My Enchanting System

LV 4

Alen_Tanor

Hello, Sad author is here! I just want to point out some things about the book, novel, story? The good! 1- This is my first time trying to write anything longer than a paragraph, EVEN though, I will do my best to make it an arrow that will pierce the sky! 2- Be it bad or good, I will accept all the commentary and try to respond as much as possible! The bad! 1- As you may have already noticed, English isn't my first language, neither it is the second! It's my third language and I'm still learning to use it! If you find any typos or grammatical gore, feel free to laugh! 2- I have College and a part-time job, that's means I don't have that much time to write and proofread! I will do my best to keep a stable 1 chapter a day! What to expect! 1- The harem, The MC is going to one, and a big one at that! The MC is trying to gather strong people and It just happened to be a bunch of girls! I don't why. 2- The MC is neutral, neither Evil nor good. As long as it helps him he will go for it! 3- System isn't the driving force, It's just a tool in the hand of the MC! What to do before reading? 1- Play some music. 2- If you are on the toilet, be careful to not drop your phone. 3- Make sure you're relaxed. 4- Enjoy 5- Don't forget to support the work, OK?

LV 4

Alen_Tanor

I'm about to have a few days off college so I will start rereading and fixing all the chapters released. The stability of the update won't be changed! I also aim to write a few chapters ahead so I can have more time to proof reading them! Sorry for the grammar gore, and deformed spelling.

LV 1

KappaKappa

Well.. its just meh. The Development and Char design is not really visible in the first chapters. Some might say that this is a bit rushed as a review but I couldnt stand the writing of the novel. Its just ... plain. No engaging or writing with depth. The only thing remarkable is the excessive use of exclamation mark. However if you want to read a story just because you are bored and you dont want to think about it too much, then this might be actually nice, because it progresses nicely.

LV 15

Jonny_Mad

the protagonist is supposed to be a perless ginius in his past life. He had already experienced to be tricked ensalved tortured made a revolution command army and rule empire. Reincarnated he make newbie mistake one after an other and do not think, plan o anithing like this. The girls of the harem lead him around like a pushover. Abolutely 1 dimensional mc

LV 12

UndeadBeing

I'm sad this is harem, the premise seemed good.‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎‏‏‎ ‎

LV 1

JinVonRey

The story is unique, and the plot is progressing nicely. As each event leads to the next one! The MC isn't dumb nor dense, he also knows how to handle his harem well. The world Background seems to have a lot of mysteries around it with each new thing we meet, more about the world gets revealed. Character designs are amazing in my opinion and I hope to one day get to see arts of them, especially Selena. The story seems simple but with each event, it becomes more complex to deal with and I want to know what will happen after the big event that was mentioned from the start (I'm trying my best to avoid spoilers) The stability of updates is amazing with at least 1 chapter a day and the author said he is going to make it 2 chapters a day and that is just commendable for his first work! Writing quality is where he fell a bit short, as grammar needs some work but it wasn't enough to bother me. I will definitely like to see this story rise,

LV 13

Luffyloo

The premise is interesting. The problem is the harem. The women just run over the MC all the time and make his life way more difficult. He basically never gets an opinion.

LV 1

Albert_pause

There isn't a lot do discuss at the point of me writing this review, 7 Chapters. I won't talk about grammar, it happens to the best of us. For character design I could sense they might have twists later on as the MC seems to have beef with some people that he might take a dark turn. For update stability, the author said one chapter a day, and in one of his after thought he mentioned college, so I guess that's the reason. World background we haven't seen a lot of it yet as we are still in the starter town, I won't go in detail as something interesting was mentioned in Chapter 1. Story development is another thing that I think the author is slowly cooking. Overall a great read, still can't be sure until we have more content. I recommend giving this a try.

LV 15

Taylor9189

ok so I give every book 25 chapters before I give an initial rating WQ: honestly this is the biggest negative mark, I understand that English is your 3rd language but you can find a fan of your writing who is proficient in English to come behind and proof and edit someone might even do it for free SD: story progresses at a good pace 5/5 CD: you could spend some more time really bringing the characters alive with more descriptions on their appearance UQ: had to use this to take more off for WQ WB: a little bland on design but still very usable all in all it's a good story but the writing quality is very rough, highly advise coming back and fixing all the mistakes

LV 15

johnopedia

The story is entertaining and I'm enjoying it mostly. There are also some strange spellings that happen constantly. It's VINES not veins, it's PROOF not prof, it's WANDERING not wondering....I could dig up a few more, but I'm too lazy. You may find these word substitutions jarring. I know I do.

LV 13

gamingsus

I saw neko I give it all 5 star without reading before review.As long its neko, its pussycat girl(hold up something is not right here.)Oh I know why NYabe nyako nya nyabi nyabi Nyweh(only legend know this) thats the reason

LV 15

Rocky_Staggs

If you like magic and fantasy with a mix of adult content this is for you. 10/10. Amazing story plot. Only downside is it currently doesn't have 1000+ chapters to enjoy. Glad I found this gem.

LV 4

WarrantyW

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LV 14

William_Alan

Wow. Can't believe I am the first to do this but ok. I want you down. So there. And if you are confused, read the entire synopsis above, the whole thing, And it will make sense. And no I don't own the cover.

LV 2

Kinshikanata

so I come across this story and was like another my system book same stuff, but this one is different I can feel uniqueness. even though grammar is bad the character personas are unique and they seem distinct and also plot is not convenient to protagonist as my writers do while writing, the world background is nice to understand... the only thing I want with character without spoiling story is I beleive few characters have high potential for chara growth I'll look forward to it... but the biggest great point is update stability you rock author updating, thanks for novel I'll enjoy it, ur doing delightful work all the best🍭🧁

LV 1

Lagash

Well.. its just meh. The Development and Char design is not really visible in the first chapters. Some might say that this is a bit rushed as a review but I couldnt stand the writing of the novel. Its just ... plain. No engaging or writing with depth.

LV 1

Yoshitaka_Fukuda

This novel is missing a harem tag. It has the same issues typical harem novels have, which is focusing to much on the women. It’s to the point where it brings down the story and becomes a hassle. The story progresses to slow for me because of it.

LV 4

frosteur

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LV 4

CoolFire12

Hello, new reader here😁. I just wanna say that despite you saying that English is not your first and second language, I can completely understand it, and that I don't need to lose my brain cells unlike other stories that I've read.