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I understand this is probably going to be taken down for not having perfect rating like most writers do on this app but I just have to be honest. This story started strong and was interesting for a while but at some point it went from a good story with a good premise to an info dump of useless information and glossing over major world events. for whatever reason America became a cowardly nation that accepts being disrespected by China and is scared of a collapsing Spain that is in open Civil War and accepts Americans being murder, despite being this economic and military superpower. It's a story based around the U.S but the only interesting things that are happening is in France. the entire story is constantly being spoiled by the writer because for whatever reason tells you exactly what happens before going into slightly more detail in the next 2 chapters. So everything that goes on in the story doesn't come as a surprise unless you are constantly skipping chapters. The main character was relegated to a side character that is rarely if ever mentioned. After the Revolutionary War this story just falls off hard. Apparently the chapters about the French war is from another writer so most interesting progress that's happening in the story is from someone else.
Author does amazing at writing this. Feel like some of the characters are actually there instead of someone pushing their views onto them. Updates are worth the wait I just got back to 100+ more chapters π And Iβm still waiting for more this story is amazing and I hope it keeps going. Well done. π
This story is a resoundingly awesome work of literature. Dialog, grammar, and action are all great. Very nice work OP, this is super cool.
I'll be honest, I just wish the guy was immortal so he could be the "Watcher" they wanted. tgcfytcrfcrfcyhvytvnbzuirnbfgauiegbnerujgniuganeiru
I just gave this a 4 star because from what I briefly read it has a good grammar. there was no point in revealing that he is from the future like at all. I just read until he said that and I automatically dropped because I donβt like seeing stupid stuff like that. Also from the other review I read it said that he revealed multiple times that he is from the future so itβs a automatic drop for me but if you like mcs revealing theyβre from the future then this is your cup of tea.
Membuka SPOILER
An excellent read! Recently caught up to the latest chapter, will be interesting to find out more about the unnamed benefactor, as well as the potential of a future war with Spain/Gran Colombia over the remaining present-day west-coast America. *Marked as spoiler only because as of right now, I'm not sure if I'm potentially spoiling more of what may lie ahead*
Membuka SPOILER
I would honestly say this story is so enticing. Like the way the story structure is so unique and different from the rest of the novels out there. I really recommend giving this a shot even though it starts off a little bit slow the story really pulls you in. I wonβt give any spoilers but itβs a very different read but definitely recommend.
I really wanted to like this. It was a unique concept but i just found it turning really stupid. He tells so many people he is from the future, which already makes this unbearable. The writing isnt great either. If you dont mind that kind of stuff, give it a shot.
Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!!
sorry but your forgetting one key thing America was founded by pirates, fallen nobles , and corrupt officials. your writing is great but it does not qualify as kingdom building Long Live britain π¬π§
wonderful and unique, well written with good world background and and story development. best novel of the genre I ever read. I can't wait to read the news chapters β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππΎππΎππΎππΎππΎππΎ
This story Is some of the best stuff I ever read and Found on this app or website. It tells how the main character proves himself with improving his relationship with his troops he meets iconic characters like General Arnold and also goes to the future which was affected by Kimβs actions.
Not gonna lie this is pretty underated this needs more attention and please don't jinx me that you will drop this or something.ππππππππ Don't Drop!!!
ΠΠ½Π΅ ΠΎΡΠ΅Π½Ρ Π½ΡΠ°Π²ΠΈΡΡΡ ΡΡΠ° ΠΈΡΡΠΎΡΠΈΡ, ΡΠ΄Π°ΡΠΈ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ a[img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΠΎΠ²Π°ΡΡ]πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I have completely read your thread on the Alternate History wiki.. Didn't know that you have posted it on Royal Road too!! Well, happy to see this gem of an ASB storyline here.. :D
I really like I first found it on Scrabblehub and have really enjoyed it. I like how he doesn't try and rule with an iron fist or try to keep the knowledge to himself and all the inventions.
Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.
Amazing all I gotta say but it sucks that itβs no longer updated and no update abt what happened either.
