat or the beginning (where it feels like the story is actually going to go somewhere interesting).
This is literally the definition of copy and paste novel, it don't make any fxxking sense.........................................................
it would've been far better if the system didn't just automatically remove all the flaws and he had to work at removing them himself extra characters
A legendary system fell into the hands of a stupid person.. A story on the path of new stories. He finds treasures in the middle of the garbage. This is just silly because he can simply make treasures.. And change that from the irrational thinking like selling the pill at first and he doesn't need it and making a big fuss out of nothing. None of the MC can act intelligently after getting the system
Read, skipped some chapters and finally dropped. Trash. Mc tried to be low-key by performing shocking phenomena that leads to the greed and envy of others yet still calm and indifferent to this since he has the capital to do so afterall although he doesn't have the strength he had the greatest trump card - plot armorssss.
muito bom😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
this is all text to speech Just so you know. this is a very interesting idea for a system but it's written horribly by an author who doesn't know how to Pace a story properly so instead just throws us directly into everything without any explanation and just keeps the pace of the story moving forward with zero time for you to get adjusted to what's happening. we also never know if another day is occurred or how much time has passed or anything like that it's a very unappetizing time frame. the idea is very nice but the author does it horribly by making it so that every single flaw can be made perfect in a sense but the author makes it so that it's literally every single flaw becomes perfect so there's no power scaling for the main character it is as soon as he sees something bad he can make it perfect and then it becomes the best it would ever be and it automatically used by the MC. and when the author doesn't know how to properly write out a story it makes it so that the action not even the action the novel itself is just way too quick after 20 chapters he's already become a person only below a sec leader a master of a clan and somehow knows formations, fighting techniques, has fighting experience, and even knows how to deal with Alchemy when he's only ever learned fighting techniques and cultivation techniques. and he only has ever been in one fight so having the Insight that he does doesn't make sense. this review might seem long and it is but I'm going to add more to it. the characters are all one-dimensional and very bland. and we've already had four or five Encounters of an arrogant young Master getting face slapped by the main character and it's only been 22 chapters. please don't read this novel not only does it hurt my brain but just the fact that such an interesting concept is made horrible absolutely ruins my mood to continue reading any books for the day. once again I'm begging for your own safety don't read
so far I'm fine with the story. Even though it is a bit fast paced, overly confident and overpowered Mc & the mc didn't think so much before he acts, the rest of the story is just fine. I can't help but be curious what happens next
ptoblems not really mentioned by other reviews: 1) mc cultivates once at beginning of story but then never again (atleast until ch 125) 2) and this is my main problem with the story, mc feels emotionless. others cause trouble for him, insult him, try to kill him and he never retaliates. the worst he has done in 125 chapters is to cut the clothes of some people trying to kill him. just unsatisfying to read.
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Genetic OP mc which power levels insanely fast and doesnt have an actual brain or high enough E.Q. to understand basic reasoning and logic. If you can become stronger safely without relying on outside forces, in this case a sect, then who wouldn't in their right mind not do so? This way you dont have anything holding you back and you can also have so much freedom on where to go from there.
Dddndndnword co Word cout is dmb Mxmx xmxmxmxmxmxxmxmxmxxmxnxnxnxbx cnccnxbxbdbdhdxhxhxhxhxbxnxnxjxjxjxjxnxjdjdjdjdjdjduddıdıdjxhwjsjdudjdjdhxnxjxjxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnbxbxbxbxxbxbxbbbahagagagagagagsgsgsgsg
literally one of the worst novels ive ever read. one note characters, super inconsistent characterization (one minute mc wants to be low key and then literally the next chapter he becomes the most famous disciple in the sect). just a truly garbage novel. the author has no business being a writer.
Ugh couldn’t read too far into this one, dudes being low key by throwing top level spirit stones when asked for a mid, in a store that doesn’t usually see higher than mid, then he gives one away for dregs. He wants to be low key but his sword has golden flashes routinely. He extracts all the impurities in his body with his golden finger ability but then takes a high level marrow cleansing pill that will somehow improve his meridians???
