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well, all the tags are true, but it'll will be more perfect to add "OP mc" "little insane" "bit of comedy" that's all, Thanks for the fanfiction and Good luck to you ya Author 👍👍👍
not even in story form, just mc op benefiting others, when he can do it without having to give anything away, then looking for a harem just to benefit them, it sucks.
So it is another reincarnation after being given a choice fanfic.Basicly our mc chooses to travel various worlds build a harem and kill everyone in his way.
Everything in here is developed well i would like to see more of this Novels when its uploaded Its story is good even though its in the DxD world using an Anos Voldigord Name
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Author tries to include everything but those random additions of other things in a world are not something I prefer. Even though I'm not religious, this novel basically blatantly attacks a few, I personally am not a fan of stuff like this. The reason for this is that nowadays every chinese novel I read does blatantly humiliate other religions and culture and I am sick and tired of this. I couldn't continue to read more and basically stopped at the Dxd arc itself. The author may also not have background in English, so you'll be finding errors here and there and a lot of repetition too.
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Easily one the best DxD fic out there even though it really isn’t solely DxD story itself. Great writing quality with little or minor mistakes here and there occasionally. Great updating stability as well and an amazing world background due to nigh-seamless connection of different anime verse’s concepts. Really love the story’s concepts, but can be really confusing at the start especially without a clear homogenous power levels so far introduced across the cosmos. Especially love the attention to details given so far in the story which increases its quality for me greatly and I hope it continues to do so till the end of story. Still, there’s a lot of questions needed to be answered and mysteries to be solved which is also one of the reasons making the story great due to anticipation and the mystery itself. Thank you for this amazing work.
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tbh with you, after reading the first few pages this story has to offer... it's not good, the word 'after' is being used over and over again like there's no tomorrow, the next second I noticed that, I immediately dropped this. by just seeing that the word ''after" is being overly used, it tells me that the author's vocabulary isn't that large. well, that's all, I do respect you for still updating, compared to me that drops whatever I'm writing when I get bored, so yeah, this is my review.
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I am giving this fanfic 5 star rating just bcoz of mc being Anos voldigoad 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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Niiiiiceee Very good as always Keep do chapters my man ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
.... What the #### did I read? There is a lot of explanation how mc powers works. What his powers is. A lot of talk between side characters how mc is exponentially strong and all of this. Unnecessary long prologue which could be skipped and used in flashbacks, because interactions with characters sucks anyway. And all of this power and preparation... for what? For mc that have no character. At all. You can't even describe him aside his powers and looks. The same with the story. He meet characters, he talks with them...either they are future harem members and he give away op powers for them, or he just walks away. That's the whole story... There is no story, that's freaking op mc character sheet with harem members list. But not an actual story. Because nothing is happening and nothing have any meaning behind this. So, what did I read? I don't know....
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Good novel 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I'm loving it so far. Though I am hoping he doesn't spend much time in cultivation world's, and by hoping I mean please🙏. Anyway anything that has Anos Voldigoad as the MC along with all his powers and abilities is destined to be good. Though I must know, who shall be in the harem?
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My soul for multiverse The god bow to me I m the one will become cosmic of harem All waifu for me and the man will hate me for eternity I will life Never gave a chance to someone that arrogant your kind to me ,I kind to you You devil ,I devil to Bad or good , only our will that can show us Human are fragile but full of potential Never bow to someone because our lives ,there only one king Btw good fanfic ,I m just bored so kind of release otaku side hahahaha
well well well i found my new favorite fic at least for now . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
well, all the tags are true, but it'll will be more perfect to add "OP mc" "little insane" "bit of comedy" that's all, Thanks for the fanfiction and Good luck to you ya Author 👍👍👍
not even in story form, just mc op benefiting others, when he can do it without having to give anything away, then looking for a harem just to benefit them, it sucks.
So it is another reincarnation after being given a choice fanfic.Basicly our mc chooses to travel various worlds build a harem and kill everyone in his way.
Everything in here is developed well i would like to see more of this Novels when its uploaded Its story is good even though its in the DxD world using an Anos Voldigord Name
Membuka SPOILER Author tries to include everything but those random additions of other things in a world are not something I prefer. Even though I'm not religious, this novel basically blatantly attacks a few, I personally am not a fan of stuff like this. The reason for this is that nowadays every chinese novel I read does blatantly humiliate other religions and culture and I am sick and tired of this. I couldn't continue to read more and basically stopped at the Dxd arc itself. The author may also not have background in English, so you'll be finding errors here and there and a lot of repetition too.
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Easily one the best DxD fic out there even though it really isn’t solely DxD story itself. Great writing quality with little or minor mistakes here and there occasionally. Great updating stability as well and an amazing world background due to nigh-seamless connection of different anime verse’s concepts. Really love the story’s concepts, but can be really confusing at the start especially without a clear homogenous power levels so far introduced across the cosmos. Especially love the attention to details given so far in the story which increases its quality for me greatly and I hope it continues to do so till the end of story. Still, there’s a lot of questions needed to be answered and mysteries to be solved which is also one of the reasons making the story great due to anticipation and the mystery itself. Thank you for this amazing work.
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Membuka SPOILER tbh with you, after reading the first few pages this story has to offer... it's not good, the word 'after' is being used over and over again like there's no tomorrow, the next second I noticed that, I immediately dropped this. by just seeing that the word ''after" is being overly used, it tells me that the author's vocabulary isn't that large. well, that's all, I do respect you for still updating, compared to me that drops whatever I'm writing when I get bored, so yeah, this is my review.
Mantap gan ane mau jual biar nambah damek pas gelud di dunia pararel pada konektor yang mau Coba di dunia pararel pada konektor yang mau Coba di dunia pararel pada konektor yang mau Coba di dunia pararel pada konektor yang mau Coba di dunia pararel pada konektor yang mau Coba di dunia pararel pada konektor yang mau Coba di dunia pararel pada konektor yang mau Coba di dunia pararel pada konektor yang mau Coba di dunia pararel
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Membuka SPOILER I am giving this fanfic 5 star rating just bcoz of mc being Anos voldigoad 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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Niiiiiceee Very good as always Keep do chapters my man ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
.... What the #### did I read? There is a lot of explanation how mc powers works. What his powers is. A lot of talk between side characters how mc is exponentially strong and all of this. Unnecessary long prologue which could be skipped and used in flashbacks, because interactions with characters sucks anyway. And all of this power and preparation... for what? For mc that have no character. At all. You can't even describe him aside his powers and looks. The same with the story. He meet characters, he talks with them...either they are future harem members and he give away op powers for them, or he just walks away. That's the whole story... There is no story, that's freaking op mc character sheet with harem members list. But not an actual story. Because nothing is happening and nothing have any meaning behind this. So, what did I read? I don't know....
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Good novel 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I'm loving it so far. Though I am hoping he doesn't spend much time in cultivation world's, and by hoping I mean please🙏. Anyway anything that has Anos Voldigoad as the MC along with all his powers and abilities is destined to be good. Though I must know, who shall be in the harem?
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Membuka SPOILER ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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My soul for multiverse The god bow to me I m the one will become cosmic of harem All waifu for me and the man will hate me for eternity I will life Never gave a chance to someone that arrogant your kind to me ,I kind to you You devil ,I devil to Bad or good , only our will that can show us Human are fragile but full of potential Never bow to someone because our lives ,there only one king Btw good fanfic ,I m just bored so kind of release otaku side hahahaha
well well well i found my new favorite fic at least for now . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
one of the best fan fic i have ever read but where are you author?