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you Die One day because of A bored God who wanted some entertainment,
'hi, my name is Sig So I just died and got 3 wishes what a cruel God all because he was bored to can you believe that I had to Die because of a bored god this isn't gonna be vengeance after all why waste my time on that.
( Tower of God is not mine it belongs to SIU I recommend it its development is good If I Am asked to Take this down the art work of the cover also does not belong to me
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Tulis ulasanYou should work with character development..................................................................................................
Bad Grammer, confusing plot, over overpowered, and more just skip this not worth the time to try and get into.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
One of the only tog fan fics, so there isnโt much to compare to, but is readable, the character development could be better, but is a fic so is alright. The update are slow.
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The writing quality is subpar and at times incomprehensible to understand. Never have I read a novel so inconsequentially writen that causes a reader to loose braincells after reading a paragraph. Author needs to use a grammar checker or needs to get a proofreader
Most of tower of god fanfic are abandoned or forgotten this is the master piece i have ever seen keep up the good work and make sure write everyone character reaction when he does something terriying
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You need to put more work in sig development.come on author nobody likes to see start from zero again he worked so hard to go up to the train and now . see it all is messed up because of his arrogance and only relaying on the soldiers of his . he didn't worked hard on his physical strength and where the hell was thron to slay the jahad . He didn't even use a part of thron . In all of tower of god in original bam worked hard to the bone . And our mc sig he is carefree and didn't train to use the thron that he got . And in last he sees how his loved one died . And you give him a new start . And see how much mistakes you have made . His connection and relationships in the start with yuri who is important now we won't even know that he will get black march . and his relationship with yuri ha , we won't know that yuri ha will go into harem . Personally i want you to add her . because if she won't help bam with black march he wont pass the test . And now the relationship between them is just acquntances.Now I am more disappointed in the Mc because he is too forgetful and hell he didn't even use the power of thron how can he be fool like this he is too stupid for someone who has unlocked his brain full capacity as a wish it is wasted and now he is liked a disappointment. instead necromancer power you should have given power of shadow monarch , gojo satoru or sukuna he is too bad at melee fight . I think if he fight jahad again now he will again die or lose too much .
It is a good fanfic. but it need to increase it's pace . the story should be focused more on development of sig character . And as a reader i want to see different character development of sig than bam in tower of god . because in starting of tower of god bam was shy but was brave and he was saved from every situation or danger because of his plot armor . so sig should be more powerful than bam . and he should not be shy around people and he should be a smooth talker with girls . And lastly i wanna ask the writer about who will add in the harem . My personal favourite is (Hwyuren, endorassi ,yihwa,kaiser, yuri ,and twins from lo po bia ) i wanna see them as the girls of Sig . because he is not a herbivore like bam . Please writer do this as a wish from a reader or you can ask for a poll for the harem member for Sig.
My Reviews and position seem to have been deleted so I'll do this again after all I need to. First off I am a native English speaking none of my work is translate I've taken up older books that are hyper power books and Properly redone them in my own style not to take away from the author themself most of those translation works are MTL and abandoned My Stability in Updates is very precise typical Every 10 days if it change something must've happened or I went on break which usually never happens with this specific books My Story is really bad up until the most recent arc where I updated the pacing restarted the whole thing so the most concurrent Arc He is at the starting point. So the first expanse of arcs in tower of god back to the floor of test and filtering system as well as the starting plotline, since I restarted it I took a very different perspective to his power and how he'll become even stronger. Now For Character design I am very heavily Working on it, in fact I am in the process of setting up the currently introduced Harem remember I will not mention what i am doing but I am using the wiki to base some of my trait I just have to practice with the sentencing Schemes. My world building this is a fanfiction on tower of god however I have already expanded quite a bit on the world to a degree as it still in the beginning expanse. So In summary, I heavily change my approach to how powerful my character are he is now very powerful but also highly intelligent for the main Protagonist and his harem member are not just trophies I have yet to entirely introduce the characteristics I compiled to them.
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its kinda written by an imbecile, no grammar, world building, nothing, dobt waste you time with this one guys and gals, just move on and have a happy life