I understand this is probably going to be taken down for not having perfect rating like most writers do on this app but I just have to be honest. This story started strong and was interesting for a while but at some point it went from a good story with a good premise to an info dump of useless information and glossing over major world events. for whatever reason America became a cowardly nation that accepts being disrespected by China and is scared of a collapsing Spain that is in open Civil War and accepts Americans being murder, despite being this economic and military superpower. It's a story based around the U.S but the only interesting things that are happening is in France. the entire story is constantly being spoiled by the writer because for whatever reason tells you exactly what happens before going into slightly more detail in the next 2 chapters. So everything that goes on in the story doesn't come as a surprise unless you are constantly skipping chapters. The main character was relegated to a side character that is rarely if ever mentioned. After the Revolutionary War this story just falls off hard. Apparently the chapters about the French war is from another writer so most interesting progress that's happening in the story is from someone else.
Author does amazing at writing this. Feel like some of the characters are actually there instead of someone pushing their views onto them. Updates are worth the wait I just got back to 100+ more chapters π And Iβm still waiting for more this story is amazing and I hope it keeps going. Well done. π
This story is a resoundingly awesome work of literature. Dialog, grammar, and action are all great. Very nice work OP, this is super cool.
I'll be honest, I just wish the guy was immortal so he could be the "Watcher" they wanted. tgcfytcrfcrfcyhvytvnbzuirnbfgauiegbnerujgniuganeiru
I just gave this a 4 star because from what I briefly read it has a good grammar. there was no point in revealing that he is from the future like at all. I just read until he said that and I automatically dropped because I donβt like seeing stupid stuff like that. Also from the other review I read it said that he revealed multiple times that he is from the future so itβs a automatic drop for me but if you like mcs revealing theyβre from the future then this is your cup of tea.
Membuka SPOILER An excellent read! Recently caught up to the latest chapter, will be interesting to find out more about the unnamed benefactor, as well as the potential of a future war with Spain/Gran Colombia over the remaining present-day west-coast America. *Marked as spoiler only because as of right now, I'm not sure if I'm potentially spoiling more of what may lie ahead*
Membuka SPOILER I would honestly say this story is so enticing. Like the way the story structure is so unique and different from the rest of the novels out there. I really recommend giving this a shot even though it starts off a little bit slow the story really pulls you in. I wonβt give any spoilers but itβs a very different read but definitely recommend.
I really wanted to like this. It was a unique concept but i just found it turning really stupid. He tells so many people he is from the future, which already makes this unbearable. The writing isnt great either. If you dont mind that kind of stuff, give it a shot.
Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!!
sorry but your forgetting one key thing America was founded by pirates, fallen nobles , and corrupt officials. your writing is great but it does not qualify as kingdom building Long Live britain π¬π§
wonderful and unique, well written with good world background and and story development. best novel of the genre I ever read. I can't wait to read the news chapters β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππΎππΎππΎππΎππΎππΎ
This story Is some of the best stuff I ever read and Found on this app or website. It tells how the main character proves himself with improving his relationship with his troops he meets iconic characters like General Arnold and also goes to the future which was affected by Kimβs actions.
Not gonna lie this is pretty underated this needs more attention and please don't jinx me that you will drop this or something.ππππππππ Don't Drop!!!
ΠΠ½Π΅ ΠΎΡΠ΅Π½Ρ Π½ΡΠ°Π²ΠΈΡΡΡ ΡΡΠ° ΠΈΡΡΠΎΡΠΈΡ, ΡΠ΄Π°ΡΠΈ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ a[img=ΡΠ΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΠΎΠ²Π°ΡΡ]πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I have completely read your thread on the Alternate History wiki.. Didn't know that you have posted it on Royal Road too!! Well, happy to see this gem of an ASB storyline here.. :D
I really like I first found it on Scrabblehub and have really enjoyed it. I like how he doesn't try and rule with an iron fist or try to keep the knowledge to himself and all the inventions.
Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.
Amazing all I gotta say but it sucks that itβs no longer updated and no update abt what happened either.