I’ve read 158 ch so far. Overall the story is pretty good. Mc is very op and his system is stronger than what it should be. I have a few gripes about the story mainly that the author isn’t very strict with the rules of the system. Supposed to be only able to use it so many times a day then uses it a bunch with no explanation the later states the limit increased by 1 use. Mc also so far has not killed any of the people trying to steal is stuff or that know about extremely rare items he has. And they all act like the cliche in the young master do what I say type of cultivators. Mc is also supposed to be low key but then does everything in front of massive amounts of people like crafting a pill that no one else in the world can. Mc gets abilities randomly that he shouldn’t know how to do like creating arrays and weapons. Now the good points of the story. It is translated very well. Mc isn’t so op that he just looks at people and they die. The background story seems pretty interesting. The premise of the system is a good idea. Like your system can correct flaws and such. It’s kind of like library of heavens path but a much stronger system that doesn’t have to cross reference other books to get perfection and effects more than just books and knowledge.
op power (not the good kind), dumb mc, very fast paced. Not worth reading without a serious rewrite. Then there's the writing quality... the story is mostly told to you and lots of little bits are skipped or simply ignored rather than take the time to add a few more words. Usually there's too many words but here is not enough. It's like skipping random cut screens that might have been worth watching
sorry,but u make this story more stupid or else because u r not given importance to mc or not concentrated in developing plot interestingly.
if u asked me to find the difference between a bot and Mc I would say that they are both the same. Mc has zero character development, zero world building. I tried till 20.ch can't read any further.
Make the Mc more dumb please if thats even possible because i'm having a blast reading this it feels like theres no character in the mc at all and the way the story progresses is just boring the Mc actually acts like a bot I don't know how else to explain it like does bro even think or have thoughts???
Membuka SPOILER World building seems fine at the beginning but up until 100+ chapters the MC is basically either doing wish fulfilment non-stop which is being accepted as normal by the characters around .... OR does not exist for instance the dao whatever at the capital ... he goes in to trade a pill tries to hid that he created the pill .... then goes ahead and concocts one and no one asks him any questions .... THEN decides he will extract a mountain spirit .... but then 3 chapters in a row he only says a line at the end of the chapter .... like he's not the mc ... then a secret realm pops up all of a sudden .... It's like there is no point to the story .... the writing quality is bad at best ... i'm dropping it with great sorrow at the novel had promise in terms of original story plot line buuut some things are soo way out of line that i can't anymore ... have fun trying to read it ....
Not worthy... Just another trash Chinese novel that don't have originality ect ect.... and trashh novel
A hypothetical novel where even the author doesn't know what he writes after writing a chapter. Totally a waste of time. I mean MC extracted all the toxins in his body with the system and a few chapters later he got a pill which extracted his toxins. what is the use of System if it cannot do anything??
First time I’v been forced to drop a review on a novel. Summed up in 3 words. Pile of garbage. The character was all over the place. Levelling system can’t even be considered a system. No explanation on things. World development is awful. I held hope it would get better but nope it got worse and worse with 0 objective or aim. Goes on to say “oh I’ll keep a low profile by not doing this” and next second does the thing he just mentioned not to do. Absolute waste of time.
System Genre : Absorbing Impurities As an old reader the title is very catchy. I love reading System Genre and the novels that I've read exceeded my fingers to count. The first five chapters will give you an excitement as the story goes on. This novel is like the LOHP, correcting the paths but in a way the system could do it in a blink of an eye. The author didn't put a restriction on the system from what chapters I've read(1st 5 chapters). Though it have a 3 uses per day cooldown😂🤦. Anyways, It could absorb flaws at cultivation manuals and arts. I don't know if the introduction is correct even artifacts and pills. I have a wildest imagination from the system. Can MC absorb the flaws from others? The enemy techniques? Lightning Tribulation? Death Energy? So much anticipation that I'm so excited to long read this and patiently to wait the upcoming chapters.
I gave up at chapter 125. Another wasted idea. There were a few ways this could have been handled well but the author is bad at storytelling. They decided to take the route where 99% of the story is just agonizingly tedious filler. Most xuanhuan authors have wised up and will skip straight to the interesting bits, but this story is the complete opposite -- everything from randos chatting to competitors refining pills or weapons is described in excruciating detail. Avoid this one. Don't be tricked by the interesting cheat or the beginning (where it feels like the story is actually going to go somewhere interesting).
