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I can say that this fic does have an interesting start and considering this is also a harem that may contain certain girls (cough...Shiro...cough don't call the FBI...cough) from different fandom, i will shamelessly support author-san. The only complain i have is the bad grammar but thanks to my experience with a certain "writerwithbadgrammar" my toleration is legendary so i will still give this fic full support.
Over all I'm really loving the story thus far and I hope you continue this novel and don't drop it like so many before because it makes me sad seeing good works not updating and being forgotten by others
Look, I like the story but it's just like any other. The author also doesn't proofread(as you can see with the spelling and grammatical errors), one thing I also noticed was...he doesn't use commas. ‘Well I guess’ nor periods. Overall, I like it but the lack of punctuation is a turn off for me. I advise using platforms like Grammarly or just outright getting an editor.
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Well Hello Reader!! Shameless Author Here. Pls comment if you have a problem,suggestion and question don't be reserve and comment to your heart content hahaha well, off I go. Bye.
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I can say that this fic does have an interesting start and considering this is also a harem that may contain certain girls (cough...Shiro...cough don't call the FBI...cough) from different fandom, i will shamelessly support author-san. The only complain i have is the bad grammar but thanks to my experience with a certain "writerwithbadgrammar" my toleration is legendary so i will still give this fic full support.
Over all I'm really loving the story thus far and I hope you continue this novel and don't drop it like so many before because it makes me sad seeing good works not updating and being forgotten by others
Look, I like the story but it's just like any other. The author also doesn't proofread(as you can see with the spelling and grammatical errors), one thing I also noticed was...he doesn't use commas. ‘Well I guess’ nor periods. Overall, I like it but the lack of punctuation is a turn off for me. I advise using platforms like Grammarly or just outright getting an editor.
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Well Hello Reader!! Shameless Author Here. Pls comment if you have a problem,suggestion and question don't be reserve and comment to your heart content hahaha well, off I go. Bye.
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