This is literally the definition of copy and paste novel, it don't make any fxxking sense.........................................................
it would've been far better if the system didn't just automatically remove all the flaws and he had to work at removing them himself extra characters
A legendary system fell into the hands of a stupid person.. A story on the path of new stories. He finds treasures in the middle of the garbage. This is just silly because he can simply make treasures.. And change that from the irrational thinking like selling the pill at first and he doesn't need it and making a big fuss out of nothing. None of the MC can act intelligently after getting the system
Read, skipped some chapters and finally dropped. Trash. Mc tried to be low-key by performing shocking phenomena that leads to the greed and envy of others yet still calm and indifferent to this since he has the capital to do so afterall although he doesn't have the strength he had the greatest trump card - plot armorssss.
muito bom😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
this is all text to speech Just so you know. this is a very interesting idea for a system but it's written horribly by an author who doesn't know how to Pace a story properly so instead just throws us directly into everything without any explanation and just keeps the pace of the story moving forward with zero time for you to get adjusted to what's happening. we also never know if another day is occurred or how much time has passed or anything like that it's a very unappetizing time frame. the idea is very nice but the author does it horribly by making it so that every single flaw can be made perfect in a sense but the author makes it so that it's literally every single flaw becomes perfect so there's no power scaling for the main character it is as soon as he sees something bad he can make it perfect and then it becomes the best it would ever be and it automatically used by the MC. and when the author doesn't know how to properly write out a story it makes it so that the action not even the action the novel itself is just way too quick after 20 chapters he's already become a person only below a sec leader a master of a clan and somehow knows formations, fighting techniques, has fighting experience, and even knows how to deal with Alchemy when he's only ever learned fighting techniques and cultivation techniques. and he only has ever been in one fight so having the Insight that he does doesn't make sense. this review might seem long and it is but I'm going to add more to it. the characters are all one-dimensional and very bland. and we've already had four or five Encounters of an arrogant young Master getting face slapped by the main character and it's only been 22 chapters. please don't read this novel not only does it hurt my brain but just the fact that such an interesting concept is made horrible absolutely ruins my mood to continue reading any books for the day. once again I'm begging for your own safety don't read
so far I'm fine with the story. Even though it is a bit fast paced, overly confident and overpowered Mc & the mc didn't think so much before he acts, the rest of the story is just fine. I can't help but be curious what happens next
ptoblems not really mentioned by other reviews: 1) mc cultivates once at beginning of story but then never again (atleast until ch 125) 2) and this is my main problem with the story, mc feels emotionless. others cause trouble for him, insult him, try to kill him and he never retaliates. the worst he has done in 125 chapters is to cut the clothes of some people trying to kill him. just unsatisfying to read.
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Genetic OP mc which power levels insanely fast and doesnt have an actual brain or high enough E.Q. to understand basic reasoning and logic. If you can become stronger safely without relying on outside forces, in this case a sect, then who wouldn't in their right mind not do so? This way you dont have anything holding you back and you can also have so much freedom on where to go from there.
Dddndndnword co Word cout is dmb Mxmx xmxmxmxmxmxxmxmxmxxmxnxnxnxbx cnccnxbxbdbdhdxhxhxhxhxbxnxnxjxjxjxjxnxjdjdjdjdjdjduddıdıdjxhwjsjdudjdjdhxnxjxjxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnbxbxbxbxxbxbxbbbahagagagagagagsgsgsgsg
literally one of the worst novels ive ever read. one note characters, super inconsistent characterization (one minute mc wants to be low key and then literally the next chapter he becomes the most famous disciple in the sect). just a truly garbage novel. the author has no business being a writer.
Ugh couldn’t read too far into this one, dudes being low key by throwing top level spirit stones when asked for a mid, in a store that doesn’t usually see higher than mid, then he gives one away for dregs. He wants to be low key but his sword has golden flashes routinely. He extracts all the impurities in his body with his golden finger ability but then takes a high level marrow cleansing pill that will somehow improve his meridians???